Kaash... (NOTE: pg 26)

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aditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

just started reading ur fic
its gr8.
continue soon

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan
awesome plz cont soon. 👏

hey, thnx so much i will continue today

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: rachandeep
hey just caught up....very good!!! 👏 hope kripa tells him soon...angad is such a sweetie 😃

thnx for saying my ff is very good..i hope u will continue to read it

i will post up the next part later today..but kripa is not going to tell angad that she loves him anytime soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock
just started reading ur fic
its gr8.
continue soon

thnx so much..do u hv any ff that i can read??

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Arra Dollie

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Posted: 18 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

same here...neither can i wait until she expresses her luv for him, but i am thinking of adding some twists until she does so...

hailaa nahiii aisa na karo jaannn....jk...do anything u want sis but make it kinda romantic....cont soooooon

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aditi

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Posted: 18 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: iqbal_neha91

thnx so much..do u hv any ff that i can read??

i write 1

if u want u can read at

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=268929&P N=1&TPN=1

its LOVE FRIENDSHIP ETC ETC...

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CrazyChatterbox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#57

~PART 13~

Kripa is now six months pregnant. And, everyone is holding a godbharaayi for her at Angad's house. Even Prithvi is there, and he is married to Aliya (Angad's long lost cousin.LOL)

Everyone is really enjoying themselves, and Kripa is talking to Angad.

Kripa: Angad, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

Angad: HAan kaho na Kripa.

Kripa: Angad, I

Angad: Tum kya..?

Kripa: Angad, main..

Angad: Aage toh bolo na Kripa.

Kripa: Angad, I love.. (she looks over at the door, because she suddenly sees sm1..Sameer

Kripa goes over to the door, while Angad is very sad coz he thinks that Kripa still loves Sameer even though she has kinda forgotten him. Angad then looks over at the door, and he sees Sameer there.

Angad: (in his mind) Yeh yahan kaise aa gaya?

By now, every1 is looking towards the door. Even they are all surprised to see Sameer there.

Kripa: Sameer! 😡 Tum mere zindagi mein vaapis kisliye aaye? Tumne us raat jo mere saat kiya? uske liye main tumhe kabhi maaf nahin karoongi. I hate u Sameer, i really hate u!

Sameer: Kripa, please main tumhe kuch bataana chahta hoon.

Kripa: Kya? Main tumhari koi baat sunna nahin chahti.

(Angad comes)

Angad: Kripa, please. Sameer ki baat toh sun lo.

Kripa: (to Angad) Angad, agar tum kehte ho toh theek hai. (now to Sameer) Theek hai Sameer, amin tumhari baat sunne ke liye taiyaar hoon. Kaho!

Sameer: Yahan nahin. Kahiin aur.

Kripa and Sameer go to the garden. Angad follows them, to listen to what they are talking about, but they don't know that, while everybody is still inside the house enjoying the celebration.