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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Aww.. This update left me with a warm feeling inside my heart. Loved it so much.
Akash-Payal, Shyam-Anjali, Arnav-Khushi The way you developed these relationships is very well. May be we'll get to see Aman-Lavanya in the next update.
Aren't Arnav and Shyam the sweetest boyfriends!
Hope your exams went well.

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Sarita

@sarita_barun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Shyam isn't one to give up and he clearly don't want Anjali to give up either.
Shyam and Khushi are both fighters... from day 1.
Its been nice to see Lav back... I'm excited to see Aman.
Arnav is a sweet boyfriend.

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dsbj

@dsbj

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

wonderful. glad that lavanya is back . luvd the update. waiting for next already.

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sincereme

@sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Arnav is a sweetheart and he is the best boyfriend. . ❤️

Anjali has lost hope of walking ever again.. But I m glad that Shyam didn't agree to any of her argument. . Loved it..

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

This is the sweetest, loveliest, heart-breakingly beautiful story around, I swear. And Shyam and Anjali are so damned cute I could eat them up!!! I spent every scene of theirs "aww"ing away to glory.

Wonderful find, this story! :) Buddying you, need PMs!

P.S. I find your chapter titles very interesting.
P.P.S. My favourite scenes: Aakash's outburst, ArShi's trip to khula maidan, and the elevator showdown. Garima's death was... well. Devastating. The whole sequence was too painful. :/ I also remember guessing that Khushi would want to make jalebis after realising Arnav kept his mother alive by keeping her love of gardening alive. So I like how humane you've made the characters. Keep her making jalebis, yeah?

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

that was such a sweet chapter!!!

i really loved it...

Anjali isn't doing well but arnav is completely helping her.

Arnav was awesome at explaining and arranging things for lav!!

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

I love the friendship between la and khushi. Glad shes back.

The relationship between arnav and khushi is just so heartwarming, as is the relationship between shyam and anjali. akash is the only character i havent warmed up to in this story.

The dress scene was funny...but arnav being privy to it and the convo that followed from that was so funny! Props to you on that!! My fave scene in this chapter!

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Jayeeta Ghosh Dastidar

@jaymou

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

amazing update ... love your arnav .. love the way he said " i can do that much for the girl who mean a world to me " waiting for more

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Jyothi Rockzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Hey Archi,

what Can I say about this chapter... Its just simply superb. Arnav is truly the one to sweep any girl off her feet, Shyam no less..

Shyam is supporting Anjali at her lowest yet point and Arnav has not just addressed Khushi's fears and insecurities and helping her come over them but also helping her support her best friend.. How many men do that..?

This story is a great example to prove human determination and situations build up characters and traits of a person than mere genes. Shashi is very shallow oppurtunist and coward, Garima was true lover but a weak mother but Shyam and Khushi are yet strong and more principled than Shashi.

P.S : Do we get to know more of what is happeneing with Lavanay and Aman and Mr. Kashyap..?