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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lechu10

awesome story...u r an awesome writer..plz plm also...

Thank u soo much dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nazzy13

Its so so so awesome ff i m just waiting for ur next update PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON I CANT WAIT TO SEE WT HAPPENS NEXT

N rd ka reaction dekh k tho bas maza aa jayega

thanx a lot dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part -34

Everyone was looking at him for his response but all he did was looking at sanyu and saying

Rd-thanx

And everyone loose their enthusiasm

Parth-u are such a spoil sport rd

Harsh-lets eat dinner

But sanyu was really happy for that one little word from him and she was smiling from ear to ear

Arpita and sanyu go to the kitchen with kaka

Arpita-I m sorry sanyu

Sanyu[confused]-huh?

Arpita-for bhai's behaviour...tumne itna kuch kiya aur unhone thoda sa bhi appreciate nahi kiya

Sanyu-its ok arpita...I know unke muh se appreciation sunna bohot mushkil hai and moreover he liked

His surprise[she claps her hand and smiles]

Arpita-how can u say that

Sanyu-arrey he said thanx na

Arpita smiles at the simplicity of the girl standing next to her who was all happy and merry for receiving just a "thanx"for the hardwork she did for a week

Arpita-u know sanyu this is bhai's first b'day he is celebrating since that woman left,thanx to u

[Sanyu smiles ]bhai's behaviour is changing a lot but u know he has made a shell around himself

Which noone can cross...he is always afraid of loosing people even before he allows them to know

Him...for him it has always been this place near and dear to him and that backyard is his solace

Sanyu-but how can he loose people if he don't allow them to know him better

Arpita-that woman has ruined my brother's life sanyu..i hate that women as much as I love bhai

Pls sanyu never leave bhai alone

Sanyu looks at arpita who was looking at her expectantly then she nods in a yes

And arpita hugs her...thank u soo much sanyu,sanyu smiles

They take the dishes to the dining table and everyone was eating in silence when rd asks

Rd-arpi...u really think that I m the best brother

Arpita-ofcourse bhai...u are the bestest brother in the world

Parth-who isliye ki tumhara koi aur bhai nahi hai

Arpita-oh pls agar hota bhi to bhai will always be my bestest bro

Rd-tu kya bol raha hai...tune bhi to bada chada ke likha hua hai..bestest friend

Parth-arrey who to likhna padta hai formality ke liya...warna tujhe lagta hai mein aisa

Kuch sapne mein bhi likhoonga

Rd-chal chal feku chup kar

Sanyu was really expecting him to ask her something but he didn't even turn to her side

Their dinner was done and since arpi was all tired everyone leaves and rd sits near his mini bar

Kaka-beta aap soo nahi rahe

Rd-nahi kaka aap jaeye mein thodi der baad so jaonga[looking at sanyu]its for everyone

Hearing that sanyu leaves to her wardrobe

Here rd starts taking sips of his glass of scotch recalling the events of the day and sanyu's stupidity

But soon that woman's face comes in front of him and her harsh words starts ringing in his ears

He stars drinking from the bottle and tears start falling from his blood shot red eyes

When he was done with the first bottle he takes the second bottle and goes to the backyard

Here sanyukta wasn't able to sleep thinking abt what arpita told her and rd's encounter

With her mother...she was twisting and turning on her bed and finally decides to take a peek

To know if rd was asleep but when she looks through her wardrobe door his bed was empty

And after a small debate with herself she decides to look for him outside but to her surprise

He was not there...but unlike last time she know where he would be so she goes to the garden

The wind was unusually cold and she shivers when it touches her

Sanyu-kaha gaya yeh akdu

She looks for him near the artificial pond where she found him last time but he wasn't there

And since the garden was all surrounded with somewhat similar trees she wasn't able

To make out her path but finally she reaches near some big shrubs between which there was a small

Gap where a white bench was placed and on that bench rd was sitting with his bottle right next to him

Sanyu-sir?

Rd turns to look at her and then turns back but he takes his bottle from the bench and taps the place

Right next to him and sanyukta goes and sits next to him,she looks at him and what she saw was something she never wanted on this persons face-tears

Rd-u understood now...noone can ever make me happy...not even u sanyukta

Hearing her name from his mouth felt special for her but at the same time the voice was

Soo painful

Rd-I m struck in darkness which is now my life and noone can drag me away from it...i m a looser

I m not the best son,not a best brother,not a best friend and not at all a best boss[he was abt

To take a sip from his bottle when sanyu stops him

Sanyu-who said that u are not a best son...u should look at harsh uncle's face when his friends

Talk abt ur work,when they praise u who don't even know that u are his son

U should see how proud he is abt u...how hard he wishes to be called ur father

And look at arpita who always follows u...u are her support..u are her everything

She never gets tired of talking abt u...what she always wishes for is ur happiness becoz

She know u have lived ur life for her and not for urself...u are her elder brother whom

She loves and respects and parth[she chuckles]what should I say abt him...u should

Know him better becoz u and arpita are his only family and before that u were his

Only family...u were his guide and friend and that's the reason everyone wants u

To be happy.You are someone who has always been giving people happiness and u

Call urself a looser...and that wall...its not just a wall sir...its their way to

Thank u for what u did

Rd-really?

Sanyu-yes sir and...

Rd[cutting her off]-then what abt u...what did I gave u that u are thanking me

Now sanyu was silent and rd was looking at her intensly waiting for her reply

Rd-you don't have anything to thank me abt?then why was I there sanyukta

Sanyu-no...u are the reason that I m here today

Rd-huh?

Sanyu-at first my desire was to become a director but I never had someone who could

Boost me up but still I took a chance and decided to follow it but my dad wanted me to do

Engineering so I did that but I never felt distracted from my dream because it was

Not just to be a director but something else which I realized now

Rd-whats that?

Sanyu lowers her gaze and says something which he wasn't able to hear so he comes near her

Rd-say it again

Sanyu looks up and now their faces were inches apart

Rd-I didn't hear sanyukta

Sanyu-I wanted to meet u too

Rd-well it looks like the reason is not enough for me to accept ur thanx so...I m going to do

Something which is worth it

Sanyu looks at him confused and rd brings his one hand near her cheeks and careses it and sanyu's

Eyes go wide but before she could comprehend his lips were on hers...her eyes were wide open

But rd slowly starts moving his lips and sanyu closes her eyes and gives in...rd brings his next hand

Behind her neck and she brings both her hands on his cheeks and wipes off the tears,both of their minds

Were exploding but their hearts were calm...their lips were moving in sync...rd bites her bottom

Lip gently begging for an entrance and she obliges...now their tongues were fighting for dominance

But rd being rd wins,sanyu could taste the alcohol in his mouth and she felt dizzy for some reason..her mind was all dizzy when the wind blows again she shivers and rd his hand which was resting on her cheeks and wraps it around her petite frame and continuous to kiss her...sanyu can't say what she was feeling..what this person was doing to her and why and she know that she will never get this answer ever...soon both of them were out of breath and they bring their foreheads together

Rd[breathless]-i...th...think this...will be...en...ough

Sanyu was still clueless of what happened now

Rd takes his bottle and starts walking towards the kitchen door...and sanyu was sitting there trying to catch her breath...her eyes still closed...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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hahahhah look at me.. am stalking you my friend😆😆😆😆😆 have to do this for this story..

am doing dance.. yeh tho happy wala dance... Oye balle balle..

now coming to the part.. yaara take a hug.. its really amazing... the way she has boosted him is commendable..

they kissed... omg am blushing.. what happened.. they both kissed.. really can't believe it.

oye now don't make us wait for more time & pls give the next update soon...



Edited by amulbaby06 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update loved it sanyu is really sweet she cares for rd a lot she was so worried rd so vulnerable bcz of his mom he's so arrogant and rude bt from inside he's broken omg sandhir kiss that was mind blowing excited for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow so interesting plz cont asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update!!
Loved rd's emotion
Their first kiss
Waiting for the next update!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome ty so much for updating
Actually i luv all our 3 ffs seriously dey r mindblowing
I must say u r a grt writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME...FINALLY THEIR KISS...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
plz update next chapter as soon as possible

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