ArShi FF:Itna Karona Mujhe Pyaar|Thread 2|EPILOGUE

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hiraah

@hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#431

Aaa!! It's over?? Nahi!

But I must say it was a wonderful journey.

I have been super busy with school so I haven't been replying to scraps or Pms.. infact I haven't even read them! But I have been dutifully following this wonderful story of your in between classes and if I need a break from studying.

It was a really interesting concept.. so Arnav and Khushi were separated because of their parents rivalry?! That's bad!

I loved how khushi was a strong independent women with her own up and running fashion house. #WomenPower

As for Arnav.. *sigh* what should I say? His flirting was cute and cheeky, his bossy-ness was so sexy! His caring nature towards khushi was admirable and desirable... and of course... the confession!

The confession was filled with so much emotion and everything that was left unsaid for all those many years that they were separated were finally said. And that too with "sunraha hai" playing! It was a perfect fot that showed the love and pain between Arnav and Khushi.. I Loved it!!

I found the electric shock scene to be so lovely.. it has to be one of my fav scenes in this story. Khushi's vulnerability when the lights went out, Arnav's immediate instinct to protect her, the way things were so natural and not awkward between them, the administration for one another, Arnav's need to look manly in front of Khushi even though he was feeling scared (that was so cute!😆)

And finally, khushi's care, concern, panic and realisation👏

Oh and I almost forgot! You know when you said Arshi were going to dance, I thought they were gonna dance to Teri Meri... I was so happy and excited when they danced to jadu hai nasha hai that I actually played the song while reading that update! (I know im so 🤪 na?)

But yes it was all lovely!!👍🏼

and I can't wait to read your other stories :)

With love,

Hiraah

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Anushka

@anushka12345

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Posted: 10 years ago

#432

It was just awesome Yagya

Read the whole story in one go and I must really say that I have became a fan of yours now.

You write so well so perfect choice of words which add a beauty to the story, to the passion ,love and intensity.

The best part is your style - not at all complicating, so imaginative, perfect description of scenes, and perfect dialogues.
" This heart was craving for the confession, which you let out today. This heart, had always produced heartbeats which had your shadows on it. This heart, had always beaten for you, with you. With every breath I take, I feel assured that I breath in the same air which you do. But what I forgot was, that not only the breath we take in was the same but our hearts, our souls are one, were meant to be one and will be one." said Khushi, with a weak smile on her face while tears were streaming down her cheeks.This is the best confession I feel I have ever read.Awww Khushi was just awesome" You can hug me only this tight, Arnav?" teased Khushi.
The ASR with his signature smirk was just awesome." Challenging the person who never lost a deal, are we?" said Arnav, with a smirk.
At last all I could say is I just loved this.
Hey, plz do send me the link to epilogue.Plz Plz Plz

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Yagya

@Yagyaseni

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: anushka12345
It was just awesome Yagya
Read the whole story in one go and I must really say that I have became a fan of yours now.
You write so well so perfect choice of words which add a beauty to the story, to the passion ,love and intensity.
The best part is your style - not at all complicating, so imaginative, perfect description of scenes, and perfect dialogues.
" This heart was craving for the confession, which you let out today. This heart, had always produced heartbeats which had your shadows on it. This heart, had always beaten for you, with you. With every breath I take, I feel assured that I breath in the same air which you do. But what I forgot was, that not only the breath we take in was the same but our hearts, our souls are one, were meant to be one and will be one." said Khushi, with a weak smile on her face while tears were streaming down her cheeks.This is the best confession I feel I have ever read.Awww Khushi was just awesome" You can hug me only this tight, Arnav?" teased Khushi.
The ASR with his signature smirk was just awesome." Challenging the person who never lost a deal, are we?" said Arnav, with a smirk.
At last all I could say is I just loved this.
Hey, plz do send me the link to epilogue.Plz Plz Plz

Thanks a lot, darling. Now when I reread the confession, I was like " Did I write this actually?"! That specific part is very close to my heart as I wanted to tell this to someone but couldn't but I let it out in this! Glad that you liked it and I sent the link through PM!

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akai

@akai

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#434

It's really short and cute.

I love it.

Arnav loves her more.

Writing style is very nice.

Keep going

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akai

@akai

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#435

Really loved it.

Confession of arnav was very emotional

When he signed the divorce paper and cried

Even my tears

I don't know when I cried.

Just noticed my eyes are watery.

I loved it dear.

Ur nice.

Please can you give me the link to epilogue

Please. Need to read the closure.

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Kritika

@Karkit

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#436

nice story
read all parts ws beautiful
love it

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zida

@zida

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#437

thanks 4blog link. dat was so beautiful...
Perfect epl.

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#438

Started reading this awesome, passionate, intense story. Have completed thread one. You are simply an awesome writer. are great with words.

Can you please add me to your PM list. I will send a buddy request. I would like to very much read your other stories.

Can you please pm me the link to the epilogue.

Edited by vks11 - 10 years ago

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#439

I always loved this FF..

I always believed that Arhi loved each other..

Their anger was just a veil..

Thank God,all misunderstandings were solved n they were reunited in a gr8 way 😛

I m gonna miss this story,yaar 😊

But no worries..😃

Ur on going work n Mere rang mein rangne wale haina 😉

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pakpearl

@pakpearl

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#440

I just reread from p-15-epilogue n realised that my earlier comments were not enough...😃

Yagya..

This FF presents a brutal,ruthless Arnav n a very angry,hurt n protesting Khushi..

I always felt a current going underneath this forced relationship...

U managed to hook all ur readers to this story of urs so successfully..

We were as eagar asKhushi was to listen Arnav's confession..

We were also in pain to see Arhi in pain..

U dint tell us the proper details of their past n separation..

But I've no complaints...

They love each other n can't live without each other is real thing..

👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ 👏

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