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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

wow arnav is facing his own medicine now i guess but after noing who she is will her hurt her or feel soft corner on her...

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Hi A good chapter,

But confused a bit about is it happening on the same day or is it another day?

I thought Khushi has left for the day around 5 to pick up his son. But again we read about Arnav's emotions from the morning.

Anyways the story is interesting and very promising. You are a very good writer. looking forward to read more especially the attraction Arnav feels for Khushi and why Khushi is so angry over him.

Thanks for the PM.

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hiraah

@hiraah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Ok I have finally read the whole thing and I must say after the first chapter I didn't want to continue cause it really takes a lot to deal with the fact that khushi and Sham were a couple and even have a son! I mean, the fact that Sham actually managed to claim khushi os just gross.

Think about it, which name would you like hearing? Khushi khumari gupta Singh Raizada or khushi khumari gupta jha?

If it was that difficult for me, mere reader to stomach than it must have been was harder for you to write..

BUT..

I am actually hooked to the story now. It's so interesting and intriguing..

Anjali is married to Aman? 👍🏼

Aman is a doctor and Arnav's best friend? 👍🏼

Aman and Anjali have a daughter?👍🏼 (she is adorable by the way )

Basically this is a really different version but it's something that has lots of potential to become a great story.. its a sea of possibilities and I'm dying to dive in and find out what's going to happen...

My mind is filled with questions now,

Will Aakash and Payal fall in love?

Will khushi marry Arnav to protect nikhil from Sham?

If so, what would drive Arnav to propose?

How will Arnav get rid of Lavanya or will he keep her?

Is lavanya going to cause trouble between Arshi?

And the questions just keep going on and on...

Update soon please!! A special request from your "what the!" Hehe 😃

With love,

Hiraah

Ps: working with all that IT stuff at work has really wired your brain differently, what a thought and what a story! It's awesome!

The unexpected isn't always pleasant, but it's what spices life up and keeps it from being boring.

Ok I have praised you enough so I shall go now 😛

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: BarunFan1212
Hi A good chapter,

But confused a bit about is it happening on the same day or is it another day?

I thought Khushi has left for the day around 5 to pick up his son. But again we read about Arnav's emotions from the morning.

Anyways the story is interesting and very promising. You are a very good writer. looking forward to read more especially the attraction Arnav feels for Khushi and why Khushi is so angry over him.

Thanks for the PM.

hey..so nice to hear again from you...!

Yes its all happening on the same day. So, in the previous update, we started the day (Monday to be specific) with Khushi getting her kid ready for school, then we ended on Khushi leaving for the day around 5.

Now in this update, we started the same day from morning, but with ASR in focus...saw the day through his eyes untill evening (around 5pm)...then went back to Khushi picking up her kid...and then we came back to ASR again with la and then further at his home in RM...

Is it clearer now? Normally this is the way, I had seen authors describing the story/scenes in novel, hence I adopted this method...is it too confusing?

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: hiraah
Ok I have finally read the whole thing and I must say after the first chapter I didn't want to continue cause it really takes a lot to deal with the fact that khushi and Sham were a couple and even have a son! I mean, the fact that Sham actually managed to claim khushi os just gross.
Think about it, which name would you like hearing? Khushi khumari gupta Singh Raizada or khushi khumari gupta jha?

If it was that difficult for me, mere reader to stomach than it must have been was harder for you to write..

BUT..

I am actually hooked to the story now. It's so interesting and intriguing..
Anjali is married to Aman? 👍🏼
Aman is a doctor and Arnav's best friend? 👍🏼
Aman and Anjali have a daughter?👍🏼 (she is adorable by the way )
Basically this is a really different version but it's something that has lots of potential to become a great story.. its a sea of possibilities and I'm dying to dive in and find out what's going to happen...

My mind is filled with questions now,
Will Aakash and Payal fall in love?
Will khushi marry Arnav to protect nikhil from Sham?
If so, what would drive Arnav to propose?
How will Arnav get rid of Lavanya or will he keep her?
Is lavanya going to cause trouble between Arshi?
And the questions just keep going on and on...

Update soon please!! A special request from your "what the!" Hehe 😃

With love,
Hiraah

Ps: working with all that IT stuff at work has really wired your brain differently, what a thought and what a story! It's awesome!
The unexpected isn't always pleasant, but it's what spices life up and keeps it from being boring.
Ok I have praised you enough so I shall go now 😛

Trust you to think so differently Hiraah...while many readers have criticized me for putting Shyam and Khushi together, you, my dear, are the first person to actually imagine my feelings for writing such a thing!!!😆 well, now that you have crossed the first chapter, am sure you are not gonna be disappointed...because just like you said, 'The unexpected isn't always pleasant, but it's what spices life up and keeps it from being boring'...this line is just wow...is it original? 👏

Wow Hiraah...your questions...so thought provoking. Keep putting across your questions as and when they pop up in your head and I will try my best to go the non-traditional way 😉

But they made me ponder over whats going to happen too...you know sometimes, I just take a back seat and imagine the whole thing playing out...and suddenly wham...! am up and rush down to write down what I just saw...😆

Loved your PS...comment! So 'what the!' Basically I don't think a third person could ever decode the exchange of sentiments between us by just the last line 😉

Well talk to you in my second half of the day...you know through 'what the!' scraps ⭐️

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: Linsie

hmm 😲 😲 no... she married shyam... coz the video leak
coz trouble for khushi

Yea, But something could have happened between that time...

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada

Yea, But something could have happened between that time...

haha...Pinky...I guess that's the author inside you is awake and active...waise its morning in Hyderabad...I guess, it must be evening for you there??

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Really interesting part of the story. I feel so sorry for Khushi. Still it is commendable how she stands up for herself.

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

well.. Its just the becoming of the bad day for arnav... We all know how much he adores control in his life and when love enters, control does take a back door..

continue soon

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

it's getting interesting day by day ..update was beautifully written .
I wonder what really happened between khushi and arnav .. I can see that only khushi could remembers him but not Arnav ..wonder why didn't Arnav remembers khushi ?? does he have some kind of a memory loss ?? is there something happened
between them in the past just before she got married to shyam??
arnav's dream is interesting too.
waiting for next eagerly .