Arshi SS : If I Could Stop (Complete)

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Chaverah...

Do u know what u've done??

U've surpassed the standard set by u only..

What a story..what a story !!!

U always build up a beautiful world..

Arhi meet for the first time n feel connected to each other..

Nothing matters more to them..except each other..

They share each other's grief..n unite to lead a contented life..

This time..

This connection has been made since their childhood..

Awww...

Two innocent kids.. lost their parents in a damn blast..

they become each other's strength as well weakness ..

Arnav...Khushi's Annao😳 takes all her responsibilities to his shoulders..from feeding to making her sleep..from consoling to discussing future..

They want to live together..

They wanna fulfill their own n each other's dreams..They will rescue n cure the victims..

OH...

They were separated..

for full 20 yrs..

but..

to renuite..As they always know it..

I cried buckets,Chaverah..

I've to muster up courage to finally,,finally comment..

I...

Love Glitter, Scraps, Graphics and comments

it...

Fauzia..

Ps:-

Pls pay me the amount I spent on a couple of tissue paper box 😳

Sorry..

I m that straight forward..

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Swathi/Ammu

@Swathiarshi

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Beautiful and emotional. Loved it. Short and sweet 😊 . Good job. Thanks for the pm

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KrishVeer

@KrishVeer

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#233

It's so good to have you back, that too with a new SS. I have missed your beautiful, regular updates so much. Glad that you decided to start off with a fresh SS! i'm sure that this is gonna be another masterpiece!

Will get into commenting from now on😉

Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful stories with us and letting us reminisce with the amazing couple of Arshi🤗

Okay then, I'm off to read😊

Edited by V3Od - 10 years ago

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Their reunion was so emotional and heartfelt. The tears that were shed gave away the story of their bottled up agony, immeasurable pain and never ending hurt but finally their sufferings found an outlet in the other's embrace. His proposal was indeed different and beautiful.

The insecurities might always remain in the back of their minds but their undying and unconditional love will never be overpowered by the fear ever again. At the end of the day, no matter what they will be together and stay strong for the other.

Very well written! 😊

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Mina-18

@Mina-18

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Hey,

Welcome back! And what a gift! The story was very warm and cuddly...like a cup of coffee and a warm nook that you want to cuddle into in a lazy winter afternoon...

The love that you define in all your stories, I am afraid I don't see around me anymore. So I wonder should I am happy for your enthuse or a little afraid for you...May be my cynical mind makes me say so. Who am I kidding...I am a big sucker of happily ever afters and self-consuming love. SO go on dear friend, weave on this magic and let us believe that out there, there is still this kind of love...

Thanks for the pm!

Happy writing!

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#236

OMG this is awesome.

Bookmarked to read further.

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Wow...what a sweet love story...very emotional as well..loved it...😊

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Beautiful and touching story...thanks for the PM

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padmakrishnan

@pokemonian

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#239

loved it

they r so much in love which i can feel while reading

beautiful epilogue

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#240

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loved it chaverah
it was such a heart touching and most romantic ss
the love of arshi for each other was soo awesome
the fear to lose each other was described so beautifully by u
i was soo excited and happy to get pm from u daily
ab to aadat si ho gayi this mujhko
now have to wait for ur updates
the ending was awesome
continue ur writing soon

Edited by mahrusweety - 10 years ago

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