Arshi SS : If I Could Stop (Complete)

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#251

Sorry for commenting late Chav.

The last two chapters finally got to read now. & as usual it's amazing. Brilliant. After Arnav gains his consciousness, Arshi moments, their confessions, promises, everything were simply brilliant , awesome. The way both reacted, after practically waiting for each other for 20 years, is very normal. It's an extremely emotional update.

The Epilogue was superb s usual.

A very nice short story , I must say.

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katj

@katj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#252

Excellent story dear..
So touching.. Just enjoy reading..
Beautiful ending
Thanks for pm

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@Naina7

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#253

Awesome.. One of an wonderful story I have read !!

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#254

sory fr late comment's
superb nice update...
read all parts ws awesome..

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#255

awesome dear... dat was fab story...well sorry for being late in replying...n also we'll cme bck dear...n just waiting for more n more updates from u...

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#256

the way u portray their love always leaves me speechless. welcome back :)

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#257

Wow! Wow! Wow! I read the whole story in one go, and I must say you have given us the best comeback gift ever! The whole story was well penned down, and you left me with tears when you narrated little Arnav and Khushi's plight!

The way you you interwined the past and present lives of Arnav and Khushi into each chapter was amazing. To be honest, little Khushi was really cute. Her heart was pure, and she was innocence personified. Whereas Arnav was the perfect shield for her. The way he used all his strength to protect little Khushi, even when he was a mere kid at that time was really honorable of him😊

And finally they grew into two individuals who lived to protect the valuable lives of people. They may have been apart, yet they were close. They were bonded by an invisible thread because of their love for their occupations. And when they finally met, it was nothing beyond perfection. The way Arnav proposed to Khushi without thinking even twice was really lovely. And thus began another chapter of their lives, which was nothing less than romantic😳

This was a story which was lovely beyond words, and it was perfect❤️

Thank you for sharing this really heart touching story with us🤗

Thanks for the pms😃

Eagerly waiting to read your old FFs along with what's to come in the future😉

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_Chaverah_

@_Chaverah_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: V3Od
Wow! Wow! Wow! I read the whole story in one go, and I must say you have given us the best comeback gift ever! The whole story was well penned down, and you left me with tears when you narrated little Arnav and Khushi's plight!
The way you you interwined the past and present lives of Arnav and Khushi into each chapter was amazing. To be honest, little Khushi was really cute. Her heart was pure, and she was innocence personified. Whereas Arnav was the perfect shield for her. The way he used all his strength to protect little Khushi, even when he was a mere kid at that time was really honorable of him😊

And finally they grew into two individuals who lived to protect the valuable lives of people. They may have been apart, yet they were close. They were bonded by an invisible thread because of their love for their occupations. And when they finally met, it was nothing beyond perfection. The way Arnav proposed to Khushi without thinking even twice was really lovely. And thus began another chapter of their lives, which was nothing less than romantic😳

This was a story which was lovely beyond words, and it was perfect❤️

Thank you for sharing this really heart touching story with us🤗

Thanks for the pms😃

Eagerly waiting to read your old FFs along with what's to come in the future😉

And I'm literally bowled!

Thank you so much hun. It is such a pleasure to have you here. And I so very very love d way uv summarized d entire ff. I'm humbled, honestly. And I'm grateful that you think I could bring out the emotions as good as youv mentioned. Thank you once again. Love ya!