~Arhi FF~#3~The Hands of Time~

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

that was a very intriguing and interesting update...keep up the good work going...👏

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Archna

@archnahardik123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

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anju

@anjusr06

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#553

Part 1 was really emotional... waiting for part2

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Khushi is really lucky to have such an amazing family... and Arnav made his entry in her dream, that too to save her... wow... loved it... and Khushi Rao is back in work, trying to find out about the missing kid... the whole scenario was too real... beautifully portrayed Di... loving it... waiting to see more...

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metitaliya

@metitaliya

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#555

here you need either money or power to gain any justice😡.

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thinkggreen

@thinkggreen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Fabulous update.
Kushi finally started the investigation.
It is a shame that so many kids go missing, and the police hardly take action immediately, unless
you have an influence.

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Heavens_Flower

@Heavens_Flower

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Good Lord Sandy, the dream sequence is written like a murder thriller... My heart is literally in my throat and I thought I was dreaming along with Khushi... Then she screamed ARNAV and all is well in my world despite the fact the dream was nasty...

The dram that was unfolding in the police station was so palpable Sandy... You just dragged all your readers into that police station... Superb...👏

Sandy I will write in detail once I have read part 2 as well but for the moment my dear lady you have excelled in HoT as a mystery genre...

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shiv456

@shiv456

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#558

interesting guess she started investigating awesome

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Read part 1... could feel Khushi's sadness and disappointment. I am a mother and can't even begin to imagine how hard it can be for a family whose child goes missing... wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy.

You have done a great job here. I hope Khushi can help find this little girl. I am suspecting Arnav will help her with that as well. May be they'll get some kind of closure to Anjali's disappearance in the process?