#4 Arshi FF: Smitten By The Neighbour ~Next Thread Link on Page 146~ - Page 28

Originally posted by: phillips_2909

offho seems like another twist is coming

can't wait more

may be his thought would change with her mum

waiting for next update


nice update

congrats

Originally posted by: sincereme

Awesome update. .

Arnav and Khushi can't seem to keep their hands off each other... At this rate Khushi is going to get pregnant very soon.. 😉

Sam doesn't want siblings. . He is very very possessive. . His parents would going to have a hard time in making him agree.. That is if they want a child..

Loved the update. .

Originally posted by: rdforfun

great update

Hope your little doll feels better now.

waiting for next

Originally posted by: jyothirockz

hey Tanvi...

all this fire and passion..i was thinking about contraception...and there you go with the discussion of kids... But with so much insecurities and lack of trust and understanding between them ... having a kid would be detremental to the balance they have achieved now... they need to realize and confess what they really feel for each other...hope they wont end up with shooting verbally again...

P.S: Khushi's vocabulary is dangerous for elementary school teacher😉

Originally posted by: pinkly

Wow.. What a story. I just finished reading all chapters in one go.

You have created Rishi's character and written his dialogues with so much love... Whenever I read Rishi talking to khushi, I had tears in my eyes. When he talked to khushi after her wedding with arnav and said bye to her... I was just crying buckets :-). You have beautifully written khushi and Rishi's past and their dialogues.

The advice Garima gave khushi before she left were so appropriate filled with love for her daughter. I loved it very much.

Samrat is a sweetheart. Everybody in raizada household seem nice and understanding towards khushi.

Arnav and Khushi's relationship seem very volatile. There is still so much angst, past memories... Looks like it is going to take some more time for them to understand, respect and truly love each other.

Nicely written and very emotional story. Liked it very much.

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx

Congrats for the new thread🥳

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx

Beautiful update

Iloved this chapter very much,one of my favorite

Nice to see them happy after long time.I am glad that Khushi has started feeling her love for Arnav. Hope they confess their feelings soon

So Samrat is not ready for a sibling, hope he agrees and we get to see a little Arnav or a little Khushi.😉

P.S.Hope your baby girl gets well soon

Originally posted by: supervin76

Hi Tanvi,

This is such a beautiful story. I just read from the start at onego and have fallen in love with it. I love the way you have sketched out Samrat. He is so adorable and more importantly very very believable. His behaviour, his talks everything is exactly like how a five year old boy. Superb job. His parents have a tough job ahead keeping their raging passions in check around this firecracker.

Originally posted by: sonia_92

I have to tell you this, I adore sumrah, and I usually don't adore kids so much, but his character is adorable. also, very very steamy chapter. loved every bit of it

Originally posted by: -Sparsh-

Nice