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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Arshi67



Many many congratulations on the well deserved new thread my love 🥳

Choti, yet again you floor me with your ability to portray so much by not having your protagonists say much at all. As Rumi said, "In Silence there is eloquence. Stop weaving and see how the pattern improves." Them just being with each other leading to a beautiful slow realisation, and acceptance, of their feelings for the other. Culminating in them "listening" to the other. The slash of red struggling out from behind the night sky. Albeit a streak on the horizon just now, but there nevertheless. A promise of the burst of golden hues to follow.

The desire was there the last time he watched her eat pani puri as well but now there is loving indulgence as well. A voluntary aiding by getting the chai. I'm loving how their relationship is moving on. Every bit of this will be needed when she comes to know of NK. Kya hoga?

If looks could kill! Poor Happyji! But he saw the love in the eyes of the Pardesi. And Khushi couldn't wait to start reading ;)


@blue:



@pink: that certainly isn't reminiscent of anyone... 😆

@bold: for God's sake, Princess, write already! 😆 You are astoundingly good with words- and you always pick out just the right sentiment. That was a beautiful, beautiful line. I love your comments, but I love you even more.


P.S.: Y... muchas gracias por las felicitaciones! Espero que tenga muchas ma's! Siempre estoy agobiada de su amor para mi. Me inspiras. Te amo, Princesa! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Chokri_ASR

YAY!!! A new dhaga... 🥳

Congratulations on Thread three, and here's to many many more! You and your kickass story deserve it!





Ahhh yet another wonderful update... and I loved it for many reasons.

Silence... the way Arnav and Khushi use that communicating is pretty remarkable... words aren't needed, but they understand the other. Wonder if many people in that era where that way. We tend to use techonology as an communication method in this day and age, that we forget how to relate to people in front of us. One thing is for sure, I will keep this in mind for time to come.


Happyji is just the sweetest, isn't he? And the fact that Arnav is still glaring at him makes me laugh. 😆 I actually loved this scene, as he accompanied her to the shop, took her out of the house. It was sweet.

And their much needed open and honest conversation, why where they want to settle is important to them... finally the other knows, and I think this will be the key for their relationship to move forward.


What I left with this chapter is Hope for the couple, but your descriptions of India, the food, the smell, makes me want to visit and look at it through your eyes... how do you execute words and emotions so perfectly?

You are pretty amazing my baccha... I wish I can hug you today, but since I can't hope this gif will do. 🤗



@blue: You, you, you are just the most fantastic person because you get me! You always do, but this time- goddamn it, YES! These two (on the show) were aces at silent communication:






No words needed, amirite? 😉 😳


P.S.: That hug GIF won't do But it'll have to... sigh. I miss you, Didi. Hamesha your baccha ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Though I've made another country my home, this chapter made me homesick for India. The smells, the noise, the crowds of innumerable humanity, missed it all.

Another lovely chapter,Choti.
Congratulations on the new thread.
You deserve many more such threads on this wonderful story.

Both Khushi and Arnav are coming closer.
They are making an effort to understand each other.
Wonder what'll happen when they are told about NK's martyrdom!
How will they both react to this news?
I'll be waiting to know. When is the next update? 😃


Oh man. The nostalgia while writing those parts of the update... sigh.


Another country has always been my home, but India holds a special, special place for me. Getting off the plane is like coming home all over again- and I love it.


Videshi anda, desi murgi 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Absolutely loved the update!
I know it might sound wrong but I kind of don't want them to find out about NK...
I fear it can only have a detrimental effect on their relationship.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I think Jigs said it - hope is the cardinal point in this update. It is that "hamesha' aspect of Arnav and Khushi - that hope that these two characters kindle when the rest of us can never see. You've kindled it for us here and you did it with humor and camaraderie.

It seems to so easy for these two to fight and make up with no residual bitterness after their fights. It is nice (nyc! 😉) to walk away from this update with that good feeling.

Good going author friend..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
That was a beautiful update! They are slowly feeling comfortable with each other - Arnav is still protective, accompanies her to the book store and even eats golgoppas with her :-) Naughty Khushi, making him sit there and watch her eat!
But the end kind of made me wonder if this is the calm before the storm - they both think they understand each other, but are they at cross purposes?

And there is still the matter about NK - Khushi still does not know about him. It was inevitable, considering the circumstances at that time in pre-independent India. But will Khushi be rational about it or react negatively against Arnav?


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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awesome update. .

Loved the silent communication between Arnav and Khushi. . They are so attunt to each other that they don't words..

Happyji is so sweet. . And Arnav quite scared him with his sharp gaze... Only khushi doesn't get affected by it.. 😉

Last part was Beautiful. . The way they both tried to understand each other's perspective... And found peace with their difference. . Its a good start..

Loved the update. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Congrats on new thread...
Such a beautiful update...
Much needed conversation between arnav and khushi... khushi wants to know why arnav wants to move back to london and arnav listens to khushi's reasons of staying in india...
Hope this will help them to understand eachother better in future...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Just caught this story n i must say this story is awesome dear
Very well written each n every chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for the pm😉

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