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bluesky10

@bluesky10

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

You are an indeed writer

Love to read your work

It was painful one

Thanks for your pm

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Abhisa

@dattamaitry

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Sorry for being late...

that was an emotional update...

but good one...

thanx for pm...

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Richa

@richaarshi

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Really emotional OS

loved it

thanks for the PM

update soon

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crazy_sweeto

@crazy_sweeto

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Awesome one dear but also a sad one. If possible please give an extension or an alternative ending. You've done a great job.

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

It can't be an OS !!!!!!

give us part 2,3,4,5,6,... infinity !!!!

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

That was so emotional
Poor khushi

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scrapbooker

@scrapbooker

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Nooo! don't leave it to my imagination. If I had such a great one I would be writing these stories. Leaving the story on this extremely sad note... bad sport. LOL

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Oh my

I like this OS and the one with 'teri yaad aayi'

Wow it went deep to the soul.
pyaar ka doosra naam dard hei, I know😭

Love

Anna

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

i read the first os... and nikla sad one

coming to the os when i read the line where it says pain is sometimes so worse that they leaves the scars on you...imprint on you for lifelong... i felt in the IPK too they did unjustice with the Khushi's character... no matter what the matter is Arnav should never followed his di with eyes closed... in short nobody should do that i personally feel it very bad... its not appropriate to other people too...and here he said such harsh words to his wife he love... m getting senti here

nice os...

keep writing more

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lara3110

@lara3110

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Awesome OS. Arnav is full of his own importance. He was very cruel to Khushi inspite of her effort to rescue him from the kidnappers.

Inwished you had continued . Think about it. You arevan incredible writer. 👍🏼 👍🏼

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