The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 1 Complete) - Page 91

Originally posted by: hiraah

hehehe do you really think I can leave a comment like that? Of course not!

Now im leaving you a Longwa comment for your delightfully long update.

The story was so good!!!! I actually found myself thinking about it a while later while I was doing house chores, I was trying to figure out what will happen next as I wished for the next update. and trust me, im not exaggerating at all... (yes it was that good! and yes my mom takes full advantage of all her children!)

now you know why I cant read teasers.. I read the full update yet I was like that, if I read teasers I would pull my hair out.

I like reading the quotes at the start.. I feel like its a clue to how the story might be.. where do you find these quotes from books or google?

I Have heard the jalebi joke between Nikhil and Khushi in various different versions but it still managed to crack me up. that's how cute and adorable Nikhil was.❤️

Anjali's entry was perfect. 1 of the many things i feel a story must have, to maintain the IPKKND feel is the love and compassion in Anjali's character (that is, if her character is in the story.)

and the certain attributes in other characters in the story also, otherwise that name can be changed with any other name and it wont make a difference. Along the way, according to the mood and situation of the story, then the characters attitude can change (but there has to be an explanation.. i know, im a very specific and difficult reader😛)

The scene between Nikhil and Appu reminded me of our scraps!! hahahah it was so cute! the whole twitching the nose and squeezing his eyes scene.. 😉

I really thought ASR was at the mandir and my heart stopped for a second.. i bet that's where you ended your teaser and gave your readers an almost heart attack didn't you 😈

I loved how Khushi showed ASR his place during the meeting!! Aaj mausam hai suhana, Laad governor ko unka jaga dikhana, la la la la la LA! Simply loved it!! Woohoo! Khushi 😃

when ASR asked for a word in private i was like "oh no! is he going to make one of his dark

fantasies reality 😲

the confrontation scene was written really well with EVERYTHING. it had intimacy, it had fear, it had strength, secrets revealed, secrets hidden.. simply put, EVERYTHING.

Finally! Khushi knows he cant remember... i really want ASR to find out what he did to Khushi, he needs to help her out of the mess he unknowingly pushed her into..

Please update soon before i become a grumpy kid instead of maintaining my sexy cool image😉 😆

With love,

Hiraah

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

Nia...you actually used that saying from our childhood na? History geography badi befawa..that one? Omg...I just realized it now 😆