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sirivalli

@sirivalli.t

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#291

Awesome update...

Loved it...

Eagerly waiting for d next part...

Thanks for d pm...

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#292

Amazing update dear please update soon

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SushSush

@SushSush

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Intresting.. continue soon.. pm me when u update... so.. A is girl.. but whatsup wid this soulmate thing.. she wants to spend her life wid a girl???.. confused.. eagerly waiting fr some more clarity in future updates..

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Anaswara

@anaswara93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Awesome Update👏⭐️😃

Thank God they didn't kissed😎

Loved Arnav's entry☺️

And who pushed Khushi😕???Was that Arnav❤️🥳?

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Arunima

@barsha_dash

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#295

S here enters Arnav Singh Raizada. Waiting to see Arnav and Khushi's first meet.

Lavanya and Khushi's friendship is cool but I hope that their friendship will be beyond the four walls of hostel room.😊

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#296

Loved it.. A perfect start.. Waiting to see if it was Arnav..

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

Oh my ...dat was dasu part...
waise lemme comment for 1st part ...last time i commented pata nahi kaha gayab ho gaya mera comment

Reading 1st part..the first thing popped to my mind was...who is dis A...is Arn...Chotu...all one person kya😳😳
loved how she describes evertythin...to A...nd lol😆😆😆 nk ka cute confession on for her spending those prescious minutes in libbrary wit A...

La...she is jus a perfect friend yaar..
cute n bubbly...
khusi seems really jelled wit the enviornment of the campus...nd looks more fresh

Oh i was😲😲 shocked to know she is staying wit her father ..seems like she has come to in terms wit ...her father ..nd has adjusted to dis life of hers..wit new family...
oh..for a change..here...Akash is khushi ka bro,..nd love d bonding dey share wit each other..

nd here already she doesnt want to know abt her mom nd neither have accepted garima as her mom..

hmm...lets see wats in store ...eagerly waitn for MR..A😳😳😉😉

COMMIN TO 2ND PART...

😲😲 I SHOULD HAVE THOUGHT...HAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!.UR TWISTY MIND ...MR A is not HE i mean she is talking to someone ..girl or lady..😲 correct me if I am wrong..coz see wat my mind has come up wit it..heheh😆😆

is she dis A ...Admirer to whom she spills all d details...by any way her mom...
nd she too is unaware ..of the same ...
it is jus a random thought...coz...i think..she havent seen her mom..nd i guess..dat she had left her..nd not died na... okay i dont remember wat was told abt her mom in prologue...
nd i ll not again read..d prologue..coz dat made me cry...

😭
nd also one more thing..Garima too knows about dis A...so daal main pakka kuch kaala hai..
yeah phir ..puri daal hi kaali hai😆😆😆
Nd if dis A is totally a diffrent person...heheheheh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! den i can see u 🤣 laughnng on my stupid thought..

La...she is so cute..yaar..loved her talk...wit khushi...she was so cheering her..bt khushi here is like a mini version of MR ASR...full on attitude..
so la is tryin to hook khusi wit ...Aman...
oh she got tipsy in party...nd i think aman wont take...advantageof khushi ka dis state...😡

Oh my. apna...Hero aagaya..nd ..u addressed Arnav as Alpha...hahahah!!!!!!!!!!!!!... mujhe...werewolf ki yaad aaggai...😆...Seems like ..he is cool guy as we wanted...
so the knight in Shinning Armour has arived to save his damsel in distress...
waise she already is in dipsy situation...
And who pulled her in darkness...is he d Alpha or dat aman wit bad intention...
of course..i will b confused na..to know..coz u mentioned about ASR in d last...
nd pulling happenend b4 dat😕😕

Amazing part...
cont soon..left at a cliffhanger...
ll be wiaitn..
waitn..

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#298

awesome part👏

lovedd ittt😳

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#299

ok i m back bt tym lagega per pm rply isn't an easy task
first cngrats for new ff
beautiful name
the white rainbw, is it relatd wid dance?
Prologue intrsting n i m hookd n cmpltly bukd up 4 dis ff...lol..
Grany died bt smthng is hidden bt wat..
Going towards nxt

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
ok i m back bt tym lagega per pm rply isn't an easy task
first cngrats for new ff
beautiful name
the white rainbw, is it relatd wid dance?
Prologue intrsting n i m hookd n cmpltly bukd up 4 dis ff...lol..
Grany died bt smthng is hidden bt wat..
Going towards nxt

Oh Sair darling...Indeed...I wonder how you came up with this interpretation...but yes..this could be one amongst the many references to the title!

Well, who am I kidding...you have many a times decoded my well planned mazes...hehe

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Edited by shalini.ranjan - 10 years ago