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Posted: 10 years ago

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Edited by Miss_Sparkles - 10 years ago

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Soumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Hey peeps.I am back with 1st chapter
Enjoy..!!
Part-1

It's true that life has its ups and downs.When happiness arrive we get surprised and when sadness arrive we get shocked BUT the worst part is that we don't get to know that something worst is going to happen which breaks us badly because we are not mentally prepared for it.

"TaaReY" a happily married couple whose life is going smoothly and happily but who knows something wrong is happening in their "Happily Married Life" and what life has stored for them.
Taani,beautiful girl of 24 year old was sleeping peacefully on the huge king size bed of her bedroom.She checked on the other side of the bed with her eyes closed to snuggle in her hubby's embrace but she frowned in her sleep when she didn't find him on the bed.
"Ye rey subah subah kaha chale gaye..??" said taani waking up n stretched her hands and prayed to her krishna ji for a happy day ahead.
"I think he went to office...I should also get ready as it is already 7:30" said taani coming down from the bed.She went to her closet and took out a formal wear for office and went to bathroom.
After 15 minutes she came out and got ready and went downstairs.

"Rey office chale gaye kya kaka..???" asked taani settling down on dining table.
"Mujhe nahi pata bitiya..Main toh abhi aaya hu 7 bje" answered kaka serving breakfast to taani.
"Thik hai" said taani and started eating her breakfast.After sometime she left for her office.
In car Taani was trying to call rey but he was not picking up.
"Why ain't ge pickinghiss phone..??? I think meeting mein honge" Thought taani.
Meanwhile taani reached office.All wished her good morning as she is the WIFE of their boss MR.REYANSH SINGHANIA .She comes to office to check the accounts and to audit them.She went to his cabin and checked whether he is there or not..??? But to her disappointment he was not present there. She then went to reception.
"Good morning mam" wished Mrs.John
"Morning Mrs.John" replied taani smilingly
"How can I help you mam" asked mrs.john asked with concern seeing taani tensed face.
"Mrs.John did rey come to office today..??? Questioned taani.
"No mam..Reyansh sir didn't come today..Is everything alright mam.??? Asked Mrs.John
"Huh...yes yes everything is alright" replies taani smiling sheepishly and she left from there saying "thank you" to Mrs.John.
"Where are you rey..?? Why aren't you picking my phone..Hope you are fine" thought taani sitting in her cabin and covered her face with her hands feeling upset.
She thought to wait for him till evening.she completed her work and went back to her home as she was not able to concentrate on her work.
*In Singhnaia Mansion*
After getting freshen up she once again tried his number but now his phone was switched off which scared taani more.All negative thoughts were coming in her mind.
"What taani..?? Why are you thinking so negatively..?? He will be fine..Kya pata galti se ho gaya hoga switch off ho gaya hoga...??? Ha yahi hua hoga" said taani assuring herself.
Time was passing every second was like a day for her and she didn't get to know when she fell asleep.At 11:15 she woke up with a jerk.She ran to her bedroom to check whether rey is back or not,but he was not there. This was it for taani she couldn't wait anymore.She dialed swayam's number
"Swayam your phone is ringing..pick it up" said sharon in half sleep.
"Who is calling at this time..??" said swayam irritatingly and saw the dialing screen.
"Taani ka call..?? Wo bhi iss time pe..?? " said swayam confusingly.Hearing this sharon also woke up.
"Hello" said swayam
"Hello hello swayam...main taani bol ri hu" replied taani.
"Ha bolo taani..Is everything okay..??" asked swayam worriedly sensing her trembling voice.
"No swayam..rey ka subah se kuch pata nahi hai...pehle call nahi utha rahe the par ab unka phone switch off bata raha hai..mujhe bahut darr lag raha swayam.." said taani crying bitterly.
Hearing this swaron were shocked and tensed at the same time.
"Taani tum tension mat lo...main aur sharon aa rahe hai abhi ruko..rey bilkul thik hoga.." swayam assured her and disconnected the call.
"Krishnaji...please take care of rey" prayed taani to krishnaji.
To be continued...
Okhay peeps I know it was very boring but it was required for further chapters.So please bear with it.And one more thing swaron are married.Plz hit like and leave your feedbacks via long long comments and silent readers please at least hit like.
Next chapter after 60-70 likes.
Love
Soumya

Edited by Miss_Sparkles - 10 years ago

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sailaja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Nice update but rey gayabh i hope woh thikho

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Awsme update
Loved it

Rey missing tani is so worried I just hope he's fine

Update soon
Wtng

Love u
Keep smiling

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Jasmine_ash

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Res / unres :)
good episode
but first chap itself rey disappeared hope nothing happened to rey.
Nice to see taarey working in same office and swaron marriaged.
I hope everything fine.
Beautifully written. Awesomely depicted taani's worriedness for her hubby.
Waiting for more update pls update soon.

Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago