RM/AnSh FF ~you are amazing~ (Discontinued)

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Hi Friends,
This is my first ever FF. 😊
The story is based on my two favorite couples.
Rahul Muskaan (dill mill gayye-star one)
Anna Sharad (badi door se aaye hain-sab TV)

This is the story about 4 people. All 4 are self independent and always do what they want. None of them believes in destiny. But destiny has already planned for them. How they meet? Ho will they react after meeting? Will they fight? or became friends? or something more than that?

Character Sketch:

Rahul Garewal

Successful fashion designer of the industry. He is happy go lucky guy. Makes friends easily. He is charming, handsome, dashing. Girls drool over him. He had few relationships before but none of them was serious one.

Muskaan Chaddha

A young talented ,hard working girl. She has completed her graduation hotel management. She is an Entrepreneur. She loves to serve people and see happiness on their faces. With passing years her buisness is growing bigger. She is beautiful by looks and heart too. She is total chatter box.

Sharad Ghotala

Charming and fun loving guy. Just completed his graduation and want to
become a successful photographer, recently came to Mumbai for further
opportunities. He is single and ready to mingle.

Anna D'souza

Young very bubbly girl. She has came to Mumbai to become a fashion
designer. She is extrovert and makes friends very easily. She is complete
chatter box either.

***Please do comment. good or bad any but do. Forgive me for my mistakes. And tell me if I go wrong in any rule of IF. Thank you all.


Index
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2- page 1
Part 3- page 2

Love you all,
mishti_forever
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

Rahul Garewal's studio

"oh common rosy this is not done" He said removing his glasses.

"But rahul we tried to contact all top models" she replied.

"Yah and none of them have time from their ongoing consignments" He sipped
water.

"Rahul you don't worry you will get best match for new collection and you
still have a month in hand" she smiled.

"yah thats true, we can wait for the best, hey hay hold on why you are saying you? are you planning to ditch me now? when there is hardly a month to go" he raised his eyebrow.

"Rahul actually I am getting married so .." she startled.

"you have to leave me alone in middle of ocean" he frowned.

"hhmmm" she nodded.

"this is not done yar. how can you do this to me?" he questioned her.

"I am sorry rahul but you don't worry I have found substitute for me" she smiled

"ohh wow now you have planned everything by yourself" he said sarcastically.

"Sorry but please it's my wedding " she made a puppy face.

"and what about me?" he asked like a child.

"rahul you are the best so you will rock this time also, with new assistant and she won't let you down" she smiled promisingly.

"hmmm. but I am going to kick your husband for this" he winked.
"rahulll" she hit him.

"I am happy for you" he gave her side hug " congratulations and before you
Invite me ,let me tell you I'll be attending your wedding " he smiled.

"I knew it. thank you. you are the best" she hugged him.

"By the way whom you have found out?" he asked her.

"Anna D'souza, my cousin from goa. She has moved to mumbai few months back and completed her graduation in fashion designing so she can assist you well" she replied.

"well you haven't left me any option" he sighed "Let's give her a chance" he
smiled "send her tomorrow morning"

"Yes she will be here tomorrow" rosy said.

"Congratulations again and have a great time" He greeted her again before
leaving.



Next Morning

7 AM Beep Beep Beep ****

A hand came out of comforter and tapped on the clock and alarm went off.

9 AM Tring Tring Tring ***

Again the same hand came out of comforter and picked the call "HEllo" sheepishly

"Hello Anna?"

"hmmm Anna here. who are you? and why are you calling so early?" she replied
while yawning.

"early?? Anna???" rosy shouted

"Rosy" Anna jerked and sat in her bed.

"it's 9 o'clock dear. Wake up. It's your first day Anna. You can't be late" she
said all this in one breath.

"oh my god I am late" she got out of bed "rosy I am getting ready bye bye bye" she hang the call and ran into washroom.

In 35 min she managed herself to get ready for her first day. She was wearing a knee length sky blue sleeveless dress with elegant pair of earrings and bracelet. Lastly she wore her matching boots , picked her bag and ran out of apartment.

For her bad luck there was no auto outside her apartment. "ohh god" she started walking towards main road in the hope of an auto. "I don't want to get late. Anna you are so stupid how can you sleep like this?" she was talking to herself."Please god send one auto please" she was praying hard. Finally after 10min of waiting she got an auto.


After half an hour Rahul Garewal's studio

Bunch of crushed papers were lying on floor. Rahul was leaning over the
table with pencil in his hand and trying to sketch something. He was so
engrossed in his work that he had forgot about Anna. He heard a knock on door.

"come in" he said.

Anna entered in the room with surprised expressions. She had imagined
something different like a well maintained office. Rahul Garewal the famous designer must be very professional but the scene in front of her was totally different. Room was messed. The Rahul Garewal was in casuals like a cool dude. When he didn't even bother to look up Anna started.

"Excuse me sir" she said and he looked up through his glasses.

"Sir?" he looked around the room. "me?" with confused expressions.

"yes SIR" she pointed towards him.

"I am not a sir" he stood straight now

she smiled "Hi Rahul I am Anna D'Souza"

"oh Hi Anna, Rosy has told me about you" he smiled back "welcome to my studio" he smiled widely.

"thank you rahul and sorry I am late" she replied.

He looked at watch, it was 11 AM "hey chill don't be sorry. No formalities"
he said and she relieved.

She walked to the table where he was drawing sketches.

"they are looking innovative" she said.

"really? u liked them?" he asked with bright smile.

"yes they are pretty." she replied.

"thanks. I think we should go in another room" he said looking at mess around.

She giggled "sure"

They both came out of rahul's cabin "I'll show you your cabin first come"
and he started walking and she followed him.

"this is your cabin Anna" he showed her. She felts awesome as it was her first cabin. Before this she was working with her friends boutique so there were no personal cabin and all.

"thank you so much rahul" she overjoyed.

"Anna we are going to have a show in a month and we have to start from zero"
he scratched his head.

"wow my first show is with you The Rahul Garewal" she said dreamingly.

Rahul looked at her "Anna you will get time for dreaming later now we need to start working on our target" and winked.

"oohhh oops. yes yes we should start. so tell me" she asked.

"Come in my cabin after settling her" he smiled and left.

"yesss" she jumped with joy.


************
Let me know hows that 😊
Your Comments are valuable 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love both the couples! Story is interesting <3
Do continue soon & do buddy me please :)
Keep writing dear :D
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Originally posted by: Dark.Desires




I love both the couples! Story is interesting <3
Do continue soon & do buddy me please :)
Keep writing dear :D


Glad you liked it 😊
Both couples are too adorable 😊
Thank you so much for you appreciation 😊
I'll continue soon 😳
Edited by mishti_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii mish...
i found really less ff on DMG characters other than AR
its interesting...
will love to read further
the 2nd couple well i donow even single alphabet A of them...
do cont..soon
love u for the pm
with love
sanju
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Originally posted by: sanjudmgian

Hiii mish...

i found really less ff on DMG characters other than AR
its interesting...
will love to read further
the 2nd couple well i donow even single alphabet A of them...
do cont..soon
love u for the pm
with love
sanju


Hi sanju
Glad you liked it 😊
There N number of ffs on RM
I'll send you link, you will surely like them.
Second couple is equally adorable 😳
Keep reading 😊
Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2
Same day , same time, different part of city

"sharad I don't know anything you have to come" a guy shouted on call.

"Sorry yar Sam I really can't come" he tried to convince his friend.

"Work work work ohhh common man you are such a workaholic" he made a disgusting face.

"Hey it's my passion I love to do it" he said calmly.

"yah yah whatever have fun then catch you some other day" he said.

"yup Sam see you soon" he smiled and hang the call.


"Sharad we are getting late, shall we leave?" his colleague asked him.

"yes pooja we shall leave now or we will be late for inauguration" he smiled.

Both of them got in car and drove to the venue. Pooja is sharad's friend and she is working for a local magazine. Since when sharad has moved to mumbai he is working with her for her magazine's photo shoots. His passion for photography not allowed him to miss any single opportunity came in his way. He is happy that he is doing what he wants still he is not satisfied. He has to go long way .

"Sharad You go and set your camera I'll park car and come" pooja said.

"yah sure pooja" he smiled and got down.

He walked up to the entrance of the shop. He smiled looking at view there.
It was fully loaded with youngsters, kids, ladies , uncle aunties. The hording of the shop is simple only showing name of shop "cakes & smiles" with artistic sketches of cakes. He take out his camera and started clicking some snaps of entrance, hording, crowd.

"sharad Shall we head in? or you need some more time here?" pooja came from
behind.

"Hey that's enough of here." and they walked inside the cake shop making
way through the crowd.

The view from inside was more eye catching than outside. The shop was not huge but not so small either. It is normal sized cake shop, arranged in very attractive way. The color combinations used in shop with very care of customer's taste. Cakes, pastries, cupcakes, muffins, rolls,... wide range of mouth watering delicacies were displaying on counters. Sharad were taking snaps of all these things very carefully while Pooja tried to reach the counter but she got stuck back only so she tried to ask a lady

"can I know where is muskaan chaddha?" she asked.

"see there she is" a lady pointed towards the last counter.

There was a young , beautiful girl in her late twenties serving people.
She was wearing a simple blue jeans and light yellow tunic with matching
accessories. Her hair were tied in a pony. Her smile was prominent explaining her name perfectly 'muskaan'.

"thanks" she smiled and rushed there.

"Hi I am pooja from the local food magazine of the city." she introduced herself to the beautiful young lady.

"Hi I am muskaan chaddha" she replied

"the owner of the famous cake shop 'cakes & smiles'" pooja smiled.

Muskaan smiled brightly. "my pleasure"

"Can I have an small talk with you for our magazine? I know it's not a right time" pooja indicated the rush " but it will be great if you spare 15 min please?"

"yah sure no problem dear just you have to bear with disturbance" she smiled.

"hey that's completely fine" pooja replied.

By the time sharad has arrived there with lots of yummy clicks.

"Hi ladies" he got their attention. "I am sharad colleague of pooja, I am here to take photos of this beautiful place " he smiled.

"welcome to 'cakes & smiles , sharad and pooja" muskaan greeted them.

"Muskaan this is the 2nd branch in the city and it is already overflowing. how it feels?" pooja asked.

"It feels delightful. I love to serve people and make them smile and baking cakes is my passion so I just love my this job." she smiled "to see people appreciating ,liking your work make me intent" she smiled.

"you are an entrepreneur. so as a entrepreneur which obstacles came in your way?" pooja asked and sharad were shooting conversation in parallel.

"It is not easy to built your own business but I feel lucky that I have my
family support and I met people who guided me well. There were many small small things you need to take care while building any business. How to invest? where to invest? locations? taste of people" she replied. "Work hard for your dreams and you will achieve them one day"

"If muskaan chaddha were not an owner of 'cakes & smiles' then what she would have been?" yet another question.

"hmmm. Basically I am a big foody" she laughed. "So I keep thinking only about it , so except that what I can do I don't know" She said dramatically leaving pooja and sharad in confusion. "hehehe chill guys I am just kidding. I haven't ever thought about it. That's tough one. But whatever it would be , it will be something that makes me happy. And just because someone wants me to do it, I wont ever do it unless I liked that work." she said confidently.

"That's cool muskaan. 'Do what you want' right?" pooja smiled.

"yes exactly" she smiled.

"can I ask one question?" sharad asked.

"ya sure" muskaan replied.

"Which is your favorite cake? coz all are looking so tempting and too yummy"
he asked.

She giggled a bit" lets say triple Choco punch. I liked all but this one is
my favorite" she smiled.

"yummyyy I am going to have it now" sharad said sheepishly.

"Last question for now. Any further plans? any other branch?" pooja asked.

"hmmm. at-least not for now. But within a couple of years there might be more branches" she smiled happily.

"Thank you muskaan for answering us" pooja smiled.

"Hey don't be. It's my pleasure. and It feels great" she replied.

"I'll send you a copy of this month's magazine" pooja smiled.

"Thank you pooja and sharad" she smiled "this is for you" she gave them cupcakes
"as a compliment"

"Thank you muskaan" sharad smiled.

"Have a great day. Visit again" she waved them bye.



**********
Hope you will like it.
I don't have any idea about any of the professions but I liked them so if there are any mistakes forgive me.

Edited by mishti_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dear! Loved the encounter of Sharad & Muskaan
Continue soon & thanks for pm dear! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishti_forever


Glad you liked it 😊
Both couples are too adorable 😊
Thank you so much for you appreciation 😊
I'll continue soon 😳



🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyy Mishti..!! 😃
How are you..fit n fine??
Sorry couldn't comment earlier..just busyy these days..
But I read it and the both parts are Mind-Blowing 😊
Loved it to the core...and I love the both jodis <3
You are even good writer than me...will love to read more..
Superb concept..cont soon...
Luv u...take care ^_^

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