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Sheetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

Good one!! It's making me think what exactly happened In past

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Mojgan

@mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#732

Trs chre Shalini,

I am so surprised you were kind of unhappy of this update. I really liked it. It is always fascinating for me to read different points of view/ sides of the same story through the eyes of different characters. ASR is in trouble, hai na? He will fall in love. How smart I am hahahahahaha

1- I love Khushi as a mom.

2- I love that you made Appu and Nikhil being friend. It is so promising. More Arshi scene.

3- I am still defending my theory that Arshi's confrontation had been very serious and it had some consequences ;-)

4- hHw come ASR hasn't recogn Khushi? It's bahat ajib hai.

5- please keep writing

6- we won the best spirit reward for our competition:-)

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dianapadhi92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#733

that was a nice start. thanks for the pm dear. i will definitely read this story.

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: ..RareGem..
Intriguing chapter. Arnav and khushi knew each other before and now Arnav totally forgot about her. After reading the flashback, it seems like something drastic happened between them. Has Arnav done something wrong to Khushi? Your twists came as out of the blue!! But after this chapter story is getting more and more interesting. And there are many questions popping up in my mind. Will wait for you to tell us what you have in store for us.

Hey Syeda...am guessing you liked the twists...that are coming your way! 😉

And yaar, I was not sure how will Arnav's POV come out and be received...but your comment has relaxed me and also motivated me to go ahead...thank you!

Hope you are feeling better now!

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Shalini

@TwisterGirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: mojgan
Trs chre Shalini,
I am so surprised you were kind of unhappy of this update. I really liked it. It is always fascinating for me to read different points of view/ sides of the same story through the eyes of different characters. ASR is in trouble, hai na? He will fall in love. How smart I am hahahahahaha
1- I love Khushi as a mom.
2- I love that you made Appu and Nikhil being friend. It is so promising. More Arshi scene.
3- I am still defending my theory that Arshi's confrontation had been very serious and it had some consequences ;-)
4- hHw come ASR hasn't recogn Khushi? It's bahat ajib hai.
5- please keep writing
6- we won the best spirit reward for our competition:-)

Mojgan sweetheart...of course you are smart...no doubt about it! 😃 well even your thoughts about the story are smart 😉

As for ASR not recognizing Khushi, don't you think a businessman and CEO of an organization meets so many new and pretty faces...its no big deal to 'not remember' a few of them...specially given the length of time that Khushi actually met Arnav in Sheesh Mahal...close to 5 years back?

6. You won the best spirit reward?? Wow...congratulations dear. What was the competition for? Your students are so lucky to have you 😊

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Mojgan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#736

Mojgan sweetheart...of course you are smart...no doubt about it! 😃 well even your thoughts about the story are smart 😉

6. You won the best spirit reward?? Wow...congratulations dear. What was the competition for? Your students are so lucky to have you 😊

Ma tres chere amie,

1- I can't even keep my eyes open now but it is out of question to go to bed before reading your comment and answer it.

2- you are BELKOL sahih ho about our mighty ASR being too busy and overwhelmed not to remember a few of pretty faces BUT our beautiful Khushi is not a girl to forget. How I love her antics.

3- while writing number 2, I remembered one of my favorite scenes when arnav is walking towards the door and Khushi is busy finding her engagement ring and they collide and she says " haan haan, main janti hai aap Arnav Singh Raizadah ho" ( forgive my hindi and my mistakes). I love Khushi in that scene making ASR speechless ;-) God how I miss them together.

4- if you have Instagram, have a look at "king drew sobriety promoters". You can see our pictures and find out what was our project about :-) ( no space between the words of our Instagram user name. I had to write it as you see it above in order to be able to send my message. IF didn't let me to send my message.

5- I go to sleep now

6- please update. Waiting impatiently for an update full of Arshi scenes.

7- you are very precious! Just in case you didn't know it so far :-)

Edited by mojgan - 10 years ago

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: shalini.ranjan

PK dear...wooh...am so glad for your comment 'worth the wait'...Seriously!
Yes your hypothesis is correct...almost!😉
Where they met? Who is 'they' in question? If it is Arshi, then they met in Sheesh Mahal like in episode 1; if it is Shyam and Khushi-they met while Shyam saved Khushi from the goons...
Did I answer your questions?

🥳 YES! I have ben waiting to read a story along these lines! NOW I CANT WAIT,THANK YOU 👏

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Kiara

@Rocking_Angel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#738

thnxx fo da pm..
read ol prts in a go..
it wz juz a mndblvn ff
wud luv 2 read moh..
in luv wid ur writn
u r juz amagn
waitn fo nxt
updt soon
n yea mnd acptn mah buddyrqst 😊

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anjale

@anjale

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Posted: 10 years ago

#739

so anjalee's daughter and kushi son is of the same school interesting...now through tem atleast let her have a life which she longed for and s y he is behaving all cooly 2 her...so after tat incident he is sm were guilt r liked her?