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Pinky.Raizada

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update candy, loved little Khushi. can't wait for more.

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sk2405

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Posted: 10 years ago

You have come up with such a brave story on Republic Day. There couldn't have been a better theme. The start reminded me of the innumerable terror threats and attacks that have been making rounds in our country, leaving hundreds homeless and orphaned in their wake.

Little Arnav is really brave and aggressive and Khushi is the patience that fills the void in his life. Their career choices had me pleasantly surprised and I am glad they fulfilled it.

I wonder what separated the two of them from each other, probably a terror attack again. I hope they meet soon and consciously together complete the little promise they had made as kids.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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hararnav

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow.. Thank you sooo much for giving us this story...

loved the little determined Arnav...

they really did mean every word they uttered...

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Zeehana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Great start!!

Very interesting

Love the description of child Arnav and Khushi

They both seem adorable

And also the transition of them as adults

They lived to their words

Again as i said this story will be interesting

Eager to read what comes next

Update soon!!

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aglaeca9

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for d new story...
Lovely start...

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saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

OH WOW what a beautiful start !! you write too well

Cant wait to read the other updates

Thanks for pm xx

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Rabiabegum

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!!! What an amazing start and out of this world story:))!!! Can't wait for the next update. You're an awesome writer!!!

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Arnav and Khushi achieved what they wanted to become but they lost each other and are waiting to meet again. Nice start

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ranogill

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Posted: 10 years ago

So they both become what they wanted to... But lost each other... Already hooked on story

Edited by ranogill - 10 years ago

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maria

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved it dear thanks for the pm ur storiEs are perfect and so true to headtt

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