~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added) - Page 31

Originally posted by: -chocoangel-

Heyyyaaa dear sry fr this late
n thnks a loads fr ur pms readin tha whole stry in one go
Its awwwsummm grt
in 1st part arghhh i hated tht karan tht male b$&@h hw cn he do tht woth kannu yr
sanyus assumptions abt guys were obvious
n i liked her devotion twrds their frndship so
pure n innocent
in 2nd chappy poor rd bechaara got slap in first meet itself lol
love at forst site fr two couples over here hehehe
sanyu made assumptions abt rd too soon bt its nt hr fault situations are like tht only
n with kausto too she ws bit rude
3rd chappy arghhh mere rd ko firse slap nw this is enough ha huh bhalaai ka to
zamaana hi nhi
Poor auto waale bhaiya
4th chappy
rd kuch to response do yr dont be a lover boy
lol kaust n jiggy talks makin sandhir sit with each other lol
last scene mst say wht a coincidence awsuuummm
nw wht will be their rkn lets see

Originally posted by: -chocoangel-

Okayyy this fifth chappy ws awww awww and awww
parrrtyyy yaaayyy
But poor rd yaar three meetings but tino me bechaare ko slap hi mile bt now i m not angry cuz rd ne iss baari apna anger shw kr hi diya
it ws n awww scene when sandhir confrntd but vids n kausto arggghhh wht a perfect timin they hv gltten hats offf gals
i hope sanyu rd ko sb jldi bta de
Imma sooo happy nw their relationship gonna strt a new

Originally posted by: -chocoangel-

He proposed he proposed he propsed yesss he did but kuch jldi ho gaya
hawww sanyu maan gayi

Wth it ws jiggy rd ws dreamin arghhh pure excitemnt ki waat lag gayi

Originally posted by: heyu..smile.

Di

It was awesome

As always..

Loved it

Hitler sanyu🤣

Randhir fell off the cliff?

Haw u left the ff too on a cliify🤣

Cntinue soon di

N thnx fr the pm

Originally posted by: Indhu27

Nice update!!! but reading the last few line I got mini heart attack ...I hope this is a dream lik hamare CVs dete hain ;-)

Originally posted by: kyara7

omg...rd ko kuch mat krna...plz update soonish...

Originally posted by: namya

What happened??

Can't wait ..update soon

Originally posted by: pd786

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">this is sanyukta's assumption</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">she feels that if he comes close to her, she will lose him like the rest</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">lovely update</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">okay now i will read your story regularly</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">and comment too</font>

Originally posted by: -foreverhers-

OMG!! I'm late!!
Damn! 9 chapters already?? Tu toh Rajdhani express ko bhi peeche choding re!
Anyways, the uniqueness of the story is what defines it.
After reading all the parts in one go, it seems as if Randhir's and Sanyukta's souls have been somehow interchanged.😆
A strong headed, arrogant Sanyukta and a vibrant amiable Randhir is a really unique combination and has a different flavour to it.
I'm looking forward to read much much much more twist and turns.

Oh my! So Randhir seems in danger and Sanyukta is gonna be the saviour?
Ohhooo!! Just can't wait for the next update!!

Regards
Keya

Originally posted by: sweetshre

amazing parts...
atlast Sanyu accepted rd's friendship..
did u seriously do that😲
now update next part asap plzzz 😉

Originally posted by: Sarim.fatmi

hey tamanna another stunning update. awesome yaar. love d way sanyu is thinking abt rd. she is slowly slowly falling for rd. but yaar yeh Kya ek aur cliffy. ab rd ko kya hua. I hope he is safe n f9. do update soon