Arshi SS : If I Could Stop (Complete)

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

first ov all; WELCOME BACK...😛

now coming towards the story, its such a beautiful n emotional one...

continue soon...

thanks 4 pm...

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Amazing double update sand thank ufor the quick updates too.

It's dam emotional.

He came back just for her.

Thanks for the pm

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Oh thank God he is alive!!!

OMG they were separated from each other

Waiting for more

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musa khan

@musax007

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

amazing oh god i cried at the end of update oh my god amazing

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

For a little boy, Arnav is very mature and aware of his surroundings while on the other hand, Khushi is carefree and innocent. No doubt Arnav was so loving and protective from always.

The little moment when she finds the blue flower was very emotional. Her counter reaction of touching the Taveez and assuring herself was beautiful.

The eagerness in her actions when she was trying to revive his heartbeat was so heartfelt. Her giving up on her life as well was a mere proof of the depth of her feelings. The confrontation towards the end was worth everything.

Waiting for the next part.

Update soon. 😊

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

that was sooo emotional
loved the update
awesome

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

wow
such an emotional
heart touching
updates
oh they went to biarding
and lost contact
finally khush found her annao
but in a heart breaking condition
and thank God he.is back to her

and what a confession
loved it
waiting for next one

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

AAAI Haaai

Very emotional one

Both the chapters were very nice. Little Khushi & Arnav were so cute. The bonding between them & their interaction were even more cute & refreshing. Unaware of anything around them, their innocent hearts create such a strong & powerful bonding between them. It's very nice to see.

Obviously at that stage they need to go away from each other to have a career , they promised each other , only to have a future together.

The confession was really an awesome one. Glad that he came back to life. I just wish, whatever, physical harm has been caused to him, should not be an extremely serious one.

A fantastic update.

Waiting for the next part.

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ArshiAsya

@Alai123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Awesome update of chapter 3 & 4

At first it was sad to see Khushi in that state but the last part was so lovely

Arnav survived and mouthed back to her I love you

Continue soon!

Thanks for the pm😉

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Barunz4ever

@Barunz4ever

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#150

Aww it's so emotional !!!

Little khushi and Arnav were super cute.and adorable...sad they had to part ways but for better and now when they have met again , how can Annao leave his khushi once more...A very heart wrenching update...loved it!!

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