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Posted: 10 years ago
Tk u for pm
Fan twist now let's see wt happens next
Plz update soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: twni

khub bhalo (very nice)

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Twinkle_SR

Hehe awsm...
Sanyu kitne baar thappad maregi bichare Randhir ko..?
Well fir bhi mast update tha..
Sorry for late reply..
Update soon...😊

Thank you
dats kk
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Shenaz.K.S

Tk u for pm
Fan twist now let's see wt happens next
Plz update soon 😳

Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all sorry dear for late rply
was bit busy
Bt read all parts
and loved it
Story is getting interesting
I must say Rd ko bahut jaldi gussa a jata hai
Wow nw SanDhir will be neighbours
I would really be interesting
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Fairy...

First of all sorry dear for late rply

was bit busy
Bt read all parts
and loved it
Story is getting interesting
I must say Rd ko bahut jaldi gussa a jata hai
Wow nw SanDhir will be neighbours
I would really be interesting
Update soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)

Thank you So much
dats kk
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Posted: 10 years ago
~Chapter 5~


Vidushi - (in excitement) chlo kaustoki & Sanyukta,house warming party krte h,logon ko bhi to pta chle k hmne new house mein shift kia hai

k- yea dats a gr8 idea

S- listen guys mujhe in sb cheezon mein koi intrest nahi hai

k- bt hum bulayenge kisko hamari party mein

v- Randhir,jiggy & parth ko, aur hum jante hikisko h yaha

k- yea acha idea h

s- plz stop dis nonsence,kya krna h un boys k sath party krke.

k- bt they are vry nice na

v- yea she is right wo kitne ache h sab

s- kuch ache nhi hote,sb ek jaise hote h bs shaklein aur names badal jate h..All boys are same

v& k makes innocent faces and tries to convince Sanyukta & Sanyukta agrees on a condition That she wont be involved in party,she will just sit and watch everything

v & k goes to boys house to invite den for party & boys agrees

In party ..
They decides to do couple dance .jiggy & kaustoki (as always)parth & vidushi (bcz parth wanted sandhir to dance together as he knew that randhir likes sanyukta)

Here sanyukta was sitting alone.. Randhir asks her for dance,bt she ignores,Randhir gets angry and holded her hand forcefull and takes her to dance .. Sanyukta was about to slap him,but suddenly she dropped the idea as she already slapped him twice

r(angrily) - maro na ruk q gyi,ek bat btao tmapne sare friends k sath aise hi behave krti ho yaye special treatment sirf mere liye h..

s(more than angry)- shut up

r- why should i shut up.. if i am not saying anything den u vl do any thing??? listen miss Sanyukta dont take my kindness as a sign of weekness

s- just shut up

r- tumhari mom bhi tumhari tarah hitler h kya?? muje lagta h k unhone tumhare paida hone se phle action movies dkhi hongi sari ya world war dekhi hogi.

After listening abt friends & mom, Sanyukta losther patience nd slaps him very very tightly..Randhir can see pain in her eyes,she was about to cry bt she was holding her tears nd went inside her room .. Boys too went back

Sanyukta went in her room and locked the door,she started crying very badly,on the other side Randhir was feeling very badafter hurting hershe was crying and Randhir came in her room through balcony and Sanyukta was unaware from this..

Randhir comes and wipes her tears very gently,there was alot of care in Randhir's eyes.

s- what are u doing here??

r-i know something is wrong Sanyukta

s- jst get out of here

r- we are friends,so u can share ur problems with me

s(angrily)- mere koi friends nhi h,chle jao tum yaha se nd u was saying about my mother na nd you are having no right to say about her because she is not alive. so now get lost.

r- oh am so sorry,bt we can become friends i promise i vl always be there for your help,just trust me

he puts his hands on Sanyukta's shoulders after listening all this,she feels that Randhir really cares for her and she was about to hug Randhir,vidushi &kaustuki knocks the door and calls Sanyukta

s- just go from here Randhir

R- no,i vl not go,today i want to know eveything

s- Randhir there is nothing to tell u,plz go otherwise they vl come inside

v&k- Sanyukta open the door

s- (loudly)- wait m coming in 2 minutes

s-now go from here please

r-no tell me everything,from begining to end

s- now u just go i am going to open the door

she was about to open the door,her hand was on handel of the door, but Randhir stops her by touching her hand and there was a cute eye lock and at the eye lock was broken by voice of v&k 's voice and Randhir leaves her room then she talks to v & k and tells that everything is all right and closes the door..

At night Randhir was thinking about the eyelock,those choclaty brown eyes,her silky hairs, her sweet voice,tries to sleep bt unable to sleep

on the other side Sanyukta was also thinking about Randhir,his eyes,his care all the things and she thinks- whats happening to me,just concentrate on ur studies and slowly hits her own head with hand nd smiles




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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Awesome update👏
Finally sandhir had normal conversation😊
Hoping that their friendship begins soon😊
Update soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you sooo...much di For pm off course and for this lovely update tk u much loved it I think randhir or sanyu ab shayad frnds ban sakte h and rd to rd h sanyu se sacchai ugalva hi lega
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update!!!
Loved it
Randhir's concern for sanyu was so sweet
Really good

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