ArHi OS: Broken Pieces...

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Nice os try to post arnav's redemption pls...

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harman12

@harman12

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

poor khushi slwsys accused even if its not her mistake

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pran28671

@pran28671

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

sad update 😭

poor khushi

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

That was a nice showcasing of khushi's emotions...

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pree2605

@pree2605

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Really an sad os..

loved it..

thnxx fr pm

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surrazdan

@surrazdan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

why do u always write sad stories.. it breaks my heart

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sushmitasahu

@sushmitasahu

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

A very heartfelt OS. Awesome. And truly said words hurt more than action. Would love it if u were to make it into a SS.

Thanks for such a wonderful OS

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piyaarshi

@piyaarshi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

i always use to imagine this type of scene where khushi falls on a glass table... (i know its really really painfull, but then it is a world of fiction.)
khushi has a habit of tripping or fainting so this is the first time arnav is not there to catch her...

wonderfull one shot...
i loved it...
are u planning for a second part of it??? would love to read that too..