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Posted: 10 years ago
a story from Arnav's perspective... that too a different Arnav from the one we regularly see... and a beautiful Khushi who became his inspiration at the very first sight... and he to her... its beautiful... an artist and his muse... wow... how amazingly she understands him, his painting, i meant... how easily he read her face... loved those subtle flirting from him & those pretty blushing from her... the muse is slowly but surely turning into love, hai naa... this is Beauuutiful... really lovely Minty... waiting for more...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update as usual Minty
So Arnav is attracted to khushi at an alarming rate. Loved how u described how excited khushi was to be in a flight.
Seems like by the end of this trip Arshi would be a couple. So eager for that
Thanks for the pm minty
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Posted: 10 years ago
I always wondered how she would react on seeing herself as a muse and her reaction was simply beautiful. She being surprised was kind of expected, but a tear trailing down her eye added the 'real' to her emotions. And well, wasn't that their first hug! Mereko bahot cute lagi.
Khushi is a pure soul and her goodness reflects in her every move. Her childlike glee is enthralling and her wish of 'being given the liberty to dream' is heartfelt. I really hope she gets her due appreciation soon. Well, Arnav did hint at something, nai? A surprise visit to a famous dance virtuoso or her getting a chance to perform. Something like that??

I have never been to Udaipur but it isn't difficult to visualize what the City looks like. The way you have described its culture, the locals, the tourist attraction it holds and the various food delicacies, is perfect. I am not sure how splendid his next painting of hers at the lake side turned out to be. The backdrop setting and her appearance had been so deeply imprinted into his mind and then replicated on the canvas that it is difficult to do the same and not match up to the picture he has already painted.

This chapter was a play of emotions via the words. The way she appreciated an ugly duckling and later went on to praising the 'ugly' shows how well she understands him, as a person who is not perfect and as an artist who is absolutely the best.
The way he described the beauty of the colour 'white' shows how accepting and selfless he is for every thing that he comes across.

I think he is going to paint her very often because every time he does that, he makes her cry and ends up hugging her. Chance maarne ka acha style hai! ;)

I read this somewhere: "The sound of colours is so definite that it would be hard to find anyone who would express bright yellow with base notes, or dark lake with the treble..."

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres-ed on page 33 for part 3:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Like Arnav said with there musing there own world of imagination seems to alter and merge as one and that was I guess the reason why Arnav was able to understand and bring Khushi's every emotion best on his canvas. And that is exactly the reason why Khushi is able to understand Arnav's story of how he imagine the woman in glittering light that Khushi was able to portray to the T.
And it's not just there art that they understand it's more. It there emotions and unsaid words too. Khushi read the massage about Arnav's family towards his choice of profession through 'ugly duckling' and turn it into something beautiful a nd humorous to lighten his mood.

The line between muse and lover is fading for Arnav. Interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Caught up with chapters 3&4. Khushi was lucky to have grown up in an orphanage where the people actually took care of her. Arnav is a complete goner when it comes to his muse 😉 Looking forward to more.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful. I wish to c his paintings of khushi yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
I absolutely love the concept. a painter, that's charming and exciting. it's beautifully written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Art is liberating...
Awesome update... Arnav n khushi are both a perfect pair of an artist n his muse...

Thanks for d pm...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Aww...such a beautiful story...thnx fr pm! Eager for more.

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