!Arshi ff! ( RightFit wrong Shoe). chapter -8 SHE IS THE ONE FOR ME

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...let me introduce myself to u ...hi I m mish shergill...I hv been a silent reader at this forum from past a year ...and now I wish to write a ff on arshi ... Hope u all like it ...I m hell nervous ...but I have seen u people encouragingand loving work of newbies ...hope my work also finds place in ur heart and entertain u ...so here gos my prologue ...let me know if u like it then I will continue d ff
Prologue

What does a women wants ? Shoes? Nope.sex? Maybe.money? Yes but nowadays her own ...hmm,so then what does today's women really ,really deep depp down want? Still your hearts and hold your breath

Love

This story is about khushi gupta or as her hestitant paramour describes her " lasso in a wine glass" is set in the more than just-a- third- world-country's city, kanpur. She has been bitten for better or worse ,but definitely bitten ,by bollywood. Her spirit is defeatable ; she mock a certain death ( arnav Singh raizada) and suffers stoically for love ( ASR again) her accomplice in all her escapades is lavanya kashyap -- the one friend we all prefer to as BFF ,but function with as chaddi baniyan ( or gracefully put as hand and glove ).

This story begins at point where all love stories end dripping with humour and romance , it encases a young women's thoughts on society she services in .
With bit of dark intense and mystry ...and servs titleRight fit ...wrong shoe.
Plz comment and let me know should I continue

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( chapter are almost on every page...enjoy reading)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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If u dont mind can i say sonething.
What u have written is exact same what is written on the bavk covr of book of same title (only names are diffrent) .co incidently i m reading same book from past 2 days.

I dont know if ur story is diffrent but the prologue is dicto same..this will be termed as plagrism.

But if story is diff, i wud love to read.
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Yes definetly it is inspired by book of varsha dixit but it will not copied ... I assure u that
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey...Thts quite an interesting prologue. Would love to see what u hv in store. looking forward to more.
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Chapter 1 : party time...srsly!!!
Khushiii !!!!! What have u done to yourself ,are u on drugs? "Asked lavanya suspiciously
"Not again LA..what happened to u why r u behaving wierdly??? " In a casual tone khushi said fully engrossed in her laptop
Oh please, I know u r good at words...so just cut the crap and puck it out ...what's going on from last 3 month?
From the day I m back from London ...I feel like I m living wid some workaholic depressed devdas version...u r avoiding ur medicines khushi...it really hurts ...last night when u fainted ..it took my breath away...plz return me my cute chatterbox , innocent khushi back" said lavanya wid teary eye.
Taking a deep breath and and plastering a smile on d face khushi said " la..I m really sorry its nothing but just few deadlines and a lot of pending work...nothing else and I will not be careless with my Health ...I promise"
Khushi and la shared a hearty hug and khushi said " so u tell me are u thrown out of ur job or pissed off by some lovestuck puppy of urs" to lighten the mood
"No yarr...can't I come to meet u ..bas yahi sunna reh gya tha"said lavanya dramatically which made khushi roll her eyes
" no ...I dint mean dt its just u
Suddenly u r here some specific reason ...I mean is everything fine ..."
"Yes... every thing is fine ,u tensionfreak...and yes I m here for some reasons and surprise for u which u r going to get tonight at d party"said lavanya while playing ninja fruit on iPad
" which party ...I m not going to any party...I have it's of work to do" said khushi while stuffing bread roll in her mouth
" I m not giving u any option...u r coming so get ready we r to leave @ 8 ..."
Said lavanya while getting back to her feet and went to her room leaving khushi in thoughts.." Hey devi maiyya , thanx for adding another trouble in my messed up life...I do wanna go to any party ...but I
But I have to do it for lavanya..."and she went to her room to get dressed up...
Wearing a black gown which ends at her mid thigh wide metal drops and roughly curling up her hair she came out finding lavanya wid her jaw touching floor which made me conscious ...
" what...is it looking dt bad...sooryy babes ...just give me 2 mins ...I will change and come."said khushi fidgeting which her dress
"U r looking breath takingly gorgeous... Guys are gona drool on u ..." Said lavanya

"Thanx let's go "
Heading towards our car in the parking lot " so whose party it is " khushi asked
"Patience khush... Its a surprise ...u will come to know everything "
"Yah right ... Vaise hi mujhe ajjkal bhoot sarre surprising shocked mil rahe hai..." Khushi mummered with a a sarcastic smirk...
"U said sth ??"
"No ...not at all...let's go "
"Does your surprise has an address or shall I drive it to anyplace" inserting key in ignition khushi said
" oh sooryy...yes ... gold black boutique night club"
Said lavanya
" I m going there due to some irritable external force " said khushi giving lavanya
Irritated look
" if u say this again, I will kick u out of the car u wierdo..."
Giving her a what-ever-look-i continued driving and with in an hour , reached 'GBB night club'
Who is not aware of what all surprises are stored for her tonight

So howz it...plz give ur comments and feedbacks...I would love to have them...

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Khushi looking somewhat like this ...plz do check d link and...yr at least encourage by giving feedbacks to a newbie ...to continue😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Again a good start... Waiting fo the surprise now...
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or how long I have to wait for d surprise ...at least tell me whose party it is...as far I know if u r going to a party ...it must be really really happening" said khushi while entering the club
" hmmm...that true...let's see how happening it remains"
" what do you mean by that???"
" ohh ...nothing sweety...u tell r u carrying ur medicines"
" ohh fr**k!! I forgot to carry it along"
" I knew that..." Lavanya mummered while shaking her head and she handed medicine to khushi "here u go..."
"Wow!!! Nice decor " khushi said examining the venue . the interiors was bedazzeled in an unusual pattern of golden monkeys , harking back to the unusual but somehow damm styilish taste
" one sec khushi...important call...can't ignore...u make urself comfortable I will just be back"said lavanya
" ya sure La ...take ur time...till then I will get myself a drink..."
" k cool...I will be right back..."
"Okay"
Khushi ordered a soft drink for myself and I stated observing crowd around...
I realized that it was a masquerade ...suddenly there was a complete darkness and I felt a hand slipping around my waist ...I jerked the hand and turned towards d owner of the hand which was going to be no longer his ...I saw a pair of hazel eyes which had held my eyes . she look at him with confused eyes and the touch felt really familiar and soon her confusion change into anger and she tried to jerk his hand off me with out breaking eye contact but failed as his hand held her even more strongly...he took out a mask and put around her eye ...a slight touch of tip of his finger made be shiver...she looked at him with questioning eyes and trying to identify him as his face was hidden behind the mask...and I no time he took her hand in his and lead her to the dance floor and before I could realize he put his hand around my waist and placed my hand on his shoulder ...and song played

Jo tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi, khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

Her heart missed a beat when she noticed his eyes full of emotions . she gulped and looked down and saw her fingers already entwined with his strongly but gentally


Jo tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi, khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

There are sudden unsaid emotions in his eyes ...his touch ... His eyes ...all looked familiar ...which changed into anger

Manga jo chaaha jo dekha jo, mila wohi
Kaha jo socha jo kiya jo, huaa wohi
Ho maanga jo chaaha jo dekha jo, milaa wohi
Kaha jo socha jo kiya jo, huaa wohi
Raahon mein mujhko khushi, phoolon ke jaise mili
Honthon pe mere hansi, kaliyon ke jaise khili
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha
Ho o o..

He roughly pushed her away and she came crushing into his chest while looking into his eyes. Holding his shoulders, she firmly wrapped her arms around his neck while he pulled her closer with a sudden jerk, holding her from her waist. She could feel his uneven breath on my face...and his eyes as if questioning me...I couldn't resist myself from asking him
" who are u"

Mere hi isharon pe chale hai waqt bhi
Main hoon woh khiladi jisne sabko maat di
Haan, mere hi ishaaron pe chale hai waqt bhi
Main hoon woh khiladi jisne sabko maat di
Nahin hai mujhsa koi, maine jo mitti chhui
Haan woh bhi sona hui, jalta mujhse har koi
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye todh gaye chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha

" the game u started will be ended by me"as husky sound of the man reaches her ear ...her heart heated at a faster rate.her face was flushed ...her body got stiff...her eyes still...he smirked watching the effect he still has on her

tere sang kaati raatein
Jiye jo haseen lamhe
Jo tere sang baati baatein
Bune jo haseen sapne
Woh toh hai ab bhi wohi , khade banke sawaali
Dekhe hain tera rasta, honthon pe leke shiqwa
Woh ghar kyun bhool gaye, tod gaye, chhod gaye
Jannat jo tha..

Ho o o..

He twirled her around all of a sudden roughly and pushed her away still holding her hand. She gulped when her back touched his front this time when he pulled her closer. She closed her eyes and shivered with the feeling that he was so close to her while he inhaled the smell of her hair and moved toward her ear while making an intense eyelock

" welcome to hell" he whispered

Their eye lock was broken by sudden sound of clappings and hooting. She freed myself off his grip and ran away from him and placed myself around the bar and ordwred a Patiala peg and she hurriedly flushed it down my throat .
" why is he here???...can't he live and let others live with piece...bloody laad governor" she fumed
And after 2 more Patiala peg I hurriedly slipped out and wish to get invisible ...she rushed out off the place as she felt suffocated due to his presence...she hurriedly texted lavanya ...and walked towards her car...and drove back home

Hi guys how was it plz do comment ...
Edited by mishshergill - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishshergill

Yes definetly it is inspired by book of varsha dixit but it will not copied ... I assure u that



Hey. One friendly advice... You should definitely put up a disclaimer of sorts that your fanfic is inspired by the book and not copied. And if your synopsis/prologue have used the exact words as the book, you should mention that too, at the beginning of your FF.
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Khushi was concentrating on the key and the lock as if it was most complicated work till this date...numerous attempts brought a frown on her face...suddenly door opened like MAGIC!!!! ... And her fantasy dream was broken by a scream
" what d hell u think u cn get by screaming at me..at least let me live in my own house without any raizada fear ... " khushi said cupping her ears and closing her eyes tight
" khushi!!!! U r drank... How could u " lavanya said as a lone tear appeared in her eye
" ohh!!! Laaa ...itzzz zuuu...m sorry darling..." Said khushi as she started crying flanging her arms around lavanya's neck
" ohh...I m sorry sweety ... Its becoz of me u had to face him...but not any more ...I m here to protect u...I will not bear even a scratch on u ..."
" la ...I really love him ...I miss him so badly"
Khushi don't u think he deserves to know the truth ...its been long time now ... And I don't think we will be able to hid it any more" as she understood him her always reffers to arnav Singh raizada
" why are u saying so ...I have been hiding it from last 2 years...and more over i m completely avoiding meeting him at office"
Khushi said lazyly settling down on the sofa with lime water and medicine and at very instant she realized what she has blabbered
And she closed her eyes tightly wishing to get invisible ...damn hard luck...she slowly raised her head with a I-m-caught-plz-forget-whatever-i-said look but looking at lavanya's face which reflected ur-caught- no-way-to-escape she gave her a cute smile...
" so now time for ur surprise"
" huh!" Khushi said in confussion and surprise that how can she simply ignore such a huuugggeee confession of her or my be I m still under the slight effect of alcohol
"Yaa ...surprise ...don't u remember" said lavanya giving a irritated and questioning look
"Yup...my surprise...so tell me wat is it"
Lavanya placed an envelop in her hand and asked her to read it.
Khushi opened the Envelop and her eye popes out while reading it
"What the hell is this" said khushi shockingly
" don't tell me u can't read ...oh my god ...wait a minute...is letter in Spanish ..." Said lavanya and khushi face clearly reflected irritated and worried look (why has la joined AR ... Is she really thrown out of her office...or Does she know about arnav's return...maybe)

" how did u come to know about him" khushi asked with a blank face ,not looking towards her
"I thought he is a goddamn celeb so u can easily get info about him "
" why r u joining AR?" Khushi asked coldly
". I got a really got offer with handsome pay...so I just grabbed it ..."
"Real reason"
" and of course I want to spend time with u"
"For the last and final time , give me the damn reason"

Hearing anger in her tone and irritation she sensed that its time so, lavanya gave up and taking a long breath she started
" when I was in London ...I always kept myself updated about ur reports and and ur progress from last 2 years ...and I found ur body quickly started responding to treatment ... So I was satisfied...but one day out of no where I came to know about his arrival to India...and i came to know about ur deteriorating state... and I cannot take chances as some one should be there to take care of... So even before his arrival I came back to u ...and even got job at AR... So that jerk doesn't harm u"
As she finished she saw tears rolling down khushi's checks. She quickly hugged her . she tried to calm her down but khushi started sobbing uncontrollablly .
After a few minutes she compose her self and said
" why u have to always be so caring and possessive about me"
"Cause I always keep finding ways how to rescue brainless damsels in distress" said lavanya with a wink
" shut up u bitch"
Khushi said throwing a pillow in her direction in anger and lavanya gave a hearty laugh and throw another cushion towards her
And soon room was littered with cotton foam and cushion ...khushi and lavanya tiers after a tom and jerry show display ...throw them selves on there bed...giggling uncontrollably... Suddenly the laugh died and khushi said
" u know wat La... Deep down I know I don't deserve u ... I have only given u pain and tension... And u selflessly always kept me before u...I m sorry lavanya...coz of me u are suffering through all this
" shhh...khush get on thing straight in ur not-in-use head that I m not doing any favour on u and u r not a burden on me...u r my family...for whom I live...for whom I breath ...plz don't take that right from me by insulting it wid all these words"
Ohkay...I m sorry ...u know na ur kiddo gets crazy usually... So tell me how should I repent for my mistake"
" hmm...I think Choco walnut brownie with vanilla icecream and Chocolate saure topping will do " said lavanya thoughtfully
" ohkyy sweetie u will get it right now" khushi said with a great smile and left the room leaving a thoughtful lavanya being ( how should I tell khushi what's coming up for her tomorrow... How will I protect her ... But I have to protect her from that jerk by hook or crook )
And left her room to help khushi in kitchen while sending silent prays for tomorrow
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Next morning, while settling down in their car to leave for work
( I should crack the news to khush in advance about him so that she digests it and prepare herself till we reach office ...Baki sabh mein sambhal lungi)
" hey kiddo!! I wanted to tell u sth really important ...which u really need to know"
" yes La...u have all my ears"
"Actually khush the thing is...
Lavanya got interrupted by a phone call she irritatedly picked up the call and without checking the number she literally barked
" yes... Lavanya here"
"What??...I mean how is it possible...oh really...how could u be so irresponsible...ohky I will re- dictate u everything u better keep it safe "
And the time she fruststedly completed the call till that time they had reached the lobby of the office before she could call khushi to tell her an announcement was made for all the head executives to assemble in conference room immediately .
Cursing the bloody caller she rush towards conference room
She found room fully occupied and only found a chair opposite to Nandini . she quickly grabbed the chair and reattempted to say
" khushi I wanted to tell u that...
Hard luck !!! She was interrupted by a bold and familiar voice
" Good morning ladies and gentleman. U must be thinking reason of sudden meeting so here is the reason .as we all know we have open again a new branch in France so for starting 6 months I have decided to shift Mr singha and Mr johar there so we have vacant positions and we cannot afford a new employee on those position so board of directors have decided to place Ms gupta as senior manager and Ms kapoor as head executive of IT department "

This news shocked khushi till wits and lavanya who was watching changing emotions on khushis face could only send silent prayers for giving strength to her kiddo to accept and manage everything especially that jerk saying this she turned towards arnav and finds him smirking and enjoying khushis expression...
He continued speaking and explains the team everything but khushi hardly paid attention to him

" Ms gupta...did u get what I m saying"
Still khushi didn't responded and kept her graze lower
Lavanya stumped on her foot hurriedly under the table
" ouch.!!! What is it LA??" Khushi said giving a painful look towards lavanya.
Lavanya cleared her throat and signalling towards arnav
She hurriedly replied
" yes sir ...sure sir"
Ohky ...so meeting comes to an end ...plz resume ur respective work ...and Ms gupta stay back "

Precap:" you bitch"
" u know what people have called me even worst"
"What" arnav said not understanding what's coming next
"Your girlfriend"



So guys how was the update ... Plz like and comment and give ur feedbacks ...they are really needed


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