#4 Arshi FF: Smitten By The Neighbour ~Next Thread Link on Page 146~ - Page 46

Originally posted by: basriya

omg..

Originally posted by: Anu567

Beautiful update, waiting to see how Swati thinks she will achieve her wicked ends. Feel terrible for A and K and their lost love.

Best,

Originally posted by: SilentShadow

One MU just ended.

Now this. Such a web of MUs they have.

I hope Swati doesnt appears and complicates everything.

Great update! 😳

Originally posted by: shalbi

I really don't understand why di pleople don't listen to the entire conversation.. It causes a lot of misunderstanding and the same happened with them..

and god, why is swathi back now, after so many years, wasn't she the one who walked out on them, now she want samrat back..

Well I know arnav is just not going to sit back and let that happen but still..

Continue soon

Please continue soon

Oh... no.. Tanvi..

first of all sorry for my late response

Hi Tanvi,
First of all sorry for commenting late, but I did read the chapter on the same day you posted.

Now coming to chapter, what to say...it started on such a lovely note but as it progressed it started turning and by the end it took a total 360 degrees turn.

I loved that they both have gotten comfortable with each other and enjoying their sex life. I felt sad though when Arnav asked if Khushi was ready for making love and not just having sex and she hid her true feelings... I know she is scared right now but one day she will surely reveal that she loves Arnav.

All the baby talk and both their feelings about it were penned down really well, specially Khushi's...Arnav is scared of losing Khushi as she hasn't accepted her feelings for him openly yet but Khushi wanting a child from him and crying and then making herself understand the circumstances was wonderfully written. Though she managed to accept the fact that Arnav doesn't want another child but the reason behind it isn't what she assumed...I wish she had heard the whole conversation between Arnav and Ratna. But the fact that she didn't fight or avoided Arnav after hearing part of their conversation was the best... I thought she will start avoiding Arnav now. I loved the fact that you wrote what I wasn't expecting...that's the best thing a writer can do, coz if you write what the reader thinks/expects you will write then it's no fun. I personally make extra effort while writing my chapter that I surprise the readers by writing something different from what they expect. And that's exactly what I feel while reading your chapter and I absolutely love it.

Samrat doing Arnav's makeup was hilarious, I laughed so much.

One thing that particularly intrigued me was the mention of using protection every time except for the resort when they first time did it. You mentioned it explicitly so after reading it, all I could make out was that Khushi will indeed get pregnant and then think that Arnav won't be happy and then this will come out that she heard his conversation with his mother and I'm getting a feeling all this will happen while the custody case will be going on. For now Khushi didn't say anything but I have a feeling this baby stuff will come up again and then they would have an argument about it and may be end up revealing their fears to each other.

This custody case will bring them closer emotionally and might also help Khushi reveal her true feelings for Arnav.

What to say about Swati...she left Samrat at such a tender age and now after all these years wants him back. Where the hell was she all these years?? Was she busy trapping another rich guy?
Well let's see how they deal with this Swati/custody issue.

I had so much to say about this chapter and hopefully I said it all and haven't forgotten any point...though now I think I should stop my ranting...hopefully you won't be bored reading it.

Love
Preet

Loved the last chapter...Arnav's reaction was so typical and was not a big fan of his answer to samarats request...felt for Khushi really did...loveeed it

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