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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mamtasingla


who said u ki aaj update milega😕😕


today is almost over...
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Originally posted by: swetiii


today is almost over...
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u r ri8 sweeti
ab aur wait nhi ho raha
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very emotional chapter acchuth
hope jo gets well soon
cant see them in this condition
adham and shariff planning to use paridhi against jalal
oh god what will happen now
great job accuth
story is getting interesting with each update
update next chap asap and thanks alot for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

u r ri8 sweeti
ab aur wait nhi ho raha



Well according to me I am getting an update today.. Cause I live in Australia and timing differences is very different right??!
I PMed and asked for a precap.. And he himself told me don't worry, he is updating tomorrow. And this tomorrow for me is today right now, it's very early morning here 5:28am 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well according to me I am getting an update today.. Cause I live in Australia and timing differences is very different right??!
I PMed and asked for a precap.. And he himself told me don't worry, he is updating tomorrow. And this tomorrow for me is today right now, it's very early morning here 5:28am 😛


ohhh!!!!! den its ok

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Chapter-26B


As Jalal navigated the halls of the hospital,his mind started to wander."It had been few hours since the accident.but it felt like ages.At first doctors didn't think she would make it past the first couple hours. She was in critical condition.deep bruises, possible head trauma, and excessive internal bleeding. Her condition had been getting worse. Her organs were failing. She was slowly deteriorating. It was my fault. I was the one who couldn't protect her from that blood thirsty vampire.I was the one who had made her in this state. If it weren't for me,she wouldn't have been here.
Tear sprung up in his eyes again but this time,he didn't hold them back.He veered off into the mens bathroom he had been passing and let out a sob. Through tear-filled eyes he looked at himself in the mirror.
"I didn't deserve her, I never had"..Anger and guilt welled up in his chest, suffocating him.Without thinking,he drew his arm back and far as he could and his fist went flying into the mirror. Pain shot through his arm but Jalal didn't care.He made up his that,he deserved it for what he had done..
Please, God. Please save my Jodha. Please give her back to me so that I can spend the rest of my life making everything up to her...please..
Abdul popped inside bathroom hearing glass braking.He saw his friend break down.Jalal raised his hands over his head in a sort of mute despair, and then beat his palms together in a helpless way; finally he broken down on floor and putting his hands before his face, began to sob, with loud, dry sobs that seemed to come from the very racking of his heart. Then he raised his arms again, as though appealaling to the whole universe. "God! God! God!" he said. "What have she done, what has mu Jodha poor thing done,She is naive,innocent..don't punish her..Please give to me all pain of hers..I can't see her like this...I can't...
A gash that ran from his pinky knuckle down to his wrist now oozed blood. Flashes of Jodha ran through his mind. The way she threw he head back when she laughed. The way she smiled with just a hint of teeth. Her hair falling over her doe like beautiful brownish eyes.her kissing,her passionate gaze..
Abdul shocked to core seeing blood oozing Jalal's hand..He shouted ..Jalal..My God..what have you done..you are punishing your self..Wrapping a wad of paper towels around his hand Abdul hugged Jalal tightly.."Don't Jalal..don't..I could understand your feeling.but it's not the right way.you need to unleash your rage towards that bloody girl.believe me Nothing will happen to Jodha..She can't leave you like this Jalal..Please try to understand,you needed to snap out of it. To be strong, for her.With much difficulty Abdul could hold down Jalal's remorse.They made their way to the ER. It looked like it would need a few stitches of Jalal's hand.
Jalal's hand stiched and bandaged..Rukaiyya was there observing Jalal and Abdul..She completely stunned seeing Jalal's pitiful condition..Jalal always looked so strong hearted for her..In childhood she never saw he is crying for anything even in his lovable Abbujaan's death..he always remained strong,monolith in each and every dark crises of his life.He wouldn' let himself to flow tears from his eyes when he realized Paridhi was betraying him,cheating him..when hhe lost his Ammijaan whom he love most..but she couldn't believe she is witnessing Jalal's other side..which she never saw..
Rukaiyya couldn't believe her ears when she heard Jodha put her life in danger for saving him..when she heard that news.She instantly compared herself with Jodha..Can she do that for Jalal like Jodha ?..The answer is ,No..She always liked Jalal.She is his best friend.She will do anything for him.but can't took her life for him..that means she never loved just liked him..likeness and love is two different emotions.what she felt for Jalal it was mere likeness..not love..Rukaiyya realized herself..Jodha truly loves Jalal.She is his true love..Rukaiyya said to herself.
"Yes,I can't deny that.I always admired Jalal for his manliness,strength,his eye-catching,extremely good looking statuesque"..he was always take proud saying Jalal is her friend..the place which any girl couldn't get..but she never felt any desperation or attraction like a lover..those she could see in Jodha..but she can't see Jalal in pain.She will do anything for him as a friend.not as a lover..Rukaiyya made up her mind that she will never try to be Jalal's love.She will be always remain Jalal's best friend.
Rukaiyya step aside her thoughts when she saw bandage in Jalal's hands..She worriedly asked to Jalal what happened to you Jalal,what is this ?
Abdul narrated all incidents to Rukaiyya..Rukaiyya went so angry. Are you mad Jalal ?
Don't blame him Rukaiyya,it's his love who is lying on hospital bed now fighting with her life.how can Jalal compose himself..we can't stop his tears.beh jaane do unhe.
Rukaiyya give a piercing annoyed gaze to Abdul and murmured "Fool,Are you trying to pacifying him or making him more sad..Try to be wise Abdul."..Jalal come with me..Rukaiyya pulled Jalal from Abdul's clasp and made their way up to waiting room
"Jalal believe me,Nothing will happen to Jodha.I already called best of specialists for her surgery.You need to be strong..strong for others.if you brake down how can you pacify others..look Bakshi she was crying.You know very well how much she loves Joe.and Akdhaji and Jijianga,see their condition,they are all broken.they always treated Jodha as their own daughter,Aren't they ?...Jalal as a husband and as lover.you have some responsibilities.you can't back out from that.it's you who must fill courage and hope in others heart.think positively.be optimistic.Allah always be with you..be strong Jalal.Rukaiyya's wise advices gave Jalal hope.He hugged her tightly and said.."Thank you Rukaiyya,I am very lucky who got You and Abdul as my best friend.You had always showed me currect path when I am struggled in my life from childhood to till now.I don't know Rukaiyya how can express my gratitude to you.
"No,Jalal..please don't we are friends.friends always support each other.there is no place for thankfulness between us."
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3 hours passed.out them.After what seemed like eternity,Jalal saw Doctor Morgan emerging from the operation theater. He was anxious to know her condition.
"How is she doing doctor?".Jal asked,Concern and fear were clearly showing in his voice
Dr.Morgan smiled widely."The operation was a success. By God's grace we were able to bring the patient out of the critical state.she is completely alright now.she is in deep sleep now due to effect of injections.you can meet her after regaining her conscious state.
Jalal's face glowed up,his happy has no bounds.He felt this moment was the best for him. He had never felt this much happiness,relief and joy ever before in his life.Abdul gladly hugged Jalal patted on his back.Jalal felt so elated.Thanks a lot doctor..Thank you for everything..Jalal recited linking his arms with doctor Morgan...and gave her his cheque book..
"Doctor,You can write on it much amount you want..you can take all of mine if you want..I will give you anything,tell me doctor..what you want ?
No,No..Mr Jalal..I don't want anything..As a doctor,it's my Job and my profession to save my patients..I can't take money for it..It's like a bribing..Anyways it's a big honour to meet you and doctor of your wife..As a matter of fact she is the most beautiful patient ever I have.I am very thankful for that..Doctor chuckled...
All are smiled..Jalal thankfully greeted to doctor."As your wish doctor.but remember that,In future.if you encountered with problem,don't forget to call me..I will always ready for any help"
"You are so generous Mr Jalal..and your wife is so fortunate to have a husband like you.. I am in a hurry Mr Jalal.I have another case look after that.Mr Jalal,Jodha is still in causality.I don't think it's the right time to move her straight to ward..we need to run an assessment on her if there is a chance of any infections or not..So meeting her is restricted now.but you can meet her within a specified time.I hope you have any problems with that.
"Oh,No doctor..please..Jalal nodded his head.As soon as doctor left.Jalal informed every one that Jodha is safe..The operation went success..family became very happy..Bakshi hugged Jalal tightly with Joy...Mothi wiped her tears.Rukaiyya smiled with content..Akdha immediately went to speak with receptionist about visiting schedule..Jijianga caressed Jalal's cheek with a motherly love and gave a confident and assuring smiled.All happy...Jalal felt so peaceful..so content.much relief...Jalal heard Rukaiyya calling him from back.He turned to look her
"Jalal I am going to head down to cafeteria and get some liquid food for Jodha."..Rukaiyya take permit from Jalal and strode away towards cafeteria leaving Jalal to reel
Jalal occasionally took a glance to causality,He was so anxious and so desperate to see his Jodha.Now all Jalal wants to see his love in safe and secure as soon as possible.Jalal walked near hospital window and looked outwards..closed eyes as enjoying spring breeze which is blewing across windows

"It's really sad, isn't it?" A couple of young hospital residents were walking past him to the coffee machine against the wall. Jake was certain one of them was the nurse who had taken Jodha into the back of ambulance.
"Man, this job is a bummer seeing a girl losing her maternity"
"I know. I never know what to say.she is in so critical.her uterus is completely broken by that attack..she can never carry a child in her womb..My God.The doctors are so helpless.conditions are worst.Nay God given them strength to overcome this crucial phase of life"
"Amen..But,Do you think.They did the right think not to disclose this news to her husband ?"
"Yes,I do.Think yourself.No man can suffer that muh pain.realizing he can never be a father.They do the right thing.otherwise he should have shattered beyond repair.I think doctor will make him understand slowly,with patience.see it's a delicate and senstive matter
The young woman shook her head. "Yes,but I don't think there was anything they could have said to make this better for her. Not when it all happened so suddenly, and especially now that she can never have kids."
Jalal absolutely shocked hearing this.he couldn't believe himself that what he just heard.."Jodha can never have kids.Yaa Allah.No,No...She can't withstand this pain.she will die..No..No..It's only me who knew very How much she craved for a baby..Not only her it was my dream also..Jalal felt suffocated,vulnerable.he couldn't understand how can Jodha put up with this fact..All he do to give her support and strength to overcome this pain and agony..suppressing his own pain..Jalal wiped his tears..composed himself...He was so panic thinking his can he face Jodha.
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The sound of beeping monitors and soft whispers woke Jodha up from her deep sleep. Her eyes open slowly at first, but she felt a warm caress on her cheek and would have smiled if she could. Jalal was here. Everything would be better now
'Where am I? What day it is, Who- ahh!'' Jodha shouts. She got cut off by her the pounding pain in her stomach;felt so pain in head. She rubs her temple with her hand
"Jalal Are you here,Jodha asked worriedly..
'Yes, it's me darling. I'm here.''.

She finally managed to open her heavy eyelids and saw that Jalal's cheeks were wet, droplets clinging to his eyelashes. His sorrow, the fear in his eyes, held her speechless. Along with the way he was looking at her.
With pure love
Jalal puts her arm on Jodha's leg that's hidden under the white cover. 'You're in the hospital,'' Jalal informed her wife.
'A...Aap to theek hai na,'' Jodha stuttered, she looks down and nervously bit her bottom lip. Jodha observed Jalal thoroughly who's sitting next to her hospital bed, has has messy hair,not shaved with red eyes with puffed cheecks and he looks utterly exhausted.

"Jodha I am completely alright.what did you done ?.you put your life in danger for me.what if something happened to you ! Jalal takes a breath again and Jodha notices a tear make its way down his cheek. She wipes it away with her thumb, and looks into her husbands's blue eyes with immense love.She couldn't see Jalal like this.She replied with a guilty face

'I am sorry Jalal,But It's my duty to protect you at any cost.how can I stand without doing anything seeing my husband is in danger.If something happened to you,I can't forgive myself for it?''...
Jalal didn't allowed her to say furthermore.he pecked on her lips with infinite love. She shuts her eyes happly as tears travel down her cheeks. 'Did I dream all that?'' she asked him mischeviously .
"Have you kissed me Even I am in unconscious"
Seeing Jodha's beautiful smile.Jalal forgot all his miseries,all of his tension..He gazed into her eyes with deep love.While Jodha could see the sadness in Jalal's eyes.
"Don't say you've been in a unconscious Jodha, you couldn't be. Every moment I spend beside your hospital bed, talking to you. You could hear me, right? You could hear me sing to you, you could hear every I love you','' Jalal takes Jodha's pale hand in his own, and squeezed it lightly. 'Don't say you've been in a trauma because that means you could not hear me being here for you.''
'Sir, visitor hour is over. You have to go.'' a lady says walking into the room. The lady wears a white with blue doctors suit, and when she got closer Jalal could read her name tag. 'Lucy.'' It said.

'Just five more minutes please, and then I'll go.'' Jalal tells the woman. She nods and walks out, leaving the door open a little. 'How are you feeling?'' Jalal asks emotionally.
'I feel... okay. I feel normal, I am still a bit in shock, but I am doing okay now.''

Jalal smiles through his tears, as she brings Jodha's pale hand to her lips and pecks it lightly.
'I love you, so much.'' Jalal says with loving eyes, looking at her wifejaan as if she's magic. 'I love you too, Jalal.But I don't want you go.I want to be with you Jalal''
Jalal brushed her hair lovingly and said.I know my Jaan.But for the sake of your health I can't stay here more time otherwise there is a chance of causing infection.."I will always around you.Just call me whenever you want..Okay"
"I always want you Jalal.Jodha squeezed his hands tightly."..Jalal smiled kissed on her forehead.."I know Jodha."Jodha Did Doctor Morgan mentioned to you about anything ?
"No Jalal,He didn't told me anything except I can't take heavy works for sometime.But why did you asked Jalal.?.Is every thing Okay ?
"Yes,Jodha..I just.."..Jodha could easley read his eyes that something bothering him."She caressed his cheecks and asked to him lovingly..
"Jalal.You know very well.I can read your eyes and heart.You are hiding something from me.What is that ?...Tell me "
"It's nothing Jodha,Jalal tried to avoid talk.He couldn't look at her eyes..Jodha realized his expression changing.Body trembling.Face muscles tightening with stress..
"Jalal,Please look into my eyes.I know something is wrong.Please say it to me.So that your stress some way will relieved
Jodha's love filled talk and her innocent acts made him teary eyed.He couldn't hold himself.He finally disclosed his fears
Jodha my Jaan,I also always wished for. babies, you know how bad I wanted them. But you're everything,Jodha. Everything. It doesn't matter if we can never have kids. All I need is you. If you'll have me. If your love with me..it doesn't make any difference..
Jodha totally confused hearing Jalal's talk.her tongue came stuck.."W..What are you talking about Jalal,I don't understand anything"
Jodha tried to sit up to put her arms around him, but the sharp bite of pain had her gasping instead. Jalal's arms came around her, holding her so gently, as if she were broken. The pain medication they'd given her made her feel heavy, fuzzy. But she needed to tell him.

"I heard the nurses talking outside." Every word he spoke was wracked with deep pain. And loss. But still he stroked her hair as if he were afraid she'd break apart any second. "I know very well it's not the right time to reveal this thing.that...that..with much pain and agony Jalal finally expelled out..Your uterus had been broken by attacr.and you can't carry...
"Kahnaa..No jalal,Don't think like that."..Jodha put her hands on Jalal's mouth by shooking her head asthough stopping him from saying that..
Her tongue felt thick as she said, "It was a misunderstanding. They weren't talking about me.I am perfectly okay."

The hand that was stroking her hair stilled. "Jodha..?" He pulled back to stare into her eyes. She watched relief war with disbelief on his face, as if he didn't want to give in to hope again, only to come crashing back down harder.

"But Jodha that sister's talk..!!!.What thing might have they said ?"


She pushed down the sheet and took his hands in hers, placing them over her belly Her eyelids felt like they had lead weights hanging from them, but she had to explain.
"Jalal I am completely alright.Sister were talking about another patient.who lying next to my room.She was 6 months pregnant.she is attacked by some robbers..they stabbed her without any mercy. I heard sister's talk that by that attack her uterus is completely broken.And she can't... you know"Jodha couldn't complete that sentence.She couldn't even think about her condition..her face became very sad when saying this

He looked down at their hands, linked over her. "So you're"

"Yes,I am.I can give you as much babies you want.I am fully healthy.Don't even think like that negetively Jalal.I want to be pregnant with your child.But for that I only want my husband with me.."Jodha blushed..her cheecks reddened

"Excuse me, sir, you can't be in here. I need to finish prepping Mrs Jodha for her medicines right away.Jalal heard voice of a sister
Jodha knew that fierce look Jake gave the nurse oh-so-well, and loved that Jalal was willing to fight any battles he needed to for her. For her !!..Jalal is the most loving husband she could ever get and was going to be the most wonderful father.

As he argued with the

"Okay.It's time.You are looking so weak.you need to get a good sleep.Close your eyes Jodha"
"Okay thenceforth !"
"Now,Dream about me.Then you will get good sleep"..His talk made her blush..Seeing her shyness,Jalal kissed on her curvy lips and whispered in her ears in a mellow tone.
"So jaiye meri Jaan"..Jodha smiled closed in her eyes..slowly sleep claimed her eyes..went to deep slumber..
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Prison Cell of Bern

Bern prison cell is the most secure cell there is, 1050 miles from the surface dug by Quattra Earth Dwellers, the masters when it comes to digging. Walls made of stainless steel move in in a circle 2 meters deep in all directions, thenreinforced concrete 500 feet in all direction, armed guards watch 24/7, armed with laser, tear grenades, samurai sword, bullet and laser proof shirt, pants, shoes and a helmet that also blocks of hypnosis. The guards are all the highest level in karate, Taekwondo, and Samurai sword practice, there is a chute for food which comes down in bottles and water comes down a separate chute and then the chute closes.this was the prison cell which were Paridhi Singh Rajput confined for accusation of attempt of killing

Paridhi slowly started to wake up, opening my eyes to a dark room.She tried to move, but chains rattled and she stopped at once and realized that she was laying face-down on her stomach, breathing in the rancid residue thatcoated the floor; it smelled like death
For a moment, theworld was a blur of dull colours. Then, as she properly awoke, everything came into focus. She wished it hadn't, for she found herself once more in her dark cell. Shackles were tiedaround her ankles and wrists, chaining her to the solid brick wallbehind her. Every time she so much as shifted, the chains made echoing noises that seemed to go on forever. Her skin was sickly; pallid and stretched over her stark bones, for she had not eaten properly for almost two days. Her feet were bare and grubby, and all shewore over her frail body was a set of ragged robes.
Paridhi could pick up whole thing in her mind..Yes,I was imprisoned,Awaiting for trial, accused of attempt of killing Multi-billionaire Jalal's wife in cold blood.I was trapped in a room with no windows, no table, no chair. Not even one thing that might comfort me. I had only my insistence for comfort. I hadn't hired a good lawyer. Because I have no enough money for it.But there is no use of that.Anyways Jalal not going to leave.he will try to c ve her maximum punishment.He had powerfulcontacts, many with millions of dollars in the bank. Maybe one of them was willing to corrupt my trial so that everyone thinks I was sent to jail and executed. My trial is scheduled tomorrow. Despaircreeps over me. This couldn't happen to me, could it?..

So she was imprisoned. And she had no idea how long it would be before she was released.The fact of Jalal married to another girl.And they are living like a husband an wife..She is more beautiful than her.Jalal loves her very much...shattered Paridhi completely.She is frozen state now.Absent minded !!!!...Nothing bothering her now other than Jalal's beautiful wife and love "Jodha"..She was muttering Jodha's name several times so that her malice will increase moment by moment for her..
A steady dripping noise was coming from her left, and underneath that was the sound of distant footsteps. The foot falls became steadily louder; Paridhi scrambled to stand, straining against the blackness to see what or who was coming.

Paridhi saw 2 young men walking towards her cell with warden.The one in the middle, the man she first noticed, had closed shaved hair, a dark brownish color, attractive features, and eyes that seemed to pierce her with their intensity. He muttered somthing to his friend, who nodded and said something back, what it was,she didn't want to know.She tore her eyes away from those three, and found herself staring at the bleachers, where the first man's opposite sat.
They stood infront of Glass partition where Paridhi was confined.John was closer, so Paridhi could see him more clearly.He had sharp, strangely enticing looks, and mussed up brown hair that matched the goatee he had. His eyes were a deep, dark brown that met her as she studied him. A smile twitched across his face, and he said
"Well, now look what we have here." His voice drawled in a southern accent that turned his voice to honey, sweet and golden.
"We don't get many ladies inside these cells anymore"Salman mockingly coaxed..
"I don't blame them." Paridhi retorted.Jhon had something flash through his eyes before he regained his composure
Jhonson admonished in a mellow tone.."A young girl like you could get hurt very easily here, you know." His voice hummed with the almost threat.
"Sure wouldn't want something like that to happen to a lovely beautiful young girl like yourself."
.Paridhi and Jhon matched eyes and stared each other down.."Who are you ?..and What you want from me ?..I think we didn't met before and We don't know each other.
Jhon replied in a confident voice."My name is Jhon and this is my friend Salman."..he said with pointing Salman
Salman get impressed a lot seeing Paridhi..But he couldn't hold his dirty mouth..."That uniform fits you perfectly, but I can't even begin to imagine what you'll look like out of it, pretty Girl.We'll have to find out real soon, won't we?"
You filthy bas***d.."What are you thinking your self ugly fellow.Better watch that mouth of yours,Stupid. I might just take you up on that if there is no glass partition between us..although you won't like it as much as I will." She roared, this time showing her teeth in a creepy sort of leer.

Jhon slapped Salman suddenly..."Shut up you idiot.and make a guilty face."I am very very sorry Ms__"
"Paridhi."
"Yes,Ms Paridhi..he is crook,dumb ass.don't have a license of his mouth.The purpose we coming here is for saving you from this prison."
"Why should you that ?".Paridhi wondered,her eyebrows creased
"Because we have a common Enemies.."Jalalludeen Mohammed and his wife Jodha.I think this makes us good friends"..Jhon smiled evily.
Salman whispered in his ear."Jhon..She is so sexy.we can use her"..Jhon closed his eyelashes.."But Not much as Jodha..yet we can make her as our weapon against Jalal.But she's not a fool wise and smart.we need to deal with her carefully.don't make me mad like a moment before.,Understood ?"
"Okay"..Salman bend his head as a guilty person and said with respected tone."Forgive me Madam my disgusting behavior.I am sorry.But Is there any chance we become friends"
Paridhi gazed at him for a while..and said."Okay,done..But you have appoint a lawyer for me.How's that ?"
"Salman exclaimed.."Oh Sure,Ms Paridhi.We will..You don't have to stay here more than one day.It's my promise"
"Time is up".They heard call of Warden.

Precap:Jalal impassively replied.
"Ms Meera first of all I would like to say to you that.I don't love her and don't hate her either.I married Jodha because I love her.I love her more than my life.If Paridhi loves me or hate me it's not going to make any difference in my life.I think it's better for her to understand this fact and move forward in her life.what did you made to think I will help her despite of her wrong doings ?

"Because you have a big heart Sir"

"No,I don't have big heart;there is no money in my hand for her's Family,you can go now"

" but Sir"

"I mean it"
As Meera started headed towards outside Jodha called,Rukiye..!!.Please don't go.Jodha cupped Jalal's face and said to him lovingly.Jalal please help Paridhi's family for the sake of me


Edited by Swissgerman - 10 years ago
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beautiful update.. jalal misunderstands that the nurse was talking about jo.. still jalal care about jo's health only.. it shows how much he loves her
overall a wonderful update.. everything is getting back to normal..😊
update soon and thanks for the pm..😃
Edited by sharmacatty - 10 years ago
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unress
awesum chappy.
finally jo is saved 😊 nd ja misunderstanding cleared out.jo loves him truely without saying anything she can easily understands whats going in his mind nd heart. 😳 awww

p
finally jalal got relief seeing her out of danger.
bt now the devils come to create more problem for jo ja .nd that paridhi don't have 1% guilt for her deeds.
i really hate her.she never deserve jalal.
jalal should give her a tuff punishmnt bt seems like jo never let that happen .she is so naive nd pure by heart .
superb update 👏 .

update soon ...
Edited by deepa_chauhan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will read this tonight in bed :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsum dr...
loved it
happy to know
jo is perfect..
update sooon

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1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7 Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

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