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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

For some reason, I was anticipating if anyone got hurt it would have been Arnav and Khushi might end up being pregnant with his child. I mean why would Khushi be on birth control if she wasn't with NK for so long. I had a million scenarios running in my mind, but not this ending.

It really was an amazing story.

Edited by ifsaal044 - 10 years ago

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zooni

@zooni.blue

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Awesome story

Love ur writing

But I do wish ending was different

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

WHAT A STORY!! OH MY GOD!!!!!!! TOTALLY UNEXPECTED ENDING!!! I LOVED IT... though it was very heartbreaking but still I LOVED IT!!!

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rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

I am speechless! I never expected such an ending at all!

I can understand why you stopped where you did. Does it matter to know what happened to the tape or to him afterwards? Definitely not. He lost everything with just a gunshot. How does it matter to know what happens afterwards?

Only disturbing thing is that now my mind is going through all the what if's.. And I hate it!!!

Please don't stop writing, and I really hope you give us a happy ending the next time you write.

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Brishti

@brishti84

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

So I re-read this and come to think of it the ending is kinda open. We never know the people are that are coming towards Arnav. Nor do we know for sure if Khushi is dead. She could be unconscious and the people could be the DA and his people coming to help Arnav after seeing him entering the building. So call me hopeless but I choose to imagine Khushi wake up in Paris with Arnav. This was an amazing read.

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

A very gripping story and well written too. I wish it had a happy ending though.

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prpk525

@prpk525

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Nice one, but the ending was not the one I expected.

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sushan

@sushan

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Wow amazing very captive story . What a unique end I am a fan of happy endings so I am a little shaken with this end but no complaints I still loved it Hope to read some more stories from you

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

You know, I had this bookmarked and finally read all the chapters today.. My heart was literally pounding on the last part.. I was definitely not expecting this end; Khushi dying and Arnav going into shock.. But you can't possibly end there you know.. Even if Khushi is dead and Arnav's life is ruined, I still want the justice to prevail.. This story is not just about Arnav & Khushi is it.. There was crime.. There was murder.. Multiple now.. Hence you couldn't be leaving it where you left :)

I had imagined the DA had retrieved it before Arnav and would capture Aman & his cronies and Arnav & Khushi living happily ever after.. Alas.. I'm still reeling..

Anyways this was a fantastic SS and you are a charming story teller.. Even though you didn't mention the location, I had a feeling this story was set in California..

Please please write an epilogue.. I just want justice for Khushi's stupid & idiotic act or heroic may be as she had best intentions in mind and Arnav's helplessness despite his efforts to not put her in that situation..

Or can I ask you to write an alternate ending? HAPPY one?