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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shenaz.K.S

Plz update soon I want to now is he alright n sorry for not commenting for last four pts I was little busy
Plz update asap. I cant wait.

Dats kk
updating 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

SUPERB UPDATE...😉😉😉
KEEP WRITING AND UPDATING AND LAST GIVING PMS
THNKS FOR IT

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
~Chapter 10~


Sanyukta was shouting Randhirr Randhirr Randhir..
but she didnt get reply.. she started crying,she lost the hope..
After some time ,she heard a voice- ab tumhara rona dhona band hogya ho to upar kichogi mujhe(Actually when randhir fell down,he was in shock .. And more than that she was scared,because of that words failed to come out of his mouth 😆)

Sanyukta was happy that Randhir is alive,she moved her hand towards Randhir to take him out but failed ,then she made a rope of vegitation around her(Which she learnt in self defemce clases long back [:p]) and she take him out...

When Randhir came out ,he fell on Sanyukta... there was a small eye lock,
Sanyukta got up and hugged him and asked him if he is okk he replied that he is ok and
thanked Sanyukta for saving him

Then suddenly Sanyukta realised that she is hugging Randhir, she got embaressed and she decides to go back to the group and Randhir also joins her..
after sometime they reaches there,the tents were all set and vids & kausto made the dinner... after having dinner they decides to play truth & dare...
Vids rotates the bottel

1st kausto.. she choose truth... Randhir asks about her 1st crush & she says jiggy evey1 starts teasing jiggy
2nd... vids...dare and she got dare to propose a boy from group
She goes to parth and proposes him 😉
. 3rd... Sanyukta.. she choosed dare.. now eveyone tells her to dance her with Randhir

S- no yaar mujhe nhi krna dance

j- are agarmila h dare to karna hi pdega

S-(teasing)- are yaar dance aur wo bhi is joker ksath??

R- agar nhi ata dance to bol do lady hittler

s- aisi bat nhi h.. chlo get up aj mein dikha dungi k muje dance ata h.

Sanyukta & Randhir starts to dance,now Sanyukta's hands are on Randhir's shoulder & Randhir's hands are on Sanyukta's waist..both looking into each other's eyes


Main toh bas teri chaahat mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein chahoon rehna sada
Saaya bhi teramain, hone na doon juda
Maine tay kar liya
Tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Teri rooh pe, tere jism pe
Bas haqq hai ik mera...
Bas haqq hai ik mera
Main toh basteri chaahat
mein chahoon rehna sada
Main toh bas teri kurbat mein
chahoon rehna sada..


They were so lost in each other that they forgot that everyone was looking at them every1 started doing clapping and they came out of sandhirland...

Sanyukta went from there,she was so lost in Randhir dreams that she went in forest,Randhir too followed her...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ughh
jaldi se unreserve kardena maharani ji
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsme update
Loved it

Thank god rd is saved
Sanyu was so worried
She saved rd

Sandhir dancing

I think sanyu is also falling for rd

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update :)
Superb :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel__Tamanna

Ughh
jaldi se unreserve kardena maharani ji


Nhi
19th k baad😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
a forest scene.. Its getting interesting.. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Randhir is saved by sanyukta😊
Loved sandhir's dance😊
Now sandhir will be in jungle😉
Waiting for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
too good !! tamatar ...
rd Bach gya ! thank god..
moi ne resss nhi kiya !! happy :)...
update asap

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