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Posted: 10 years ago
Shyam n khushi have a son yuck but he is cute loves his mothr i think arnav maried lav pl dont mk it hapen waiting hw arshi meet
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Posted: 10 years ago
Not going to guess, you are the writer, & so far the future story seems great. Shyam seems more diabolical here & Nikhil is cute.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Even though it is hard to imagine that disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands ... I need to breathe...but I like your story. It seems very promising and I cann wait until they ( Arnav and Khushi) meet again :-)
I am so very grateful that you write English translation of the hindi sentences as well. It is very convenient for non-Indian readers like me . Thanks again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..!!!
shyam is jerk..!!
that footage scene changed khushi's life..!!!!
arnav is with lavanya..!!!!
why khushi didn't divorce him.. !!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pup03

acchi shuruvat hai.. chalo khushi ko pata toh chala ki shyam ka wait karna bewakoofi hai kyunki woh pyaar hi karta ussse ya unke ladke se.. she is thinking right.. she need to take her life in her hands and make herself strong physically as well as financially that the creep of her husband could never ever get near her son.. but khushi have done one mistake she should divorce that creep at the first available chance.. he is parasite if he sees her making good progress he will try to stick to her.. why is she worrying about her son he is already not ready to accept that creep as his father.. well so we met arnav singh raizada too.. Raizada saheb ki memory weak ho gayi hai kya unhe khushi ek sapna lag rahi hai.. jab ki unki ek galat harkat se kisi ki zindagi barbaad ho gayi hai.. now waiting to see mr raizada meeting his dream that is Khushi.. loved the update..

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Lovely comment Param! Thank you 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: addictedx53

Not going to guess, you are the writer, & so far the future story seems great. Shyam seems more diabolical here & Nikhil is cute.


addicted-jee...I don't mind guessing...lets see what you have in mind šŸ˜†
Thanks for your comment!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mojgan

Even though it is hard to imagine that disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands ... I need to breathe...but I like your story. It seems very promising and I cann wait until they ( Arnav and Khushi) meet again :-)

I am so very grateful that you write English translation of the hindi sentences as well. It is very convenient for non-Indian readers like me . Thanks again.


Thanks for pointing it out mojgan...I will definitely keep it in mind to write all the english translation going forward!
haha...loved your line though- "disgusting Shyam has touched Our beloved Khushi with his filthy hands"

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: khareshelley

nice update..!!!

shyam is jerk..!!
that footage scene changed khushi's life..!!!!
arnav is with lavanya..!!!!
why khushi didn't divorce him.. !!!


Hey Shelley...
I was just counting the number of exclamation marks you have put at the end of each sentence...lol. Jokes apart šŸ˜†
Thank you for your lovely comment!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Forgot to ask you : when will be your next update though ? :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
very good start first of all... well i think Shyam would have married Anjali for money , dont know if he had planned for kids too but then Khushi would turn up against her devil man Arnav and La in his office for trhe job...nok-jhoks takrar then pyar or would come to RM for La ... many possibilities including spotting Shyam there ... i would want it to happen after Arnav marries Khushi... then there would be some story ...that must be something to look forward too, if anything like this is in your heads ond minds... Thank you

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