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l.savitree

@l.savitree

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#891

hey you update with a such fabulous chapter love it

more & more interesting & learning more about each one

love the way khushi jumped away from his friend with only one look of arnav

Hope you update soon

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Nice to know about Arnav's family life.

Looking forward to Arnav and Khushi sitting down and addressing their issues like mature people.

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srmirji

@srmirji

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#893

wohoo an update...excellent...though I am yet to read it...Anony you should give your updates on a new thread for each chapter as readers will flock the thread with lot of comments :)

this comment is for the last chapter, where I felt you have clearly portrayed Khushis importance in Arnavs life and the way his being depends on her existence...

At the same time I get hints from the update that even Arnavs presence is significant in Khushis life...her emotions did get revealed when La made an entry and NK said Bhabi (which was mistook to be Arnavs fiance) while it was Amans girl...I felt Khushi's breath was paused for a moment...

I like the spunk khushi shows towards arnav...where she is willing be challenging with him...

Rizwan seems like a good guy too...

Thanks,

Sri.

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iss97

@iss97

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#894

The story is going on well
But the dynamics of the relationship between arnav and khushi is a beautiful mystery slowly unfolding
Loved the update as always

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#895

Awesome update. I really loved this one.

Thus update had the glimpses of past as well , how arnav was b4 he became what he is now.

Bt I still wanted to know as to why khushi's father took arnav in, what was the relation that he shared with arnav or his mother/parents.

N the most imp khushi's pov , I mean we have got to read how arnav feels about khushi , bt what she feels about him, her past interactions with her, their equation as children n in the past are still a mystery.

I think arnav can very well bargain aakash's life with khushi (just an idea 😉)

Thanks for d pm.

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jdd1959

@jdd1959

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#896

SIMPLY OUTSTANDING...👏

I HAVE NO WORDS 2 DESCRIBE MY FEELINGS...

INSTEAD OF "LIKE BUTTON", U SHOULD HAVE " LOVE BUTTON" 4 CLICKING...LOVEEEDDD IITTT...N I M TELLING OHH NO...DEMANDING U 4 NEXT UPDATE SOON...PLS PREETY PLS...JALDI UPDATE DENA...TELLING U D TRUTH I WISH N WANT UR UPDATE JUST NOW 2 READ...I LOVE EVERY THING ABOUT UR STORY, UR CHARACTERS, SCENES, DIOLOUGE. I M CRAZY ABOUT UR THIS ARNAV...SO EAGERLY WAITING...

THANKS 4 D PM.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Amazingly good. What do i tell. Archie has come. Firangi has come to put a miserable tadka in arnavs heart. Hope Archie is a gay. Bt y is Khushi telling Archie as a friend only and Akash is soo cool about it. Except for lalaji and Arnav evry body envies this videsi munda Awesome. Loved the past of Arnav and Aman. Aman mom is soo typical. Update soon

Edited by raniluvsasr - 10 years ago

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Intresting updt

lov this possesive arnav

Asom stry

Want to knw arnav histry

What is the conection btwn arnav mom.n rajan vaghela

I fell in lov with this stry

Tanx for pm

Edited by sutapasarbabhom - 10 years ago

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#899

Fabulous updt...well portrayed the life of factory workers kids...it ws earlier picture of Mumbai

I m so desperately waiting for Khushi n Arnavs confrontation...i think it will happen soon bcs Arnav is bottling up way to much...n ofcourse it will give more clear picture of the relationship status...the way he think he hs all right on Khushi n she only belongs to him it shows there is more hidden behind the curtains

Two things I really hope 1. Archie not a gay 2. Akhash n Arnav end up as a good friends :p

Updt soon soon soon

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#900

Getting more interesting.
It was nice to get a little bit of Arnav's early days with his mother.
It is also apparent that Khushi is drawn to Arnav and knows that he too has feelings for her that can't be just explained or declared easily.
Khushi and Arnav are both in a precarious situation - each from the enemy camp so to say.
Looking forward to past revelations and future happenings.
Nicely done!!
👍🏼

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