SS: IPKKND Colours of Compulsion C10 P79 Conclude NEW SS PG 82 NOTE!

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IPKKND SS: Colours of Compulsion
Note okay guys - I know i've already got two short stories floating around and you are waiting for updates but I couldn't help myself, had to write this one out as its been on my mind for a while
See what you make of it, my usual readers will get a pm. Anyone else who would like a message on updates please buddy me and mention in a comment on this thread. Thank you.

Also if you would like links to my other works then drop me a message.
Hope you enjoy this I will continue with it after seeing the initial response..
no synopsis just jump straight in! 😃

Chapter 1: Page 1

Chapter 2: Page 12

note: Page 20

Chapter 3: Page 21

Chapter 4: Page 29


Chapter 5: Page 37

Chapter 6 Page 45

Chapter 7: Page 55

Chapter 8: Page 62

Chapter 9 Page Page 70

Note Page 76

Chapter 10: Page 79 Conclude

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Chapter 1

He picked up flowers from the same point everyday after work no matter how long the day had been and drove to the hospital. Whether it was evening rush hour or a little late In the night as it was today after a long day at the office nothing was too much trouble. His visits were so frequent that the staff and janitors knew of him as Mr Raizada and a few elderly patients by his name which they often forgot but remembered him as the handsome young gentleman who visited his wife daily with flowers. Pink and white flowers.

He walked into his wifes private hospital suite ..smiled at his sleeping beauty. Walking to the side table of her hospital bed he did the same as he had done yesterday and the day before that and the day before that.

He changed the old flowers for the new ones then observed her for a moment before kissing her on the forehead ever so gently, affectionately.

Like ever he heard the old ladies outside the hospital room mingle and talk about how lucky his wife was to have him but only Arnav Singh Raizada knew how lucky Khushi had been.

He looked upon his wife stroked away the strand hair that was disturbing her expression, he could hear her heart beating but she was lifeless and had been this way for months. Close to 6 months as he thought a little more about it and everyday was painstaking. Taking a seat on the stool beside the bed taking her hand into his he shared his day with her because apparently his voice, his presence was keeping her going.

He could have spent hours this way and had done in the past but things had changed over the last month few months which meant he couldn't possibly stay any longer he had another lady waiting for him at home. " I need to go sweetheart .. see you tomorrow." He whispered into her ear with regret but affection none the less which was followed by a stubble kiss on the cheek.

...

He walked into Shaantivaan looking a little disarrayed per the long day but ever ready to take the love of his life into his arms. She was the only thing that made all his troubles vanish in moments. As Kiran walked out.. Arnav's eyes lit up, the lines of fatigue on his face were gone, everything was easy. Well it seemed like that anyway.

She's all yours.. the young lady handed the bundle of joy over to her father.

Thank you Kiran.. I know its not in your job description but I..

"Its okay sir .. its my pleasure .."

Was it really he thought whilst he allowed little Aditi to sink into his chest and grab onto his shirt like she liked to do. He wondered if he was taking advantage of his position as Kirans boss. She was an intern at AR she needed to learn from his business skills not look after his daughter but she had mentioned needing the extra money herself and ASR needed the help. After all he couldn't leave Aditi on his own nor did he want to just have anyone look after her. He promised himself that he would not only pay the girl little extra on her next wage but also make sure she gets all the training she needs to successful in her career .

Aditi soon fell asleep on her father by the time ASR walked up to his room she was already comfortably asleep within the crux of his shoulder. His one year old was adorable. He was gentle and very careful as not to disturb her whilst shrugging off his shoes beside the recliner and collapsing on it without to much of jolt for his daughter. God was he tired.. he felt his feet ache as he closed his eyes for a moment holding aditi still where she was comfortable, the slightest of movement and she would open her eyes but both father and daughter were tired..

..Flashback

He saw her in the background as he walked in from work alongside Aakash. She approached them but saw her husband looked busy.. she let him be and approached Aakaash who seemed a little more relaxed.

"Aakaash woh .." before Khushi could get her words out her brother in law had worked out what was on her mind. It's been a long day bhabhi ...bhai's been on his feet all day at the construction site aur hamne khana kha liya hai so I think we'll give dinner a miss.

A little later at night as ASR lays on the recliner not having really moved from the time he had got home his fatigue was of the sort that he didn't want to be disturbed or bothered for that matter especially when he could feel another presence. He opened his eyes to see Khushi pressing legs apart from the fact that it helped ease the pain he didn't like anything about it, he wanted to be left alone. "Yey kya kar rahin ho Khushi... go to sleep !" he lay back on the recliner and could still feel her touch for a while even after he had told her to stop but he ignored it.

End of flashback

He opened his eyes with instance having realized he had drifted off into dreaming of the past. With a heavy sigh he looked around the room and at Aditi for comfort.

Reaching into his trouser pocket for his mobile phone Arnav dialed a number that was stored in his phone.

The same nurse picked up and greeted Arnav, I wont be a moment Mr Raizada, he heard the transition as the lady placed khushi's phone beside her in the hospital ..he could hear her heart beating for the few seconds the phone was against his ear after which he balanced his handset on his chest so she could hear his heartbeat.

As Arnav fell asleep with his daughter and Khushis presence and Khushi with there the nurse stood in the hospital saw Khushi's heart beat strengthen and the only time that ever happened was when she could feel his presence.

...

Mrs Raizada was conscious after close to 6 months one of the nurses had caught sight of movement in Khushi and alerted the doctors straight away.

As joyful as the news was the doctor couldn't get through to ASR.

A few hours and Khushi was fully awake sitting in bed and there was still successful contact made but Khushi wasn't alone. The old lady who was in the next room heard that Arnavs wife had regained consciousness and wanted to see how she was doing.

The old woman seemed to be of some Christian origin she spoke English that Khushi could just about make out from her expression and Khushi being herself answered in Hindi.

You're a lucky lady you know that .. He bought you flowers every day.. fresh flowers every day without fail. !Khushi stared at the old lady as sweet as she was she had no clue who she was.

"Aap ko shyaad koi galat faimi hue hai .. hamre pati..woh is taara ke insaan nahin hai." - You must be mistaken my husband isn't that sort of man.

...

There we are guys - the first installment for all those who are waiting for Silverling and Bitter Sweet I am working on those as we speak, I apologize for the delay.

Edited by jagrutid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start :) Is this related from the 6 months contract from the show? 😳
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Originally posted by: sarunlicious..

Amazing start :) Is this related from the 6 months contract from the show? 😳



No not really but I see why you say that .. well i'm glad you liked it! thank you for reading! first reader!
Edited by jagrutid - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well you got me all sorts of worried for Khushi. What caused her unconsciousness? What's with Kiran getting so much help from Arnav? (cause we can't trust anyone in this world with a clear conscious) Why did he treat Khushi like he didn't care for her and rude to her? And why is he so very nice to Kiran?
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Originally posted by: ifsaal044

Well you got me all sorts of worried for Khushi. What caused her unconsciousness? What's with Kiran getting so much help from Arnav? (cause we can't trust anyone in this world with a clear conscious) Why did he treat Khushi like he didn't care for her and rude to her? And why is he so very nice to Kiran?



Its one of those where the past is revealed as you read and you've read my other works I don't think its anything too different to what i've written before really. Trying not to give away a lot of course 😉 thank you for coming back to read another story!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start
so Arnav wasn't the one who should affection and love so openly. He got changed during khushi comatose. We get to know the importance of love ones when we lost them and in Arnav case, he almost lost her forever and i think Arnav laerned his lesson.
Khushi is conscious. I hope she would be happy seeing her daughter but definitely would be uncomfortable and in for surprise to see CHANGE Arnav.
Update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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very interesting...what would have happen that khushi is in coma...
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Wow interesting
Amazing Start
writer ji i love your writing skills
all your story febulous
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seems their relationship wasnt what those peeps think it is
well he was rude to her
hope he wasnt mean
when you almost lose someone then you know what they mean to you
is that what happened with arnav
she has been in coma for 6 months
how did that happen
and does he not have other family members
he has his brother akash
but what about others
hmmm flowers for her
kissing her on her forehead
that flashback showed different relationship between arhi
him wanting to listen to her heart beats
awww they have a baby
adorable angel
wonder whats story here
guess will know next
cant wait for it unfold

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