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Posted: 9 years ago
heyy ur too good with ff continue 😊😛😉 good luck
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Part 446
In hospital room!
Doctor doing madhu's checkup.
Madhu:(ask) doctor,applog b4 &after ka photos nahin rakhte kya patients ke.?
Doctor:(ask) kyun?Mrs madhu vadera.
Madhu:(tells) mujhe dekhna tha.
Doctor: don't worry some days main aap everyday dekhsakoge.aap tension free raho asalways.:(went)
Vihaan:(ask) kya need thi.
Madhu: (tells) simply.
Vihaan:(ask) madhu, imagine karo main burn hojata toh aur face change hojata toh kya karti thi tum.as always chahti ya far hoti?
Madhu:(tells) face change hota to kya, tum toh a to z same rehte, lots of anger and lots of lovre rehta na.sabse mujhse toh kyun chodungi tumhe,
Vihaan:(hug her,inmind) thank god madhu mere jaise sochti hai, jo bhi apne luck main hoga uske sath jeyenge hum,:(smiles)
Madhu:(get separate and ask) sudden yeh question kyun?mujhpe doubt hai kya?
Vihaan:(tells) haan.
Madhu:(warn him)mere glucose par hona ka advantage nahin lo samjhe.
Vihaan:(tells) kyun nahin lun? Bahot kam aise chance milte kaise chodun main.
Madhu:(tells) knife and apple do mujhe.
Vihaan: tum rest lo main cut karta hun.(start cutting apples and give her)
Madhu:(surprise him by making him eat)
Vihaan:(get amaze by her) mujhe laga tum eat karnewali ho?
Madhu: I can't eat. Plasters main bolne se problem hori toh kaise eat karungi. Tum eat nahin kare isliye.
Vihaan: okay.
They spend times.
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In jail room.
Gunjan:(comes to meet her enemy to warn her)mihika
Mihika:(ask) tum yahan kaise?
Gunjan:(tells) main tumhe itna bolne ayi hun ke mere lp Aur family se far raho. Tumne Jo bhi kiya usse friendship over hogayi? Don't try to contact us.
Mihika:(tellslies) Maine Jo bhi anger main kiya? Vivaan ke love main kiya?
Gunjan:(tells) don't take love name, is stage main log bad se good bante good se bad nahin.Jo bhi hua usse vivaan Hi effect hua:(emotionally) mujhse divorce ki baat nahin karna tha Aur kids se hate nahin Lena tha, toh marne ready hua. Iske liye tum responsible ho isliye icant forgive u samjhi tum.tumhare bcoz meri behen hospital main hain
Mihika:(tellslies) I am telling u gunjan, main angry thi. Plz give me one chance.
Gunjan:(tells) no.
Vivaan calling allerts
Gunjan:(getshock and receive)
Mihika:(take phone and tells) thankyou gunjan for giving me chance.and freeing me.
Vivaan:(getshock)
Gunjan:(while taking phone ask) why are you saying.?
Mihika: (give phone and smiles)
Gunjan:(tells) hello vivaan? Plz don't missunderstand me.main toh bas aise ayi thi
Mihika:(smiles)
Vivaan:(tells) abhi ke abhi return aao tum.(endcall)
Gunjan:(felt bad) tumne theek nahin kiya?
Mihika:(tells) third time khodiya vivaan ko tumne.
Gunjan:(get sad and leaves)
Armaan:(ask) are you sure?
Mihika: yes
They smiles.
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Outdoorguesthouse.
Gunjan:(arrives)
Vivaan:(hug her from behind)surprise
Gunjan:(ask) tum angry nahin ho?
Vivaan:(tells) its vivaan style anger.
Gunjan:(get separate and ask) mobile par strict kyun banre the.
Vivaan:(tells) main strict nahin banta toh spl triplets mom ka spl time waste hojata.waste persons ke sath.
Gunjan:(while beating him) very bad.accident hojata tha.
Vivaan:(while saving himself) tumhara accident hona impossible hai.meri presence main
Gunjan: (tells) i know it.
Vivaan:(smiles)
Gunjan:(ask) sudden surprise karne ki kaise socha tumne.
Vivaan:(tells) bas sochliya?(ask) kaisa hai?
Gunjan:(tells) achcha hai.
Vivaan:(tells) tumse less hai.
Gunjan:(ask) tum really angry nahin ho?
Vivaan:(tells) Jo bhi hua uske liye main scold karke aata. Tum jaise.anyways lets not remember past.
Gunjan:(smiles) right saying.
Vivaan:(ask) tumne cry kiya kya?
Gunjan:(hug him and tells) tumhare liye badfeel hora? Jispar believe karte ho woh hurt karte hain..
Vivaan:(get separate and take her hands) main apne kuch bhi tolerate karsakta hun, family Aur tumhare aur kids ke sath wrong hote nahin dekhsakta.
Gunjan:(hug him)
They spend times
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Back to hospital cabin!
Vihaan:(arrive to meet doctor) Hi doctor.
Doctor:(ask) sab theek toh hai.
Vihaan:(sat and share) actually mujhe learn karna tha madhu ke 7 same toh nahin hoga Jo other women ke sath hua.
Doctor:possible toh hai:
Vihaan:you r right(tells)actually meri wife madhu shock hojati hai, toh main pehle dekhke decide karsakta hun usko ab batana hai time leke batana hai.
Doctor: ok
Vihaan:(get scare for wife)
Doctor:(tells) have water plz.:(give water)
Vihaan:(drink waters) doctor plz, madhu ko mujhe batane dijiye, aap plaster remove karke nahin batana face usko, I will tell her after sometimes.
Doctor:(tells)ok
Vyom:(arrive and tells) doctor plz mom ka plaster remove kariye na, unko warm feel hoga.
Doctor:(ask) apki mom kaun hai?
Vihaan:(ask) tum yahan kaise aye:(tells) sorry doctor he is our son vyom..
Vyom:(tells) doctor main aapko sab hobbies bolunga but pehle aap chaliye..
Doctor:(tells) don't worry junior, apki mom woh plaster main save hAi.warm feel nahin hota.
Vyom:(ask) really.
Doctor: haan.
Vihaan: ab batao kaise aye.?
Vyom:(tells) maasi -ed apke tiffin ke sath aare the cycle leke main bhi agaya.
Vihaan:(tells) go I will come
Vyom: (went)
Vihaan:(also went)
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In hospital room! After lunch
Vihaan:(after eating tells) daily lunch arrange nahin kariye gunjan bhabhi, otherwise rockstar se fater star hojaunga.
Vivaan vyom laugh.
Gunjan:(ask) already eat kiya kya?
Vihaan:(tells) apki behen haina mujhse apple cut karaya aur eat karaya mujhe.
Vivaan: what a smart girl.
Trio went.
Vihaan follow them to tell.
Madhu:(inmind) isko kya hua?
She waits
Vihaan:(arrives after sometimes without tellng)
Madhu:(ask) kahan gaye the.
Vihaan:(lies)main bolne gaya kal pizza chahiye.
Madhu:(ask) fatstar banoge yaad nahin aya
Vihaan:(tells) yaad aya toh return agaya.(remember and tells) tumhara beta infinity wonder hai.
Madhu:(ask) kya kardiya?
Vihaan:(tells) mujhe Hi hello nahin Kara doctor ko bolne agaya mom ko warm feel hoga plaster nikalo.
Madhu: atleast vyom bola, tum toh bhagaye the auto main.
Vihaan: mere paas reason tha,tumhara beta bhi follow karte aya.
Madhu:(tells) vyom se kyun jealous ho itna.
Vihaan:(tells) sabka favourite hai isliye.
Madhu:(tells) kids sabke favourite rehte.
Vihaan: I wish main kids category ka rehta.
Madhu:(tells) realife main possible nahin hai, adjust karna hoga.
Vihaan:(inmind) right kaha, tum meri madhu thi, meri madhu ho, meri madhu rahogi.chahe Jo ho.
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In vm hall
Family and kids are worried.
Garv:(tells) main find karke aata hun is vyom ko.
Trio brothers: hum bhi challenge.
Vigun vyom arrives.
Jeevika: vyom tumlog ko kahan mila.
Vivaan:(tells) kuch nahin only apne mom dad jaise Humlog ko follow karna tha.
Vyom:(went)
Kids also.
Jeevika: vyom ko pata chala dara toh nahin na.
Vivaan: actually surprise kardiya vyom,. Mom ko warm feel hoga sochke doctor ke paas gaya.
Gunjan:(tells) vihaan bhi surprise Kara, last time jaise nahin tha.emotional laga
Vivaan:(tells) i notice it,next time jayenge toh tum madhu ke sath raho main pata karta hun vihaan se.
Jeevika: gunjan aisa karo na tum madhu ke sath phone par busy hojao, vivaan, vihaan se talk karega
Vigun: nice idea:(went to talk)
Ranvir:(tells) badepapa and maasi, ronak Bhaiya ko kuch bolna hai.
Virika: kya?
Ronak:(tells) madhu ke discharge bolta hun.
Virman: maansi tumhe pata hai toh batao.
Maansi: nahin pata.
Ronak:(inmind) what a wife mere types bolne nahin aara toh lie kar rahi hai.
Maansi:(inmind) how sweet of him.
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In backyard!
Vivaan::(dial brother number)
Vihaan:(ask) kya baat hai, madhu ko gunjan bhabhi ka call Aur mujhe apka call aya.
Vivaan:(ask) anypripoblem.
Vihaan:(laugh and tells) jealous hone se bachgaya, problem solve.
Vivaan:(tells) main phonecall ki nahi, tujhse ask kar raha hun? Doctor kya bole Jo tum emotional hogaye.
Vihaan:(laugh and tells) doctor ke bcoz tense nahin hun, apne bete se surprise hun Aur emotional hogaya.
Vivaan:(tells) jaisa father waisa son hai, surprise karnewala, one more thing tumhe meri sochke hesitate karne ki need nahin hai,I won't feel bad, chalo batao.
Vihaan:(normally) doctor se ask Kara tha main, madhu ki surgery ke about main. Doctor bolre the madhu ka face hogaya hoga. Madhu ko pata chalega toh kaisa feel hoga sochke tension hori hai.
Vivaan:(get shock) what?
Vihaan: yes but plz abhi se kissi ko nahin boliye. Madhu ko tension hojaigi kisse se pata chale toh.
Vivaan:(tells) okay fine, tum bhi normal raho
Vihaan: I know but uske reaction ki tension hai
Vivaan:(normally) I am sorry vihaan, sab mere stupidity se problem main agaye.
Vihaan: don't say like that? Papa ne love test diya, ranvir Bhaiya ne love test diya, ronak bhaiya ne test diya, aapne test diya, Didi's ne test diya toh mera test hona chahiye
Vivaan:(tells) right saying, dikhade mere Bhai. Duniya ko
Vihaan: face change hosakta hai... Love nahin
Vivaan:(tells)exactly.
Vihaan:(tells) lets talk later.
Vivaan:(tells) bye.
Vihaan:(end call)
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Back to vm hall!
Vivaan joins family.
Viren: kya bolra tha vihaan.
Vivaan:(lies) vyom k action se impress hogaya
Gunjan:(arrives to)kya bolra tha vihaan.
Vivaan: vyom k action se impress hogaya.:(smiles)
Family felt nice.
Vivaan:(inmind)God, I hope apni madhu zyada effect na ho is reality se
Gunjan:(ask) kahan khogaye.
Vivaan:(lies) madhu ke liye welcomegift kya hona chahiye sochra tha.
Gunjan:(tells) collarge gift decide kiya na.
Vivaan:(tells)madhu kahin Aur shift nahin hori apne sath hogi, collarge ki kya need hai?
Gunjan: ithink you are right.
Vivaan: I am always right.(normally) Meri request thi aap sabse, Jo bhi hua usko bhuljate hain, madhu ke liye. Yeh time sad hone ka nahin strength dene ka hai.
Jeevika:(ask) strength dena hai meaning.
Vivaan:(tells) excitement main mistake hogayi, surprise ke instead strength bola.
Gunjan:(ask) kya surprise decide hua.
Vivaan: skit karenge.madhu vihaan ka.
Jaaran-maanak: nice idea.
Gunjan:(inmind) vivaan ko kya hogaya? Itna happy toh tension hide karne rehta.
Vivaan:(inmind) vivaan be careful.
Maanak-jaaran:(inmind)vivaan gunjan yahan rahenge toh surprise kaise karenge foursome ko.
Jeevika:(inmind) vivaan gunjan yahan rahenge toh surprise ka kya.
Maanvi:(whisper) relax.
They spend times.
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In evening after dinner!
In maanak room!
Maansi:(tells) April tak practice kardijiye.shadi ki baat karne ki.
Ronak:(tells) iske liye practice nahin hona padhta.
Maansi: then wait kariye.
Ronak: OK.
Maansi:(give him something)
Ronak:(start reading get confuse) mujhe laga gift list hogi.
Maansi:(tells) mere absense main kam ayegi. Shadi se pehle.
Ronak:(tells) call karne ka reason remove kiya very bad, mujhe laga tha yeh reason se baat karenge.Jo pehle nahin hua ab hoga.
Maansi:(smiles and tears papers)
Ronak:(ask) yeh kya?
Maansi:(tells) even I can't stay without u.
Ronak:(felt nice to know her feelings)kya baat hai.
Maansi:(hug him)
Ronak:(ask) valentine aara hai kya gift chahiye.
Maansi: whatever you like.
Ronak:(tells)tumse wish ask waste hojata hai. Apni sister se ask karunga.
Maansi: okay.
Ronak:(text his and her sis) jaanvi, maansi ke choice ki thing bolo main gift karna chahta hun:(sent)
Maansi:(tells)let's rest.
Ronak: OK.
They take rest.
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In jaaran room!
Jaanvi:(reads her elder brother msg)
Ranvir:(ask) kiska msg hai?
Jaanvi:(tells) hai koi best tumse badke.
Ranvir:(ask) kaun hai mujhse best?
Jaanvi:(tells) guess karo.
Ranvir:(tells) mere one and only brother ronak Bhaiya Jo mere nahin tumhare hogaye.
Jaanvi:(claps)
Ranvir:(ask) Humlog bhi b4 wedding wali nokjhok friendship show karen kids ko.
Jaanvi: why not. Uske liye mujhe apni behen ke sath rehna hoga.(ask) chalega.
Ranvir:(tells)wohtoh theek hai, ek problem hai.
Jaanvi:(tells) kya hua?
Ranvir:(tells) I will miss to stay with u.
Jaanvi: so sweet.
Ranvir:(scold his brother)ronak Bhaiya bhi na, strange strange wish karte hain.
Jaanvi: Jo bhi hora riddhima mayank ke liye hora hai.
Ranvir: no problem then.
Jaanvi: kya baat hai.riddhima mayank itne dear hain.
Ranvir: haan.infact sab kids.
Jaanvi: okay.
Ranvir: gift suggest kiya.
Jaanvi: I will think and tell him.
Ranvir: lets rest.
Jaanvi: okay.
They take rest.
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(inmind) sorry gunjan, madhu ke liye tumhara brave rehna important hai, isliye hide kar raha hun.
Gunjan:(ask) kya sochre ho?
Vivaan:(tells) skit ke liye topic sochra hun.
Gunjan:(tells) tum kuch bhi karlo vihaan nahin bansakte.
Vivaan:(ask) kyun nahi? Vihaan,vivaan bansakta toh vivaan, vihaan bansakta.:(ask) tumse nahin hoga kya?
Gunjan:(ask) aisa nahin hai.madhu vihaan ko achcha nahi laga toh.
Vivaan: don't worry , jaise humko achcha laga, wohlog ko achcha lagega?
Gunjan: okay.
Vivaan:(tells)Very good.
Gunjan:(ask) tum itne happy hoke kya hide kar rahe ho?
Vivaan:(smile a bit) its not like that.
Gunjan:(tells)mujhe tumhari habit yaad hai, kuch problem ho toh normal hone ki acting karte ho.happy rehte ho.
Vivaan:(confess) mujhe hurt hora hai sochke, main kuch kar nahin saka tumhare liye, gun ke liye, madhu ke liye, useless feel hora hai.(tells) I wish tum kisi aur ki wife banti, madhu kis aur ko bhai banati, triplets ko koi Aur dad milta. Ya phir main real main Marta,main toh tumhari strength bhi nahin banra,sorry
Gunjan:(ask) vivaan tum aise rahoge toh mera kya hoga.
Vivaan:(hug her)sorry.
Gunjan:(ask) kya hua batao.
Vivaan:(lies) main tension free hona chahta tha
Gunjan: okay.
Vivaan: lets rest.
Gunjan:OK.
They take rest.
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Otherside in hospital room!
Vihaan:(ask) tum theek toh hona madhu.
Madhu: haan, ek baat bolna hai mujhe?
Vihaan: bolo.
Madhu: ghar jaake rest karo.
Vihaan:(ask) mujhe dekhke bad dreams aate kya?
Madhu:tum yahan comfortable nahin ho.
Vihaan: (ask) apne lp ke sath uncomfortable kyun nahin rahunga.?
Madhu:(tells)sitting position main ho isliye.
Vihaan:(tells) main theek hun trust me.
Madhu: okay. I am telling you ghar jaake doctor nahin banna.
Vihaan:(tells) okay fine.
Madhu: good.
Vihaan:(tells)aur kuch.?.
Madhu:(tells) no
Vihaan: good.
Madhu: aur kuch.
Vihaan: ghar jaake obedient wife banno.
Madhu: kaise?
Vihaan: jaane ke baad ask karlo.
Madhu: okay.soch samajhke task do.
Vihaan: okay
Madhu: lets rest.
Vihaan: OK
They take rest.












































































































































































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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome !!!!😆 i hate mihika she still didnt change 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY AWESOME AND MINDBLWING UPDATE.
SO DOCTOR TOLD VIHAAN MADHU FACE MAY BE CHANGE. WGAT IS THIS. I DONT LIKE IT.
VYOM WAS SO SWEET AND HIS TALKS WITH DOCTOR R SO CUTE.
HATE THIS MIHIKA. SHE CANT CHANGE. SUCH A CHEAP CHARACTER SHE IS.
VIVAAN ALSO COMES TO KNOW ABOUT MADHU AND IS FEELING VERY BAD AND FEELS HIMSELF AS GUILTY.
LOVE'S VIGUN PART.
ALL COUPLES R AWESOME.
NOW WAITING FOR REMOVING MADHU PLASTER.
SO UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE. 😊 😊 😊
Edited by sandhYA_123 - 9 years ago
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Precap
Vihaan to reveal plastic surgery truth in front of family and madhu. Madhu to except reality after getting conscious, vyom to support his mother infront class
Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 9 years ago
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AWESOME PRECAP DEAR.
LOVED IT.
IT IS GOING TO BE VERY INTERESTING.
UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.
😊 😊 😊
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Part 447
In vm hall.
Family waiting
Vihaan:(arrives leaving wife in car,)
Gunjan:(ask) madhu kahan hai?
Vihaan:(get emotional and tells everything)
Gunjan get shock and cries.
Family as well.
Vivaan:(tells) everyone plz control yourself, we should be happy as madhu is save. She need us.
Vihaan:main usko lake batata hun(went to bring wife from car)
Gunjan:(ask)ab kya hoga.
Vihaan:(bring his lp)
Family members including arka meet her and hide their sadness in smile.
Vihaan: (ask) madhu tumhe dekhna hai? Tum kaisi lagri ho.
Madhu: haan.
Vihaan:(give her pics)
Madhu:(get shock look everyone) yeh main nahin hun.
Family felt bad for her.
Madhu:(ask) yeh tumhara prank haina?
Vihaan:(tells) no madhu
Madhu:(takes her pics) vihaan, yeh confusion se hua hoga kisi Aur ka face kissi Aur ko, riddhima bhi toh kahin Aur thi Aur humko laga woh phir nahin ayi, police lie kare na gunjan di aur vivaan Bhaiya ke about main.
Family felt bad for her including vihaan
Vihaan:(hug her and tells) yeh confusion nahin reality hai.
Madhu:(get emotional)
Vihaan:(take her and went inside)
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In backyard!
Vihaan:(sitting sadly)
Foursome brothers
Vivaan:(tells) vihaan.
Vihaan:(wipe tears and ask) koi work tha vivaan Bhaiya?
Vivaan:(tells) tum dekhna madhu rest karke normal hojaigi.humsabke sath rehke bhuljayegi.
Arjun:(tells) she is brave person. Jo apnon ko break nahin hone deti khud kyun brave hogi.
Vihaan: I wish aisa ho. Jab unexpected thing hoti toh kuch understand nahin karsakte na.
Vivaan:(tells) maine ek surprise socha, usse madhu normal hojaigi, Aur handle karsakegi.
Vihaan:(ask)kya surprise hai boliye.
Vivaan: dekhte jao hota hai kya?
Vihaan:(ask) holiday plan kare kya? Packing nahin hui abhi, kaise Jana hai,plain ya train se, only hum couples jaare hain kya?
Sehgalbrothers and arjun get amaze
Vivaan: :(cover his mouth) madhu ko humsabki need hai woh weak hai, how can I plan that.
Vihaan:(uncover and ask) then kya hai boliye?
Vivaan:(send him telling) tum bas jaake dekho madhu kaisi hai?
Vihaan:(went)
Vivaan:(inmind) sorry madhu, apne vivaanbhaiya ke bcoz problem main agayi.
Ronak: vivaan surprise karne ready hojao.bhai.
Vivaan: okay:(went)
Arjun:(ask) kya surprise hai?
Ronak: vihaan madhu ki love story skit hai.
Arjun::(went along brother)
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(wakeup)
Vihaan:(ask) how are you? Feeling.
Madhu:(get up and tells) theek hun.(look around and realize)
Vihaan:(ask) Maine tumse Jo kaha yaad haina?
Madhu:(tells) haan yaad hai, sabko badfeel hua kya?
Vihaan:(tells) badfeel hua na apni madhu ko sad dekhke.
Madhu:(felt bad for family)
Vihaan: anyways change karlo party ki reason vadera, vivaan Bhaiya gunjan bhabhi ke paas ek surprise hai tumhare liye.
Madhu:(get excited) kya?
Vihaan:(tells) mujhe only itna pata hai, ready hona Aur jaana hai, madhu ka surprise hai madhu ko pata chalega.
Family arrives including arka meet her.
Vigun:(tells) sorry madhu.
Madhu:(tells) Maine Jo bhi kiya aaplog bhi karte na, sabki family change hosakti na waise mera face bhi change hogaya, that it. Mere siblings theek toh main theek hun
Vihaan:(tells)mujhe pehle pata hota na hospital jaake intelligent hojaigi madhu, main hospital buy karleta.
Madhu:(tells) mujhe pata hota tum hospital main caring ho ghar main irritating toh chodke aati thi. Sabko new vihaan milta tha.
Family get amaze and went.
Vihaan: main ready hoke aata hun.
Madhu: pehle main.
Vihaan:pehle main, 2minutes ka work hai, as u 2hrs.
Madhu:(tells) party meri toh ready main hungi:(take saari and went)
Vihaan:(inmind) thank god, madhu normal hogayi.:(smiles,inmind)main bhi stupid hun Jo nahin samjha, apni amazing wife ko:(wait for their lp)
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Back to hall!
Family sat including vibala.
Vivaan(checking cupboard and throwing clothes)
Gunjan: vihaan plz teach your (ask) yeh kya hai?
Vivaan:(tells) mujhe performance karne jaana hai? White shirt nahin milre plz help kardo na.my good wife
Gunjan:(tells) pehle tum elder ke jaise behave karo. Neat rakho.my good husband.
Family laugh including vibala.
Vivaan:(tells) Sunday ko learn karunga promise, abhi tum help kardo. Plz.
Gunjan:(tells) main bhi Sunday help karungi.
All laugh.
Vivaan:(ask) main kaise jaunga.?
Gunjan:(tells) car se jao.
Vivaan:(ask) kya wear karunga?
Gunjan:(tells) sab set karoge toh shirt jeans miljayegi toh wear karo aur jao.simple
Vivaan:(tells) what?
Gunjan: aur haan madvi ko bhi teach karo room kaise rakhte hain, hai toh mere jaisi achchi but tumhare types spoiled rakhti hai.
Vivaan:(tells) vyom angry karta hoga, madhvi my sweetheart big brother ko stick se nahin Marti cloths se Marti hogi:(smiles)kitni respect hai big brother ki ek tum ho Jo respect karna nahin jaanti.
Gunjan::(tells)main apne teeno brothers ki respect karti hun.:(smiles)
Family laugh.
Vivaan:(tells) main apni baat kar raha hun.
Gunjan:(tells) main only tumse elder ki respect karungi.
Family laugh
They spend times. And dance around madhu
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At tarrace!
Madhu is lost somewhere.
Vigun:(arrives and ask) kaisa laga skit.
Madhu: wonderful
Vihaan:(tells) ek problem thi apki acting main my brother.
Vivaan:(tells) kya?
Vihaan: main event par jaake ready hota
Madhu:(tells) tumhare company ka effect hai?
Vihaan:(ask) main kya Kara tha.
Madhu: riddhima rimjhim ka babyspl milk serve kiya tha mujhe.aur bolte ho kya kara
Vigun get amaze.
Vivaan:(ask) madhu chalke mujhe help karo tumhari behen ko wedding gift dena hai.
Madhu:(went along him)
Gunjan:(felt bad for sister and get emotional)
Vihaan:(to consoles her and tells) don't b sad gunjan di, a2z same hai ab bhi fool bhi hai beautiful bhi hai madhu(smiles)
Gunjan:(tells) yeh baat Humlog samjhenge kids nahi na. I am afraid madhu moveon karne main fail na hojaiye toh aise.
Vihaan:(tells) we will do something for it.
Gunjan:(smile a bit)
Vihaan: relax kariye aur chaliye dekhne ke kya gift decide hua.first time vivaan Bhaiya apni sisters ki help lenewale hain.
Sehgalbrothers: Humlog bhi help karenge tumhe.
Trio brother sat with gunjan.
They start searching gift for vivaan.
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In lunch international lawn
Vibala arrives to meet kids.
Other kids get amaze.
Madhu:(inslowtone) vihaan abhi kissi ko pata nahi mere bare main, aake wrong kiya?
Vaderasehgal Kids hug her
Vihaan:(tells) kids se milenge unko pata bhi hai, tumse milke achcha lagega(keep hand around her shoulder)don't worry.:(tells) attention plz.
Kids gather including vaderasehgal kids hug her and smiles
Madhu:(felt nice hug them)
Vihaan:(tells)Students yeh hai sehgalsiblings ki Mami, triplets + twins ki maasi and chachi, vyom madhvi ki mom Hai.
Other kids commenting about vigun and vibala
Garv and siblings went to complain teacher.
Vyom:(shout)silence, kuch pata nahin hai toh bolo mat, OK,
Vibala: no vyom.
Vyom:(get angry) hamare dono parents humse love karte, koi reason tha Jo gunjan maasi nahi the hamare sath kasak maasi ko rehne diya , mamma ko help main problem agayi thi, mere ed aur dad liar nahin hai samjhe tumlog. We are lucky to have brave moms
Student get quite
Vibala get somuch happy by him.
Students: sorry vyom madvi ki mom.
Madhu: its OK, vyom tum bhi sorry bolo.
Vyom:(tells) sorry friends, tumlog bad talk kare the ,elders bolte aise good boys behave nahin karte, voice spoil hojati meri phir sing nahin karsakta, isliye angry nahi hone ki try karta main, ed maasi mom dad including family ke against koi talk kare toh mujhe achcha nahin lagta tumlog ko bhi bad lagta hoga.
Kids: its ok
Vibala went happily.
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In vm hall.
Family:(tells) very bad vivaan, tumhe pata tha phir bhi nahin bola.
Vivaan:(tells) aaplog normal nahin hote toh madhu ko handle karna tough hota na.hum pehle jaise rahenge toh madhu pehle jaise rahegi na.isliye.lets wish ke madhu forever ke liye comfortable hojaye., aur(seriously) woh idiots couple ka permanent home jail hojaye humsabka aur madhu ka struggle complete hojaye. Double khushi milegi mujhe.
Jeevika: court jaana padega gunjan madhu ko kya?
Vivaan:(tells) nahin mamma gunjan madhu ke recordings se adjust karunga main. Wohlog ke faceoff se better hai.
Sehgalsisters: (tells) tumne prove kardiya humse important sister madhu hai. Isliye tense hote ho scold hone se nahin darte.
Gunjan: right saying Didi's, madhu ke infront lair banadiye mujhe.
Vivaan:(tells) aisi bAat nahin hai didis, madhu meri younger sister hai isliye normal se hyper hojata hun uske matters main. Aaplog dekhiye sab theek hone ke baad normal hojaunga main promise. And triplets mom, madhu mujhe missunderstand nahin understand Kari Aur tumhe liar samjhi toh kya karun main.
Trio smiles along others.
Jeevika: vihaan madhu kahan rehgaye aye nahin.
Vivaan:(tells) vihaan roaming karara hoga.
Gunjan: I hope school main problem nahi hui hogi.madhu normal hogi
Vivaan: no worries.
Gunjan: vihaan amazing hai wedding se pehle jaise. Aur madhu lucky hai.
Vivaan:Humsabka effect hai.:(smiles)
Vigun debates
Jaaran-maanak: OK OK now stop fighting. Skit over hogaya.
Vigun: (stops)
Virika:(inmind) koi aur problem na ho toh achcha hoga.
They spend times.
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In restaurant
Vibala having coffee.
Madhu thinking about vyom act
Vihaan:(ask) kya hua?
Madhu:(tells) vyom ke act ke bare main sochri hun, kitna sensible hogaya hai.
Vihaan:(tells) itna sensible ke dad ko bhulgaya two times.na Hi na hello bola.
Madhu:(laugh and tells) stop getting jealous.
Vihaan:(tells) main chootu se jealous kyun hunga.
Madhu: melt hona learn karo then.
Vihaan:(ask) vyom ko kaun bole, angry honewale singer nahin hote.
Madhu:(tells) garv.
Vihaan:(tells) nice,sab kids tumse love karte hain.
Madhu:(ask) tum nahin love karte kya?
Vihaan: (normally) nahin.
Madhu:(getshock)
Vihaan:(take her hands) bahot se bhi zyada love karta hun main tumhe.
Madhu:(felt nice and tells) father and son bahot shocking ho.
Vihaan:(tells) sab tumhare repeating ke bcoz.otherwise god ek nahin do madvis milte.
Madhu:(tells) very funny.
Vihaan:(remind) tumhi bolri thi, vihaan ke types hurry hai baby ko without obey kare aane ki as me
Madhu: right.
Vihaan: then jhelo uske mere antics ko.
Madhu:ok(smiles)
Vihaan:(spend times with her)
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Back to vm hall!
Family spending time.
Vibala arrives happily.
Family felt nice to see madhu happy.
Maansi: kaisi rahi outing?
Vibala: nice.
Madhu:(tells) aaplog bhi rehna chahiye tha, sab siblings aur vyom se impress hojate the.
Vihaan:(tells everything)
Madhu: main toh speechless hogayi thi:(smiles)
Family felt nice.
Vihaan:(wantedly tells) again greet karna bhulgaya vyom mujhe.
Madhu: oh God kya person hai, choti so baat par hungama kar raha hai.:(laugh)
Everyone felt nice.
Gunjan:(ask) kuch eat karoge tumlog.
Vibala: nahin.
Gunjan: okay.
Madhu:(ask) kasak di arjun jiju kahan return chalegaya kya?
Gunjan: kartika ankit cry kar rahe the ghar par toh chalegaye.
Madhu: thanks for party and skit.
Vigun:(tells) welcome.
Vihaan:(tells) ek aur problem hai.
Vivaan:(ask) kya?
Vihaan:(tells) skit aur party ki baat kare nahin koi mujhse.
Madhu:(get amaze)
Family laugh.
Vivaan:(tells) humko bhi kuch pata nahin tha. Toh kaise bolte.
Vihaan:(ask) really gunjan bhabhi.
Gunjan: haan. Tumlog ke sath pata chala ready hone ke baad,.hamari party bhi
Vivaan:(tells) main chinese nahin bolra tha Jo tu tripletmom se ask kar raha hai.
Vihaan: sometimes karna padhta
Madhu:(tells) exactly.
Sehgalsisters:(ask) dishes kaise lage.
Vigun-vibala: nice.
Vihaan:(inmind) few days main new pic ayegi. Hamare room ke wall ko fill kardegi.
Vivaan:(ask) kahan khogaye?
Vihaan:(lies) Humlog gift nahi laye na.
Gunjan:(tells) tumlog support Hi hamara gift.
Madhu:(inmind) vihaan past ki madhu ko miss toh nahin kar raha, mere lie toh nahin kar raha.afterwards ask karti hun.
Vihaan: (ask) kahan khogayi?
Madhu:(tells) kahin bhi nahin.
Vihaan: mujhe pata surprising school scene main lost ho tum. Haina.
Madhu:(with smile) haan. Any problem.
Vihaan: not at all. Thank-you bolo, otherwise tum without meeting aanewali thi.(laugh tells) let it be enjoy hona important hai.
Madhu:(smile a bit) agree.
Vivaan:(tells) madhu koi favourite place ka name bolo I will arrange for u both OK.
Madhu: but sabko chalna hoga hamare sath.
Gunjan: kids ke liye rehna hoga humko isliye tumlog decide karlo.
Vibala: OK:(smiles)
Familymembers spend times.
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In evening after dinner!
In maanak room!
Maanak spending time.
Maansi: (tells) kitna achcha haina, madhu reality except karli, aur pehle jaise happy hogayi.
Ronak: haan.:(ask) shaadi ki baat karlun kya?
Maansi: hosakta hai kya aapse.?
Ronak: why not, I can do it infront of u.
Maansi: next month tak idea share kariye, tab tak madhu comfortable hojayegi.
Ronak: right saying.
Maansi:(ask) valentine par kya chahiye.
Ronak: nothing only your happiness.
Maansi: same hear.
Ronak: copycat tum rehne do. Mujhe gift idea milegaya.
Maansi:(ask) kya gift hai.
Ronak: jab valentineday ayega dekhlo.
Maansi: hint dijiye.
Ronak: ek condition hai, jaise main tum bolta hun, tumbhi mujhe tum bolo,
Maansi:(ask) important hai kya?
Ronak: yes just like me important hai.
Maansi:(tries) tumne kya gift socha ronak.?
Ronak:(felt nice) nice.
Maansi: batao na gift hai.
Ronak:(tells) main itna happy hun ke bhulgaya.
Maansi:(tells)tum Aur jaanvi same ho, pehle happy karte ho afterwards fun karte ho. Actualy aap.:(turn and rest)
Ronak:(smiles and rest)
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In jaaran room!
Ranvir:(ask) kya gift suggest kiya ronak Bhaiya ko.
Jaanvi:(tells) personally dekhlo:(ask) tum kya gift karoge?
Ranvir:(tells) personally dekho.
Jaanvi:(tells) Why are you copying me.
Ranvir tells) v-day aj nahin hai.kaise bolun abhi.?
Jaanvi: as u wish.
Ranvir: anyways aj ka skit kitna achcha tha na.
Jaanvi: vihaan madhu part 2 dikhre the.,:(smiles)
Ranvir: haan.
Jaanvi: vihaan madhu ka surprise decorations achcha laga hoga vivaan gunjan.chalke dekhen kya?
Ranvir: let them celebrate for getting married again.
Jaanvi: congrats karke ayenge na.
Ranvir: kal congrats karlo. Ek Hi baat hai. Bahot time baad happy haina. Let them
Jaanvi:you are right.
Ranvir:(ask) kya gift suggest kiya bolo.
Jaanvi: v-day ko dekhlo.some days ki baat hai.
Ranvir:(tells) main maansi bhabhi ko nahin bolunga promise.
Jaanvi: no guarantee.
Ranvir: jaiveer ko reverse hang karke ask karunga.
Jaanvi:(ask) dad ho ya kidnapper.
Ranvir: dad.
Jaanvi: lets rest.
Ranvir: okay.
They spend times.
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In vigun room!
Vivaan:(bring wife toward door and tells loudly) triplets mom, vihaan haina bahot irritate karta madhu ko. I felt like send him jail
Gunjan:(get confuse, ask) kya kar rahe ho?
Vivaan:(tells in slowtone) I want to catch vihaan.
Gunjan: wohlog chalegaya:(bring him back)
Vivaan:(again check from keyhole)
Gunjan:(laugh)
Vivaan:(ask) kya hua?
Gunjan: afraid dekhke achcha lagra.
Vivaan: alert hora hun (comes start dancing with her)
Gunjan:(hug him)
Vivaan get romantic with her.
Jalte diye playing.
They dance with eachother.
Vivaan:(give her gifts)
Gunjan:(ask) itne sare gifts kyun?
Vivaan:(tells) us time ke gift hai jab hum far the. Mere bcoz.
Gunjan:(felt nice ) hum toh kaise bhi the tum family ke sath nahin the.
Vivaan:(tells) you are right.I will not leave all of u everyone until iam alive I promise.
Gunjan:(felt nice) thanks.
Vivaan: welcome.
Gunjan: I will change and come.
Vivaan: (hold her hand pull her) leave it, kal change karenge.
They take rest.
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(inmind) ask karun kya?
Vihaan:(notice and ask) kya hua?
Madhu:(ask) vihaan tum mujhe miss kar rahe ho kya?
Vihaan:(tells) tum mere sath ho, Jo far hote hain unko miss karte hain madhu.
Madhu:(tells)I mean surgery se b4 wali madhu ko.
Vihaan:(tells) tum wahi madhu ho, jisse irritate hote-hote love karna start kardiya main. Yeh B4 after kyun think karunga
Madhu:(tells) lost the toh laga.
Vihaan:(tells) surprise think kar raha tha main tumhare liye.
Madhu:(ask) kaisa surprise.
Vihaan:(tells) don't be hurry like me.believe me and wait.plz.
Madhu:okay.:(smiles)
Vihaan:(ask) tumhe mujhpe believe toh haina.
Madhu: haan.
Vihaan: then relax.be happy.
Madhu: OK.
Vihaan:(ask) madhu, tum mujhse anniversary ke din wedding karogi?
Madhu:(ask) sudden wedding kyun?
Vihaan: remarriege main tum Aur Didi's gunjan bhabhi, enjoy nahin kare the na dance kare na isliye. Madvi vyom bhi dekhenge, humbhi aur close hojainge
Madhu:(tells) right saying.
Vihaan: lets rest.
Madhu: okay.
Vihaan:(inmind) God plz madhu ko insecure hone nahin dijiye.
Madhu:(inmind) vihaan itna different kyun hogaya.
They take rest.



Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
too good 😛 vyom is cute and sensible
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SUPERB UPDATE DEAR.
LOVE'S IT.
IT WAS REALLY NYC AND AWESOME UPDATE.
LOVED THE REACTION OF ALL FAMILY MEMBERS AFTER SEEING MADHU. IT WAS SO POSITIVE THAT IT IS HELPING MADHU TO REGAIN HER CONFIDENCE.
LOVED VIGUN SKIT FOR VIBALA. IT WAS AWESOME.
VYOM IS SO SENSIBILE AND LOVELY CHILD. LOVES HIS ANSWER BACK TO HIS FRIENDS.
SOMEWHERE SOME DOUBT IS IN MADHU MIND THAT VIHAAN IS BEHAVING SO SWEET AND DIFFERENTLY.
STORY IS GOING VERY INTERESTING.
NOW UPDATE SOON DEAR.
TAKE CARE.

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Part 448
Outdoorguesthouse Afterbreakfast
Vivaan:(got death news off mihika armaan end call)
Vihaan:(arrive and ask) kya hua?
Vivaan: armaan mihika margaye.
Vihaan:(hug him and wish) congrats brother.na aaplog ke between aye na duniya main hain.:(smiles)
Vivaan:(tells) mujhe nahin lagra yeh news right hai.
Vihaan:(ask) police wrong kyun bolenge.
Vivaan: you are right but Jo dekhenge bolenge na.
Vihaan:(tells) aap confirm karke return aao then.
Vivaan: you are right.:(ask) sab theek toh haina tumlog main.
Vihaan:(tells) its not like that.
Vivaan:(ask) batao bhi.
Vihaan:(tells) madhu insecure hori hai. Mere surprise ko m-u Kari.
Vivaan:(tells)surprise kardo, m-u clear karo, ab Jo state main hai madhu woh easy nahin hai uske liye, becareful with her, confusionS problem laate relation main.
Vihaan:(ask) kya karun aisa Jo madhu divert hojaye forever ke liye:(get some idea)idea milegaya.
Vivaan:(ask) kya?
Vihaan:(tells) just wait and watch.
Vivaan:(tells) be careful.
Vihaan:don't worry mujhe PAta hai kya karna hAi.
Vivaan: OK but madhu ko badfeel hona nahin chahiye.
Vihaan:(tells) don't worry.
Gunjan:(arrives and ask) kya hua?
Vihaan: nothing:(went)
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In backyard!
Kids bring chocolate sandwich chocolate rolls made by vihaan.
Madhu:(ask) yeh sab kya hai kids.
Kids: apke liye hai:(smiles)eat kariye na .
Madhu:(tells) itna eat karungi toh baloon lagungi.
Vyom:(tells) when we are here not f
ear mom, aap eat karlo hum bhagayenge, aapko kuch bhi nahin hoga.
Madhu:so smart(take both thing and start eating happily)
Vihaan:(comes tells) madhu, mere friend aur uski wife ki wedding anniversary hai.tum achcha gift book karo, main send karlunga
Madhu:(tells) hum kyun nahin jayenge.
Vihaan:(tells) mujhe work hai, tumhe rest karna hAi. So nahin jaana better hai.
Madhu: but vihaan, wohlog hurt hojainge na.
Vihaan:(tells) leave it and rest.
Madhu:(get shock and ask) tum aise kyun sochne lage. What happened to u
Vihaan:(went)
Madhu:(sat thinking)
Gunjan:(Arrives and ask) kya hua madhu tumne chocolate sandwich and chocolate rolls kyun finish nahin kiya?
Madhu:(tells) kuch sochri thi?
Gunjan:(sat and ask) kya hua madhu, kya sochri ho.
Madhu:(tells) vihaan ko change dekhke strange lagra.
Gunjan:(ask) kyun kya hua?
Madhu:(tells) ek party thi, vihaan ko nahin jaana mere sath.hungame ki tension hai.
Gunjan:(tells) tere betterment ke liye bola hoga, actual reason nahin bolta.
Madhu:(went to meet him)
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Back to outdoorguesthouse!
Madhu arrives
Vihaan:(heard and talks with with his PA) disha, tum aari ho kya? If koi nahin hai toh main chalunga.
Disha: OK vihaan.
Vihaan:good:(turn and end call) madhu tum yahan.
Madhu:(tells) tum toh nahin jaare the na.
Vihaan:(tells) mood change hogaya.
Madhu:(tells) anyways ek baat thi,Ranvir Bhaiya vivaan Bhaiya ke sath Jo hua woh think karlo plz. Don't believe anyone early.
Vihaan:(felt nice from inside, normally) don't think much.
Madhu:(tells) usko call karke boldo tum mere sath aare ho.
Vihaan:(tells) nahin main disha k sath jaunga.? Woh honest person hai.
Madhu:(ask) mere sath jaane main kya problem hai.
Vihaan:(tells) koi problem nahin hai.:(turn togo)
Madhu:(ask) sudden aisa kyun behave kar rahe ho? Meri health ki tension nahin lo
Vihaan:(tells) aisa kuch nahin hai.
Madhu: then kaisa hai.
Vihaan:(turn from herside) go and rest.
Madhu:(ask) tumhe school incident se problem hui kya?wahaan koi Aur bhi kuch bolre the kya?
Vihaan:(tells) see u later.(wentfrom their)
Madhu:(sat down sadly)
Madhu:(negative side) ab sad hone se kya hoga madhu? Yeh toh hona Hi tha.
Madhu: (positive side) don't think much madhu, vihaan love you.
Madhu:(negative side) vihaan don't love u.
Madhu:(went from their).
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In shergill house. After lunch
Vihaan:(hides their)
Madhu:(arrives)
Arka playing with kids.
Kasak:(take her inside) kaisi ho madhu,? vihaan kahan hai.?
Madhu: aaplog ko miss kar rahi thi toh agayi (meet babies)hello kids.
Babys smiles.
Kasak:(ask) sab theek toh haina.
Madhu: haan
Arjun:(tells) tumlog talk karo main baby ke liye milk and tumdono ke liye juice lata hun.:(went)
Kasak:(ask) madhu ab batao kya tension hai.
Madhu:(tells) I am feeling change in my life.
Kasak:(ask) kisse ne kuch kaha tujhse.
Madhu:(tells) sab achche only vihaan change behave kar raha, lost rehta hai, again wedding karna hAi usko mujhse, aj kissi Aur ke sath outdoor jaara hai.
Kasak:(with smile) shaadi wow.
Madhu:(tells) kasak di plz. Serious problem hai.
Kasak:(tells) hosakta hai yeh game hoga, jaise tum sabka game tha. Shimla main.
Arjun:(arrive with juices and give them)
Madhu:(tells) but vihaan mujhe ignore karke chala gaya,(ask) kahin mere face ke bcoz toh aisa nahin haina.
Kasak:(tells) madhu, don't think like that. Tumlog bole the vihaan kya Kara finale main.
Madhu:(tells) you are right but uska behavior.
Vihaan: (arrive and ask) hogayi complain.
Trio get shock.
Vihaan:(take her and went winking at them)
They smiles.
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On the way inside car.
Madhu:(tells) vihaan, don't m-u me.
Vihaan:(fakesternly) tumhe Jo karna tha kiya, mujhe Jo karna hAi karne do.
Madhu:(ask) kya karnewale ho?
Vihaan:(inmind) sorry madhu, tumhe divert karne ke liye yeh fake fight important hai.
Madhu: I am sorry for hurting u.
Vihaan:(tells) na mujhe tumhara sorry chahiye aur na yeh relation.
Madhu: (ask) how can u do this with me?sabka kya hoga kids ka kya
Vihaan: (tells) don't worry hum sath rahenge kids ke liye but strangers hunge eachother ke liye
Family overhear in his mobile.
Madhu:(tells) its not right.
Vihaan: lp ki complain karna right hai kya?
Madhu:(tells) kasak di ask kare toh bola Maine, lie nahin tha truth tha. Tum badalgaye ho.
Vihaan: (tells) then get off my car:(stop)
Madhu:(tells) change hone ka reason sunungi phir jaungi.
Vihaan:(start car and tells) as u wish.
Madhu: batao.
Vihaan switchon music.
Madhu switch off music.
Vihaan:how dare u(switching music)
Madhu: mujhe music nahin reason chahiye.
Vihaan:(tells) main teacher nahin rockstar hun.
Madhu:(tells) main tumhari wife ho
Vihaan:(tells) we are nothing.
They went doing samething with stereo.
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In hall.
Family waiting.
Vibala arrives.
Maanvi:(tells) anger chodo vihaan.
Vihaan:(tells) Jo chodna tha chodiya.
Jeevika: (tells) apni maasi ke liye chodo na.
Vihaan:(tells) don't worry Humlog single father-mother happy hi hai.
Madhu:(get sad and went)
Trio sister follow her.
Vivaan:(tells) leave it vihaan, jab problem hoti hai, sab disturb hojate, madhu bhi hogayi.yeh right nahin hai uske health ke liye, tum usko kahin Aur leke jao happy karo.
Vihaan:(tells) return ayenge toh sab waise hoga, so let me do it plz. U all happy carefree madhu.:(change topic) aap confirm kare doubt ko.
Vivaan: sab lie tha.
All:(ask) kya hua?
Vivaan:(tells) bolne se pehle problem agayi.bhulgaya:(tells) whole thing.
All getshock.
Vivaan:(tells)don't worry wohlog free nahin hosakte ab kabhi. Gunjan madhu complains kare na.
Vihaan:(tells) vivaan Bhaiya jaake dekhiye kya hora hai backyard main.
Vivaan:(madeface ) Jo bhi ho tumne wrong kiya.
Vihaan: wow, vivaan vadera ke paas irritate karne right hai apni lp ko, vihaan vadera ke paas lp ko irritate karne ka right nahin.
Vivaan:(act to punch him and went)
Vihaan:(inmind)ihope madhu divert ho God.
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In backyard!
Trio sister sat consoling sad sister.
Vivaan:(arrives with water) madhu water lo better feel hoga.
Madhu:(take water and start drinking water)
Gunjan:(act to ask) vivaan, vihaan cool down hua.
Vivaan:(normally) nahin.
Gunjan:(tells) madhu tumhi kuch karo ab.
Madhu:(ask) main kya karsakti hun.
Gunjan: surprise karo.
Sehgalsisters: Humlog decoration main help karenge.
Vivaan: main decor items arrange karunga.:(went)
Madhu:(tells) thank-you.
Gunjan: madhu Jo kiya woh repeat nahin kar next time bas.try to grow mentally also. Try to cool vihaan.
Madhu:(tells) usko bhi bolo suspense nahin rakhe, mujhe samjhe.(blame him) sab uske bcoz start hua
Gunjan:(tells) tum sab forget karo
Sehgalsisters: kaise patchup karegi madhu?
Madhu:(tells) I will think.:(went)
Jaanvi:(tells) madhu right thi suspence nahin rakhna tha vihaan.
Maansi: time par grow hona chahiye, vyom madvi ko dekh surprise karte hain.
Gunjan:don't worry , vihaan sab theek kardega. Apka bhai vivaan bhi aise toh tha, jab bhi sad dekhta toh call karke complains karta, fake beard ke liye sad hone kara drama kara tha. Kabhi achcha lagta toh kabhi irritating.
Vihaan:(inmind) main fake memoryloss drama Karun toh I think mere near reheke bhulegi:(hug his s.I.l) aap great ho:(went)
Gunjan:(ask) isko kya hua?
Sehgalsisters: no idea.
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In hospital room!
Vihaan:(tells) arjun bhai call karo na.
Arjun:(tells) its wrong.
Vihaan:(tells) agar aisa nahin hua na toh main alone rehjaunga single father rehjUnga. Vyom madvi ka sochiye. Fight dekhke kaisa lagega unko.
Arjun:(tells) tum right ho.
Vihaan:(tells) then family ko boldijye. Ke mera accident hogaya.
Arjun:(tells) vivaan ke lie se sabko hurt hua tha.
Vihaan: hum separate hogaye toh bhi hurt hoga na.
Arjun: you are right.
Vihaan:(tells) then bandage kariye, agey main sambhalunga.
Arjun: fake anger continue karo. Better rAhega.
Vihaan: okay.
Arjun: good but careful, jinke sath big incident hote woh handle nahin karsakte
Vihaan: I know:(ask) uski again plaster surgery nahin karsakte kya?
Arjun: death life yeh incident ko change nahin karte.
Vihaan:(normally) agar pehle pata hota na toh madhu se pehle main attack hota tha.
Arjun:(felt nice) don't worry sab handle karte late se.madhu bhi handle karegi.
Vihaan:OK then anger continue karlunga.
Arjun: as u wish.
Vihaan:(tells) thanks for helping me.
Arjun: Humlog relatives hai.
Vihaan: see u soon.
Arjun: okay.
Vihaan:(went)
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Back to vm hall!
Family having sweet made by madhu.
Vihaan:(arrives)
Vivaan: yeh sweet try karo vihaan.bahot tasty hai
Vihaan:(ask) aj sweet kyun?
Madhu:(tells) aj hamara union day haina isliye.
Vihaan:(ask) tumne Jo kiya uske baad union ki hope kaise karsakti ho? Madhubala sethi.
Family act to get shock.
Vihaan:(tells) very soon apne liye new lp find karlunga, uske baad sab problems over.
Madhu:(getshock went inside)
Vivaan:(ask) kya hai yeh sab?
Vihaan:dekhte jaiye:(take sweet and start eating)
Jeevika: outer ko include nahin karo vihaan.kab kaun change ho pata nahin.
Vihaan:(ask) vivaan Bhaiya meri tobewife banoge.
Vivaan:(get shock) are you out off your mind.
Vihaan:(tells) aapko bas talk karna hAi mere sath.
Vivaan: okay fine king off suspense. Get ready to face wife anger.
Vihaan:(tells) yeh toh chahta hun, stubborn irritating madhu mile.
Ranvir:(tells) tum win karoge vihaan, jab jaanvi ko cancer ka pata chala toh mere birthday ke arrange karne main busy hogayi. Sadness ko control karke
Jaanvi:(smiles)
Vihaan: now I am more confident.ke sab theek hoga.:(smiles)
Maanvi:(tells) tumse more creative garv hai. Thodi der main patchup Karaya tha.
Vihaan: family lawyer hai afterall. Main family lawyer ka chachu hun.
Family smiles.
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After dinner in maanak room!
Maansi:(islost in thought)
Ronak:(ask) kya sochri ho.?
Maansi:(tells) madhu ke about main.
Ronak:(tells) don't worry patchup ki try karne main Jo hua uske sath bhuljayegi.
Maansi: I wish same.
Ronak:(ask) gunjan ko recover hone main vihaan bhi help Kara toh sab theek hua na agey bhi hoga.
Maansi: I wish same.
Ronak: ek baat bolna tha, tum tense achchi lagti ho.
Maansi:(tells) anger main achchi lagte hain suna.
Ronak:(tells)main thoda different hun.main sochta bhi different hun.
Maansi:(smiles)
Ronak: aise aur achchi lagti ho.
Maansi:(ask) hum last kab fight kare the.
Ronak:ranvir ke love reality sunke, jab jaanvi ko support karna tha tab. Means one time main one time tum.
Maansi:(reminds) first time parents banre the tabhi.
Ronak: separation ke time bhi.
Maansi: meaning 3 times:(smiles)
Ronak:(tells) actually for time MD CEO topic par.
Maansi: (smiles)
Ronak:(ask)dear karlen kya?
Maansi: haan.
Ronak: don't worry.
Maansi: OK.
They take rest.
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In jaaran room!
Jaanvi:(thinking and feeling angry with brother)
Ranvir:(ask) kya baat hai valcono main convert kaise hogayi?
Jaanvi:(tells) vihaan se angry hun.
Ranvir:(ask) kyun?
Jaanvi:(tells) bcoz vihaan apni wife se woh nahin bola Jo tumne bola tha Jaivir ke arrival se pehle.
Ranvir:(tells) kuch log tension main nahin samajhte. Don't underestimate your brother. He will make her move on.
Jaanvi:(smiles)Hope so.
Ranvir:(tells) valentine agaya toh game ke through unite karne ki acting karenge.
Jaanvi: nice idea rp.
Ranvir: kuch idea do.
Jaanvi:(tells) kuch themes rakhenge.like handwriting guess karna, couples se creativity karainge.single hand se drawing.
Ranvir:(smiles) not bad idea.
Jaanvi: kitna achcha hoga sab couples sath hunge.
Ranvir:(ask) ek baat bolun?
Jaanvi: haan bolo.
Ranvir: iloveu.:(smiles)
Jaanvi: I love u to.
Ranvir:(hug her, get romantic with her)
Jaanvi:(get shy)
He close lights.
Then both romance.
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In vigun room!
Vivaan is worried for helping brother.
Gunjan:(ask) kya hua vivaan?
Vivaan:(tells) main kaise help karunga pata nahin, woh bhi brother ki love intrest banke.
Gunjan:(tells) tumhe only call karna hAi, Baki sab vihaan handle karega.
Vivaan:(tells) ladka hoke ladki wale work karun main.wow.
Gunjan:(explain) tum help nahin karoge toh kaun karega.
Vivaan:(tells) then khud help karo ladki bhi ho tum.
Gunjan:(tells) aise kaise?tum Hi karo.
Vivaan:(tells) kya wife aur brother mile hain, bandplay kardi meri.
Gunjan:(ask) kahin prem toh nahin ho.
Vivaan:(tells) yes triplets mom- mam
Gunjan:(tells) Mr prem tum gunjan mam Hi bolo, triplet's mom only triplet's dad bolsakte hain.
Vivaan:(tells) main Hi toh hun.
Gunjan:(request) don't confuse me.
Vivaan: humlog triplets ke parents hai.
Gunjan:(felt nice)
Vivaan:(ask)ek baat ask karna hAi.
Gunjan: haan bolo.
Vivaan:(ask) tumhe kabhi laga ke tumne mujhse love karke wrong kiya.
Gunjan:(tells) not at all. Infact angel ho tum, Jo apne sath bahot happiness leke agaya.
Vivaan:(tells) iam OK as human. And he's what ever you have it is a gift by gd.
Gunjan: tumhe bhi God send kare Na.for me.
Vivaan:(smiles)
They rest.
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In vibala room!
Madhu:(inmind) kaise cool down karun vihaan ko.
Vihaan:(inmind) sorry madhu, tum carefree irritating achchi lagti ho, depress nahin.
Madhu:(ask) party main kyun nahin gaye?
Vihaan:(tells)tum believe karo ya na karo, mujhe sabko tension nahin show karna tha .
Madhu:(ask) kab tak angry rahoge. Main sorry boli na thoda misguide hogayi thi.
Vihaan:(normally) late hogaya.
Madhu:(tells) last chance do plz.Main bhi toh chance dithi na two times.
Vihaan: (start acting)woh different situations the. Yeh different hai, meri Jo wife thi aj morning tak, woh believe nahin karti mujhpe.aur na love karti
Madhu: aisa kuch nahi hai.
Vihaan: aisa Hi hai.:(turns) good night:
Madhu:(inmind) I wish vihaan follow nahin karta mujhe.
Vihaan:(inmind) I wish tum Aur gunjan bhabhi jail nahin aate.
Madhu:(inmind) God sab pehle jaisa kardo.
Vihaan:(inmind) madhu bhuljao Jo hua tumhare sath hua, Family ke liye Hi nahin mere liye tum important ho.
Madhu:(inmind) iamsorry vihaan.
Vihaan:(inmind) iam sorry madhu. Main Jo bhi kar raha hun , achche reason se kar raha hun
Madhu:(inmind) kya karun main.?
Vihaan:(inmind) vivaan Bhaiya call karo mujhe.
Madhu:(inmind) main kal se vihaan ko melt karna start karti fav things karke.
Vihaan:(inmind) God, madhu se doubt karado.
Madhu:(inmind) lets rest.
The take rest.









Edited by Ranjan-Maanak - 9 years ago

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