The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 1 Complete)

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#891

Hmmm lets see how he remembers

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Desire6

@Desire6

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Aww ...i so jus ..adore dis to cutiepiesss...
😳
..dis Niki...uppps...yaar...yeh bacha ladki q nahi hai...koi gal nahi i ll cal him ..Nik..
😛
ha so wat i was tellin...yeh nik and his di dey are so sweet...i jus adore der relation ...nd loved his banter nd her crib..
so it was appu di ka CHOTE...NOT REAL CHOTE..😛😛😛😛😛
bt damn...dis was d real clash of titans..yaar..
d way she retorted back...nd d way ...dey were havin heated arguments...i was 😕😕😕😲😲😲
bt den at last his words...like...
b my guest...wat he meant by dat...
see i am so curious
nd jus loved dis brave girl...khusi...d way she retorted back even in front of all nd also face off...
so true...may b coz for her ...he has already done d worst ...nd it doesnt matter to her of wat more he can do...
am i rt
nd on other side...ll love to see...
payal nd her starting new business...loved der talk...
nd ...now i am too intrugied to dis story
ur one line...

Nikhill is so much like Arnav...makes my great Brain😛😉 think dat Nikhil is Arnav ka son..nd
he not remembering were he met...her..nd she not lettin him know...makes me more curious...

okay dont laugh if my logic nd thinking has no sense...main aise hi hu...
i am good at making khayali pulav😛😛😛😛

now am really really curieous...to see..how he gonna recognise her..nd wat will be his after effect..
heheheh!!!! i love music..nd dont mind...music in background ...hehhehe😆😆😆

amazing ...fab update...
cont soon..waitin
waiitn
wiatn...

Ps..sory for my blabber...story jyada achi lagi ..toh bak bak karti hu main..please bear it😛😛😛

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Originally posted by: Desire6
Aww ...i so jus ..adore dis to cutiepiesss...
😳
..dis Niki...uppps...yaar...yeh bacha ladki q nahi hai...koi gal nahi i ll cal him ..Nik..
😛
ha so wat i was tellin...yeh nik and his di dey are so sweet...i jus adore der relation ...nd loved his banter nd her crib..
so it was appu di ka CHOTE...NOT REAL CHOTE..😛
bt damn...dis was d real clash of titans..yaar..
d way she retorted back...nd d way ...dey were havin heated arguments...i was 😲
bt den at last his words...like...
b my guest...wat he meant by dat...
see i am so curious
nd jus loved dis brave girl...khusi...d way she retorted back even in front of all nd also face off...
so true...may b coz for her ...he has already done d worst ...nd it doesnt matter to her of wat more he can do...
am i rt
nd on other side...ll love to see...
payal nd her starting new business...loved der talk...
nd ...now i am too intrugied to dis story
ur one line...

Nikhill is so much like Arnav...makes my great Brain😛😉 think dat Nikhil is Arnav ka son..nd
he not remembering were he met...her..nd she not lettin him know...makes me more curious...

okay dont laugh if my logic nd thinking has no sense...main aise hi hu...
i am good at making khayali pulav😛

now am really really curieous...to see..how he gonna recognise her..nd wat will be his after effect..
heheheh!!!! i love music..nd dont mind...music in background ...hehhehe😆😆😆

amazing ...fab update...
cont soon..waitin
waiitn
wiatn...

Ps..sory for my blabber...story jyada achi lagi ..toh bak bak karti hu main..please bear it😛😛😛

Haha Divya, I didnt even realize that I had started waiting for your comments...

Clash of Titans...seriously? Maybe that should have been the name of the Chapter then 👍🏼 I will pakka use this for one of the future chapters...🤣

'Be my guest' ooohh..this ASR and his crude logic...I think what he meant was...be my guest, for whatever gonna invade in their lives...ahem ahem...you know what I mean! You are absolutely right about Khushi's stance though...what more worse can he do!

Now dheere dheere, Payaljee and Akashjee is gonna drum into our ears...hehe...

And no way, see like minds think alike. So whatever doesnt make sense, find their place into the side notes of the update like you would have seen

And I hope and wish that your bak bak continues forever...thats what we are here for right...to stress ourselves out of our regular life!

Happy Sunday...I guess you are from India...!

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#894

Nice part

Both the kids are cute

Like how Khushi answers aarnav back

Waiting to read nxt part

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Kiara

@Rocking_Angel

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#895

awehsmm updt
loved itt
updt nxxt prtt soon
waitnn n thnxxx fo da pm...

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hiraah

@hiraah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#896

very nice. thanks for PM.

Please update soon.

With love,

Hiraah

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Nice updt
I lk khushi chrctr here such a bold lady nt lk our shw where she was sucrificing lamb n punching bag for asr.waiting hw asr remembr khushi n hw he react
Lov their chemestry
Tanx for pm

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hiraah

@hiraah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#898

hehehe do you really think I can leave a comment like that? Of course not!

Now im leaving you a Longwa comment for your delightfully long update.

The story was so good!!!! I actually found myself thinking about it a while later while I was doing house chores, I was trying to figure out what will happen next as I wished for the next update. and trust me, im not exaggerating at all... (yes it was that good! and yes my mom takes full advantage of all her children!)

now you know why I cant read teasers.. I read the full update yet I was like that, if I read teasers I would pull my hair out.

I like reading the quotes at the start.. I feel like its a clue to how the story might be.. where do you find these quotes from books or google?

I Have heard the jalebi joke between Nikhil and Khushi in various different versions but it still managed to crack me up. that's how cute and adorable Nikhil was.❤️

Anjali's entry was perfect. 1 of the many things i feel a story must have, to maintain the IPKKND feel is the love and compassion in Anjali's character (that is, if her character is in the story.)

and the certain attributes in other characters in the story also, otherwise that name can be changed with any other name and it wont make a difference. Along the way, according to the mood and situation of the story, then the characters attitude can change (but there has to be an explanation.. i know, im a very specific and difficult reader😛)

The scene between Nikhil and Appu reminded me of our scraps!! hahahah it was so cute! the whole twitching the nose and squeezing his eyes scene.. 😉

I really thought ASR was at the mandir and my heart stopped for a second.. i bet that's where you ended your teaser and gave your readers an almost heart attack didn't you 😈

I loved how Khushi showed ASR his place during the meeting!! Aaj mausam hai suhana, Laad governor ko unka jaga dikhana, la la la la la LA! Simply loved it!! Woohoo! Khushi 😃

when ASR asked for a word in private i was like "oh no! is he going to make one of his dark

fantasies reality 😲

the confrontation scene was written really well with EVERYTHING. it had intimacy, it had fear, it had strength, secrets revealed, secrets hidden.. simply put, EVERYTHING.

Finally! Khushi knows he cant remember... i really want ASR to find out what he did to Khushi, he needs to help her out of the mess he unknowingly pushed her into..

Please update soon before i become a grumpy kid instead of maintaining my sexy cool image😉 😆

With love,

Hiraah

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

See thats what I am talking about! I mean who remembers a person from so long back...and all that remembering her becoz of that beauty thing is so not practical...thank you for backing me up there! 😃

The last statement was just a precursor to what may come next in their lives; said in an obsured ASR-ish way...😉
hopefully I made it clearer?

If that part means anything related to there future, I m really excited about it because anything being said like that and that too in ASRish way.. It seeks to be quote an interesting thing