The Alternate Universe- Retelling IPKKND (Thread 1 Complete) - Page 35

I'm totally loving this FF, especially the mystery elements! It leaves me very much excited to read more and i just can't wait for the next update! Awesome job done so far Shalini! 😊

very interesting...waiting to read more...⭐️

Now, that's quite a different storyline. I never imagined such scenerios. But, since, it's quite different, so quite refreshing as well. Hope it will not be a very dark one.

Wonderful update...

I think its anjali mathur...because ashu mentioned that her father is on duty...and Aman is a doctor...
And frankly i don't lke the idea of Khushi being married to Shyam..let alone she refused to give divorce to him..its absurd..😲and arnav..he is in love with La..otherwisw why would he surprise her with a gift..that too a flat where they can happily continue their live in relationship..😡.and i really hate those people who like to be in live in relationship without love or without marriage...sorry if u think its a strong emotion to use hate word..but what to say i really do feel that way...and Khushi's thinking about Shyam fiasco..i don't like it either...😡
But that's what a writer is about...u r definitely a accomplished writer..because u can evoke those emotions of love , hate, irritation, dislike, sympathy for each character... so well done and all d best...👏

and i would definitely like to get PMs..but plz show some mercy on us the Arshi lovers..who cant but only think about arshi being together...and u didn't even get them face to face with each other...this is so not fair...

Nice quite interesting

Anjali Kapoor.Why I guess like Pam addressed
Aman Mathur not 'your jijaji'
Accepting Khushi with Shyam is little bit hard
for Arshi fans,but the true colour of him already
Revealed and he was out from her life(at least
Temporarily)
But after reading the three chapters I am
really liked the story.looking forward for the
Arshi encounter
Thanks for the pm

seriously its new & I love it.. eagerly waiting for the next part.. whole concept was awesome..

Originally posted by: Jezmine

I'm totally loving this FF, especially the mystery elements! It leaves me very much excited to read more and i just can't wait for the next update! Awesome job done so far Shalini! 😊

Thank you dear...!

Originally posted by: Nilpori

I think its anjali mathur...because ashu mentioned that her father is on duty...and Aman is a doctor...
And frankly i don't lke the idea of Khushi being married to Shyam..let alone she refused to give divorce to him..its absurd..😲and arnav..he is in love with La..otherwisw why would he surprise her with a gift..that too a flat where they can happily continue their live in relationship..😡.and i really hate those people who like to be in live in relationship without love or without marriage...sorry if u think its a strong emotion to use hate word..but what to say i really do feel that way...and Khushi's thinking about Shyam fiasco..i don't like it either...😡
But that's what a writer is about...u r definitely a accomplished writer..because u can evoke those emotions of love , hate, irritation, dislike, sympathy for each character... so well done and all d best...👏

and i would definitely like to get PMs..but plz show some mercy on us the Arshi lovers..who cant but only think about arshi being together...and u didn't even get them face to face with each other...this is so not fair...

Well dear...you are perfectly right in quoting your feelings...I am on the same page as you!