~Arhi FF~#3~The Hands of Time~

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: AquaSandhya

And that was unplanned...see, I told you that 3 is my number😆

I believe you now. 😆

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GuruDeep246

@GuruDeep246

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

wow Sandhya beautiful update...you made us to peek in to past...arnav thinks that aakash is very close to anjali than him as they were twins..he knows its not khushi's fault too..she is also going through a lot because of what happened to anjali ..khushi's father was very close to the children..i loved how he gave respect to hinm...totaly loved the update...waiting for the next installment already..

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Awesome chapter Sandy..

Loved the small encounter between Shashi & His Arnab baba..

Arnav is well mannered matured kid in all senses...

He used trashy bike ride to burst his pent up frustrations..

He is helpless with the happenings in his home...

Really I want Arnav - Shashi convos in present too...

What to tell about wonderful pictures of two souls finding solace in the Top of the world..

They are both in deep pain and suffering...

Loved how Arnav realized that Khushi's pain is much more than his family's.

Promise between two young souls...tender it is...

Hope they remember their past meeting forever...

Thanks for pm Sandy...

Enjoyed this journey so far..

Can't wait for next chapter

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javeria

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

beautiful update

love to read Arnav thoughts for his family which were on the point of breaking. Anjali meant so much for everyone that everyone without her were like walking dead. It's so sad.

Arnav and khushi meeting after anjali disappearance was so emotional. That promise was so innocent and i hope one day Arnav will fulfill his promise and call khushi to give news that Anjali is finally found.

But still relations will not be back as they were before and everyone want them to be. Love remain same but people change and that's what life.

I love this chapter. very well written. 👏

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Beautiful update!!

A very short meet but as if much needed for both of them to find hopes n solace from the loss of one imp person of their lives...

Thanks for pm

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smile1412

@smile1412

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

A flashback update ... A heart wrenching one .. Tough for him to remember all that pain...

Very very moving S...

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

That was brilliant!

The way they found solace with each other...

It was amazing! Thanx for the happy reading moment!

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Lovelyday

@Lovelyday

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Thx for the pm..
Lovely update

Ur story is making me realize how hard it is to survive and live thru each day when a loved ones just dissapears.. It's really hard not to have a closure and you have brought the enormous weight of guilt , sadness , worry and anger in each character wonderfully ..

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Wow a total flashback update.This chapter opens a window that gives a peek into the past when Arnav though tormented himself by the situation gives solace to young,hurt and guilt ridden Khushi.The same window(Wouldn't it be nice?)also opens up in the near future when two hurting souls help each other.Arnav has carried the burden of the elder,responsible child of the family for so long.His Grandmother realises that but unfortunately parents don't.My heart went out to him when he wonders if his mother will come out of her grief(Anjali's disappearance)if something happens to him.Sandy I am loving HoT and don't know and don't care if there are any similarities with any other story whatsoever.
Thanks for the pm.Hugs for this chapter.

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Thanks for another wonderful chapter. I get so involved in your characters when you write the emotional scenes! Only cos you write them so beautifully. Many thanks.

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