JITNE DOOR....UTNE PAAS[ARSH FF -ARSHI FF]part2 and 3 PG 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyaaa guysss...
M Priya...u all can call me Pri...I was getting super duper bore...while studying law..arhhh...its such a dangerous n boring subject...it really give me nightmares..so yeah...where was I haan...so while studying...I had suddenly thought of this concept...I really have no idea if u like it or not...waise most of them read my stories...n dont commt...or even press a like tab...for whatever damm reasons...but anyway...I still write...for myself...coz its my passion...I may not be excellent writers like others here...but still...I try penning down my thoughts in my own way...it gives me statisfaction...and also I love and respect my readers a lot...who support...even though m nt so good writer...like others here...
okkk...now enough of my blabbering...coming to the point...
here I go with my story...Its on arshi from ipkknd and arsh from dmg...m a die hard fan of both...hope u all support me this time with ur cmnt and likes...n I wont get dissapointed...but even if I dont enough likes...I wont get discouraged...as someone says...kee3p trying...untill u succeed...so I vl do that...


PROLOGUE

"jaldi chal na chutki...mujhe shooting dekhni hai...dekh na kitni bheer ho gyi hai...mujhe kuch dikhayi hi nhi de raha hai"A girl said while dragging her younger sister with her...
"ohoh...di...kya kar rahe ho...mujhe nhi dekhni iski shooting...kitni overacting karta hai...pata nhi apne aapko kaha ka maharaja samajhta hai"the younger sister said annoyingly...
"ssshhh chup...itna nhi bol...dekh aagaya mera hero...haayee mera Rajkumar"the girl said while admiring him cutely and kept her hands joined under her chin...and blew a flying kiss...muaaahhh...

on one side this two girls were arguing and on the other side the public was going mad and out of control seeing him...the securities were having a tough time handling the public...

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"did I not say to clear all the created rumours...then why the hell people are still gossiping about it"the guy shouted at his pa...
"sir actually I tri..."pa trying clear his statement but..
"no I dont want tohear anything...i just wa2nt results...anyhow...get that straight in ur head...
The pa was literally shivering after hearing his boss outburst...and quickly fled from there to complete the task on hand...
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I KNOW CONFUSING RIGHT...EVEN M CONFUSED AFTER WRITING IT...BUT DONT WORRY I VL CLEAR ALL THE CONFUSIONS IN FIRST PART...

AND GUYS...THIS A VERY ROMANTIC JOURNEY...WITH A BIT OF TWIST HERE AND THERE...AND MAY HAVE LOTS OF INTENSE PARTS IN COMING UPDATES...WHICH VL BE MENTIONED IN THE STARTING OF A PART...

NOW TELL ME IF U WANT ME TO CONTINUE


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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting nd confusing start yaar kuch samajh nahi aya *pout*
anyways the girls r talking abt a superstar one girl is drooling over him nd other is irritated with him
nnd now on the other hand a guy is fully angry on his pa
i guess the girls are talking abt him only
but one if this is arshi ff then don't pm me yaar coz i m not arshi fan
pm me if its arsh plz
thank u :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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VERY CONFUSING ...BUT I AM WILLING TO READ...DO PM ME WHEN YOU WILL UPDATE
SanKsgian thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IS IT LIKE KITNE DOOR KITNE PAAS????
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED ARMAN AND SHILPA...BUT PEOPLE DON'T WRITE ABOUT THEM ANYMORE
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANKS FOR WRITING ON THEM...MADE ME MISS DMG
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow dear...
its awesome and mind blowing concept.. m
just loved it...
i love arsh...
do continue soon...
and thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗 R,,,,,,,,,,,,,


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Posted: 10 years ago
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heya guys...how r u all???I know m so early right...but what to do I just cAnt stay away from IFfor tooo long...n u know I had my law paper today...n it went awesome..so thought of updating...so pray all my exams go well n I vl give u a part...deal..;)


PART 1

"Nani why dont u understand...I dont want to get married so soon...I mean I never want to get married..its such a waste of time"the boy spitted angrily ad brushed his hair back...he was dam too frustated with the same topic again and again...
"beta main kaha keh rahi hu aapse avi shaadi karne ko...par ek baar larki ko to dekh lo...kya pata shayad aapko pasand aa jaye"his nani said tryig to coax him to say yes...
"jab mujhe shaadi hi nhi karni to main kyu dekhu...aur waise vi shaadi karke what benefit will I get..."the man said stating his pov...
"har cheez benefit ke liye nhi hoti chote...kuch cheeze dusro ke liye vi karni parti hai"his di tried explaining him.
"why dont u people understand...I just dont want to spoil my life...Its such a waste of time...and tell me who is happy after getting married...give me one single name in our family..look at u di...u r a divorcee...u married that scumbag...but what did u get...he left u after getting u pregnant...isn't it?.arnav said while banging the table...
"chote aap humse aise baat nhi kar sakte...aur hume kya mila shaadi se aur kya nhi...iski fikr aap mat hi kariye..aur rahi baat hamare husband ki...to unhone hume is duniya ki sabse bari khushi di hai...hamari beti Piya"Anjali,his sister said angrily...she was just plain annoyed ber her brother's thinking now...
"so this is all about kids right...that I can get u without marriage too."Arnav said while stating his fact...
"chote...his sister shouted...aap ko.hoah vi hai aap kya keh rahe hain...aap ab itne bare vi nhi hue ki aap hume aise ulte jawab de...Anjali shouted while pointing a finger at him...
Nani who was the silent spectator till now shouted while putting a hand on her ears...
"bas ab yahi reh gaya tha sune ko...aap dono ko sharam ani chahiye aise bacho ki tarah larte hue...kya aapko jara vi andaza aaj aap ki.maa jinda hoti to kaisa lagta unhe...wo kabhi apne bache ko aise larte nhi dekh sakti.."nani completed her sentence with a bruef pause...
"acha hi hua wo aaj nhi hai nani...umhe apne pati ki bewafai to dekhne ko na mili..."Arnav said whike controlling his tears
"chote aaj aap ne had kardi...humne kavi aaoke muh se yeh na sunna chaha tha"Anjali said while sobbing.
"kya nahi sunna chati di aap...yahi ki hame so called father ne ek biwi ke rehte hue hamari maa se nazyaz rushta rakha...hume to unka saya kavi mila hi nhi di...ya fir ye ki wo aur koi nhi unki saali thi...aur aap chahti hai ki maa ko yeh sab pata chalna tha"Arnav said while banging the table and moved out...of the house...
here Anjali and nani kept staring at his retreating back...
"naani maa pati nhi sab kab thik hoga...hamare saath hi aisa kyu."aap janti hai na yeh sach nhi hai..iame maasi ki vi kou galti nhi hai..yeh sabto halat ke kaaran hua...par chote kuch samajhne ko tayaar hi nhi..Anjali broke down andcried hugging her nani shoulder
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"chalka chalka re kalsi ka pani...ohoh..."the girl was singing her fav song on top of her voice...while eating kesar kulfi(yumm even I feel like having it now)
"maiyaa bole jaana ni bhaiya ko vi maana nhi..babul bole bas ek din"another girl i.eher younger sister joined her in singing...
the girls were back home after watching the shooting while one was toatally flat over the hero...and the younger one was making a yucky face...
but their happiness were short lived..as their mother was standing on the entrance of their house hands crossed and asked them sternly"kaha the tum dono..itni der hogayi...par tumlog ka kuch pata hi nhi...subah se gayabho ho...itne bare ho gaye ho fir vi kuch akal nhi ayi tumdone main...kal ki shaado hogi to tum done ne to meri naak kata dana hai.ab bolo vi...kyu chup ho...their mother was blabbering on and on...but who cares...maa ka to kaam hota hai daantna...islie ek kaan se sunodusre kaan se nikaal do.and the same case was with thisgirls...they were trying hatd not to laugh...
the elder one put a hand around her moter's shoulder and saidcteasingly..."wahi hona hai jo manjure khuda hona hai"
"khushiii"their mother looked at them wide eyed
whilecthe youngercone whos was contrillingcher laugh...burst out laughing...
"khushi aur shilpa bas...aaj to tum dono ki kher nhi...ruko avi tum dono"thir mother ran intovthe kitchen and brought a belan to hit them...while both the girls ran for their life...the house was ful of laughter...unknownvthe storm comingvsoon into their lives...
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aaahh...hhmmm...plzz...harder...the girl was moaning loudly...and the boy's head was covered under the duvet and his hamds were on the sides of girls fave while girls were scratching his back...

"CUUUTTT"the director shouted...
"brilliant guys...mindblowing job...what a scene...it was perfect..."
Armaan u did a fantastic job...thanku for agreeing to it at the last moment
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Armaan who was sitting on the bed with the heroine ad was looking unaffected by such scenes...Armaan was going to say something but stopped by his pa...who wishpered something in his ears...and Armaan then got up...wore his robe and headed towords his vanity van...as someone was waiting for him there...
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taddaaa...I have updated the first part...yipieee...plz ignore typos annd mistakes..
I hope the last bit was not vulgur...if it is do tell me..
I hope u like it...do press like tab and comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting and confusing


start soon don't want to miss out

please pm me from next update

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