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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#121

It was a brilliantly written story. Enjoyed it. Very gripping especially the last part. First I was like how could Aman do this to Arnav and then I was like how could you do this to Arnav and Khushi. Such a sad end to their mysterious story. But I wonder where the tape actually is. If someone found the tape then he/she must have contacted senator or media or someone. This question along with Arnav's future is going to haunt me forever where this story is concerned. I was hoping for a miracle like Arnav that any moment Khushi would show some sign of life.

Thanks kclovesarshi for recommending this but you know how I don't like sad endings and still you did this to me...

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

kclovearshi suggested this story a week ago and I managed to finish reading it over the weekend. Yet it took me a couple of days to get my bearings right to comment. Your mastery at writing is absolutely praiseworthy and the way you have built-up the plot was extremely stunning. I was always on the edge of my seat wanting to greedily read more.

The characters of Arnav and Khushi were superbly defined and also their pasts were revealed in a very interesting manner. It seemed like I am watching a two-character play in a simple setting of her home. However, when I read the end I was stunned to see how things had worked out. It felt abrupt and left a lot to the readers imagination. It might have been deliberate from your end... but I am feeling unsatisfied and incomplete.

What happened to the tapes? Did DA manage to get to them before Arnav? How did anyone other than Arnav get to that location? Who had come there when Arnav collapsed against the wall? What happened to him? And did the truth finally come out? The betrayal of Aman was a bummer and Khushi's death absolutely shocking. It makes me sad to see Arnav-Khushi apart.

I would please please please request you to write an alternate ending like Kavi suggested in her comment. I understand that this is how you had perceived the story... but I really enjoyed this one and would love to read a happy ending! Thank you for this wonderful journey and may you write more of such wonderful stories but with happy endings! 😆

Edited by mints23 - 10 years ago

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Give me one more part lady (if possible with happy ending)😉

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

This is an amazing SS. Gripping and mind blowing.
Do let me know of your other completed works.
Love
Anna

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sandhir_cartoon

@sandhir_cartoon

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

very touching ending..this story made my day..awesome work..

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win7

@win7

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Gripping story. Didn't expect Aman's betrayal however his daughter in danger did provide a high motivation. I was cautious about the ending but still didn't expect khushi's death or Arnav for that matter. I love the idea of sharing their pain and difficulties with each other and finding a little solace with the other. NK was a surprise and and him cheating her with money was a good twist.

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So I was saying

@SoIWasSaying

Sparkler

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Hey!!!! Just came across this SS... Was simply wow... Kept me hooked... Had all the wow elements and twists an turns... Simply wow

Request..., can we have a happy ending instead??? May this turn into a bad dream an khushi an arnav get a chance to start fresh an be happy sorts???? It fells gud to read happy ending ... That's all...

It was wow writing none the less... Continue writing... Cheers... 👍🏼

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chilukuripuri

@chilukuripuri

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

superb story just loved it

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Pooja

@poojasidd123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Found this story today and read all parts at one go. loved it so much! will definitely bookmark it as one of my favorites here. i can understand that the ending suited this story, and it was really brilliant. but i am not able to digest the fact that khushi dies and arnav went into a shock. i don't care about the tape or who got it. right now, i am painfully engrossed with the question as what would happen to arnav's future without khushi by his side if he did survive. so I want to ask you this...can you please just give us an alternate ending of some sort as some readers suggested? or maybe an epilogue where we can have a glimpse of arnav's life after the painful ordeal? I am hoping against hope that nothing should happen to arnav.