~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added) - Page 28

Great updates :)

OMG!!!! Kya huya randhir ko???

Super se upar ^_^

randhirs fall must be a dream isn't it..

Heyyyaaa dear sry fr this late
n thnks a loads fr ur pms readin tha whole stry in one go
Its awwwsummm grt
in 1st part arghhh i hated tht karan tht male b$&@h hw cn he do tht woth kannu yr
sanyus assumptions abt guys were obvious
n i liked her devotion twrds their frndship so
pure n innocent
in 2nd chappy poor rd bechaara got slap in first meet itself lol
love at forst site fr two couples over here hehehe
sanyu made assumptions abt rd too soon bt its nt hr fault situations are like tht only
n with kausto too she ws bit rude
3rd chappy arghhh mere rd ko firse slap nw this is enough ha huh bhalaai ka to
zamaana hi nhi
Poor auto waale bhaiya
4th chappy
rd kuch to response do yr dont be a lover boy
lol kaust n jiggy talks makin sandhir sit with each other lol
last scene mst say wht a coincidence awsuuummm
nw wht will be their rkn lets see

Di

Okayyy this fifth chappy ws awww awww and awww
parrrtyyy yaaayyy
But poor rd yaar three meetings but tino me bechaare ko slap hi mile bt now i m not angry cuz rd ne iss baari apna anger shw kr hi diya
it ws n awww scene when sandhir confrntd but vids n kausto arggghhh wht a perfect timin they hv gltten hats offf gals
i hope sanyu rd ko sb jldi bta de
Imma sooo happy nw their relationship gonna strt a new

Nice update!!! but reading the last few line I got mini heart attack ...I hope this is a dream lik hamare CVs dete hain ;-)

He proposed he proposed he propsed yesss he did but kuch jldi ho gaya
hawww sanyu maan gayi

Wth it ws jiggy rd ws dreamin arghhh pure excitemnt ki waat lag gayi

omg...rd ko kuch mat krna... plz update soonish...