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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .chandu.parsh.

😕😡kyunki next is the last part😆


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Posted: 10 years ago
Part - 22 Last part


Randhir was going ..

S- tumne aise kaise soch liya k aise hi chale jaoge,tumne to apna revenge le lia aur mere revenge ka kya ..

Randhir was numb

She continued while wipping her tears- yes mr.randhir singh shekhawat .. i want to take revenge from u .. i will snach everything from u .. ur freedom,ur privacy,ur lonliness,ur tears everything and i will snatch u too from this world
my dearest husband .. she said smiling with tears in her eyes ...

Randhir was too numb to react .. he was looking at her with blank expressions ..
she pinched him hardly

R- oouchhh

S- its not a dream my dearest mcp husband .. She pecked his cheeks and hugged him .. and everyone clapped for them .. he gave her bone crushing hug ...

S- arey chodo muche mardaloge kya i can't breath

R (with concern)- u okk sanyu? ?

M sorry

S- arey haan randhir m okk but everything will be ok on one condition

R-and whats that

S- back out nhi kar sakte tum

R- sanyu ,randhir singh shekhawat always wins .. i will not backout ...

S- to suno .. tumhein meri family se officially mera hath mangna hoga bhale hi hum married h par pehle tumne nhi kia to incomplete kam ab karo ... aur phir mujhe ache se like a gentelman propose karo

R- par tumhein propose to mein kar chuka hoon na

S- wo pehle ki baat h .. i want to live evey
movement again ... i want to fell in love again not with any mcp but with my randhir whose heart is innocent and full of love ..

R- rani sahiba ka hukum sar ankhon par .. Everyone laughed ..

S- aur randhir meri haan ya na tumhare propose karne k way par depend karegi .. samjhe??

R- okk my lady love ... she blushed

R- not again sanyu ... ye blush karne wali habbit abhi tak nhi gyi tumhari ..

She hit him playfully ... he went near her parents...

R- uncle & aunty can i get right to call u mom & dad ... can i get right to call ur
daughter my wife .. i promise i won't disappoint u ..

He touched their feets ..they put their hands on his head ...

S.d- sure beta ..she is already urs ..

He looked at sanyu and smriked proudly ..
sanyu showed him her tounge snd thought- abhi bhi bachi hi h ..

S.m- meri bachi ka khayal rakhna aur agar kuch gadbad ki na to dekh lena .. she
playfull caught his ear

R- m soorry mom .. i promise mein apni mistakes repeat nhi krunga.

She left his ear ..

S.d- anju ab humein chalna chahye ..

S.m- chaliye ..

S.m- by beta dhyan dakhna apna

They took blessing from them and everyone went out of collage ..

Sanyu was not talking to him .. she was ignoring him... randhir was talking to her but she was just making small replies .. they were in car going to home or maybe somewhere else..

R- sanyu kya hua h .. andar to maaf kardia tha,par ab kya hua h

S- kuch nhi .. she said with an annoyed face ..

R- kuch to lag raha h ..

S- randhir hum wrong ja rhe h ..

R- wrong nhi right

S- i know it this is the wrong way ..

R- u be quite for sometime plz .. he said in
a pleading way

So sanyu said ok


After some time they reached at the a resturant .. but was niether too big nor too small ... randhir holded her hand and took her inside the resturant .. there was a
small table on its corner along with two chairs ... there was a dim light at the whole place .. there was just one person standing near gate ..

M- hello sir, mam m the manager of this place

R- hlo .. thank u k apne itni kam time mein ye sab kuch set kardia warna immideately to koi place nhi milti

M- it is my work sir... ur dinner is on ur table sir .. and as per ur requirements no one will be present here .. have a good time

Sanyu & randhir smilled at him

S- ye sab kya h randhir ..

R- bas ab gussa hona band karo .. mujhe yaad h k mujhe tumhein propose karna h .. so just chill ..

S- randhir tum bhi na pagal ho aur ye sab ki kya zarurat thi .. ye sab tumne kab kia aur hum ghar pohnchne mein late ho jayenge to ehsas khana kaise khyega aur
use akele sone ki adat bhi nhi h to wo dar
jayega ..

R- clam down sanyu bas kro .. is sab ki
zrurat thi aur ehsas ko khana khila denge vardhan sir,maine unhein inform kar dia tha .. aur wo unke sath hi so jayega .. aur jab hum log bahar arhe the collage se ye sab maine tab kia .. bas ab que ans game khatam hogya??

S- okk okk take it easy dude ..

Randhir bend on his knees ...and started
saying ..

SANYU M REALLY SORRY FOR WHAT I
DID TO U .. BUT I WANT U TO FORGET PAST AND FORGIVE ME ... I PROMISE THIS TIME I WILL NOT GIVE U ANY PROBLEM ... I WANT TO FILL UR LIFE WITH HAPPINESS .. I WILL NOT LEAVE U ALONE IN DIFFICULT TIMES OF LIFE .. PLEASE TRUST ME ... WILL U LET ME HOLD UR HAND AGAIN ... WILL U BE MINE AGAIN ..

Sanyu gave her plam in his hand ... And he kissed it ...

Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tumpe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai


They hugged each other like it was their last hug ... but it was not their last one hug ... it was a hug after a long gap of three years .. but they would love to die in each other's arms..


Toote toh toote teri baahon mein aise Jaise shaakhon se patte be-haya
Bikhre tujhi se aur simte tujhi mein
Tu hi mera sab le gaya
Na fiqar,
na sharam,
na lihaaj,
ek baar aaya
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Phir zarre zarre mein deedar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai


They broke their hug and started having their dinner ..

R- sanyu

S- hmm ..

R- i love u

S- love u too randhir

R- sanyu this time i will not leave u alone .. i will be there for u to bear ur all the mood swings for complete 9 months .. and winked

S- randhir ... trying hard to control her blush ..

R-
abhi itna blush mat kro .. thoda bad k liye bhi bacha kar rakho

S- acha bas karo ab...


Tu hi meri awaaragi
Tu hi duaa har shaam ki
Tu khamakha,
tu laazmi
Tu hi razaa,
tu hi kami
Aur tu hi wo,
firaaq hai jisko Hai
silsilon ne mere pass laaya
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Hothon pe tere izhaar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumar aaya hai

After having dinner they talked for sometime ... they danced ... and went near car .. and sat in it ... randhir drived the car to his farm house .. the same house in which they lived 3 years ago ..
sanyu looked at him with a quesioning look ..

R- sanyu i want to replace all the bad memerioes with good memories ..

She hugged him .. They went in the house ..

R- sanyu can i make u mine??

S- m already urs and pecked his lips ..

And then then ... lights off ... i can't see anything 😆🤣

Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Aaj phir tum pe pyar aaya hai
Behad aur beshumaar aaya hai


I moning,sanyu woke 1st .. she kissed an his forehead ..

R- kya baat h .. kl to bda blush kar rhi
thi .. aur aj subh subh hi ... not bad .. so meri wife se daylight mein bhi control horha .. agar tum kho to baki ka mein proceed krun ... and winked ..

S- randhir ... chalo ghar chalo .. R- arey ye bhi to hamara ghar h na ..

S- randhir ... ehsas k bare mein bhool gye tum kya?? Wo humara beta h aur humein uske sath hone chahiye ..

R-arey mein apne bete ko kaise bhool sakta hoon .. ek bar ke liye tumhein bhool jayun par ehsas ko .. tch .. kabhi nhi ..

She hit him playfully ... they got ready
and went back to home ... they entered home hand-in-hand ... vardhan & ehsas both were playing at home .. vardhan smilled looking at their hands .. he got to know this earlier..

E- mumma ... papa ..

He hugged them .. And started their new life


**********


All problems between SanDhir were sorted ... they lived like a happy family with their son ehsas and their best friend their best teacher their mentor, vardhan sir ... he helped them in setting their life properly ...


AFTER 2 YEARS...



Randhir,ehsas & vardhan entered in hospital room where sanyu was laying on bed with a smile on her face and a crying sound was ringing in the whole room like a music ... rather it was like music for them ... sanyu picked the baby in her
lap and started shaking her legs to make the baby quite ...

S- randhir tumhari sun li god ne ... girl chahiye thi na tumhein .. ye dekho kitni pyari beti h ..

R- bilkul tumhare jaise h ... sweet si,innocent si .. aur tumhari tarh rotlu bhi .. kab se ro rhi h .. lao mujhe do mein chup karata hoon ..

He picked up her in his arms and tried making her quite ... but she was continously crying ...

Then vardhan came and said- Ye tum dono se chup nhi hogi lao mujhe do .. he
picked her up and sat on the stool ...and started making her quite ...

V- arey beta chup ho ja ... meri pyari princess ... RaNyu beta chup hoja SanDhir looked at vardhan

V- kya?? Ye meri beti jaisi h aur mein iska naam nhi rakh sakta??

S- arey hum to ye soch rhe the k apko bhi girls k names pata h aur wo bhi itna acha?? She said in a teasing way

V- wo neharika chahti thi k hum dono ki beti ho aur uske liye kaafi names soche the hume,toh ye naam yaad agya ... his eyes were moist ..

R-arey baton baton mein pata hi nhi chala k rehanica kab chup ho gyi ..

Then vardhan noticed that she is not in his arms .. instead she was on side of bed and 4 & half year ehsas was playing with her ...

E- meri choti si sweet sis sis RaNyu .. rehu i will be best brother of this world .. tum kitni sweet ho ... pata h mere sare frns kehte the k unke sath khelne k liye unke pas unke bro sis h ..ab mein bhi unhein batayunga k hum hospital se ranyu ko lekar aye h khelne k liye ...

Everyone laughed at his innocence ...

E- kyun has rhe ho mein baat kar raha hoon na .. don't disturb ...

R- arey theek h ... nhi karte disturb

V- sambhal k .. gira mat dena meri beti ko

E- wo meri sis h .. mein ise nhi girayunga ... ab mein bada ho gaya hoon ... big bro ban gya hoon rehu ka ... i will take care of her .. ap logon ko to chup bhi nhi karana ata .. mein iska dhyan rakhunga bas ajse ye mere sath hi rhegi... hum sath mein khayenge,sath mein padhenge,sath mein soyenge ...

S- nhi beta abi ye mumma k sarh soyegi aur abhi se nhi pad sakti aur kha bhi nhi sakti tumhare sath ...

E- mumma iske hands itne chote q h ...

S- beta abhi time h iske handa bde hone mein ...

Everyone kept talking for sometime and after some days sanyu was discharged ...

They lived together happily ... their family was completed ...


*******


[U]
The story started with revenge gave a happy ending ... guys always trust ur loved ones and if u have something wrong in ur mind then sort it out.with ur loved ones ... bcz life never gives a 2nd
chance and u may loose loved one forever ... [/I]


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I hope you all liked it,now time for likes and comments about this part and abput whole story too
Waiting for likes & comments 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww perfect ending!!!
I'm so gonna miss this...

The story started with revenge and ended in a most blissful way...

Kudos to you dear for penning it so brilliantly...

Chalo ab last love bhi update kardo*wink*

Love
Harshita
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Posted: 10 years ago
Perfect ending
Am gonna miss it
Nw update other stories also fast fast...:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww it's so awesome..
What i guessed was right
Sanyu snatched everything thing from him😳
Loved the lines

Wow 2 kids..ranyu n ehsaas :))
Ehsas is so cute 😳
Aww.. Happy ending..

Awsum story... Magnificent piece of work
Thx for the pms u sent me throughout
Keep writing more..

Love
Chandu
Edited by .chandu.parsh. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for pm
Beautiful ending👏
Miss this ss
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Posted: 10 years ago
aah what n update wonderful ending ll surely miss this story d story start with revenge end with a perfect note n for last part it was awesome. u really a wonderful writer n love d way sanyu accepted her MCP its just mindblowing n rd purpose sanyu with a bang happy ending thanks for d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres
awesome update...
Sanyu finally forgave rd...!
ehsas is too cute...
sweet name ranyu...
superb ending
will miss it!!
thnx for pm


with love
shreya
Edited by sweetshre - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome...perfect ending...loved it...
thanks a lot for the pm...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending
I'm gonna miss this story!

Loved the way Ehsaas and vardhan are possessive about the baby!


Thanks for the pm

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