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Posted: 10 years ago
Glad that lavanya's stable but that hirl seriously needs help!
Loved the update! I hope arnav can talk to khushi and make her understand
Cant wait to read more
Aman and anita are so cute!

Edited by __blossom__ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another brilliant chapter...finally Dr. Raizada talk instead of keeping his emotions to himself. I am again feeling bad and sad for Arnav. Thank god that Manya realizes her mistake and now she must talk to Khushi and her parents.
I love Anita and Aman and their conversation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Jenny,
that was a great update... loved it so much..
Oh... God... Manya has no clue of half the damage she did by barging into Khushi's house and slashing her and Arnav's character in front of her parents... Her sorry to Arnav will not do anything to the hurt and pain Khushi is going through... It felt as if Manya was laying all her guilt of not being there for her sick sister onto Arnav and Khushi...She has guts to justify her actions...
But right now...I feel the most for Arnav and Khushi.. Arnav is facing storm after storm in his life ever since Aarav's death... Khushi was the only solace in his life and he is on the verge of losing her too...
I am sure something might have really broken bad inside Khushi seeing the accusation and lack of trust in her parents eyes.. I only hope she doesn't blame herself or Arnav to that matter for Lavanaya's sick cowardice step.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK007




Remember Mr. Foster and Ms. Craven? And little Branny? :) A new, improved, edited version of A Late Spring coming soon in blog...:)Thanks Tania for this awesome banner. I told you, I'll find a way to use it :D

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Jenny.


So excited with this news!!
This is a beautiful story and am so looking forward to reading it again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I must admit that it would have been difficult to read the later half of the chapter had it not been for the balance provided by the first half. Anita's bubbly demeanor, the references to Alice in Wonderland and the quote from Anita's friend Aarti all made me grin wide.


Which brings me to the part that was responsible for a huge pit in my stomach. Khushi's current state and the dejection that Manya's visit has brought upon her family truly requires some respite. But how will that happen? Things are too tangled up right now, for her to see a silver lining. But kudos to her for making that call.

In this however, I can be mildly at ease to know yet another facet of Manya's character. She is a bitter sister (and rightfully so), but is levelheaded as well. And in that I can hope her removal from the list of people against Arnav...if only eventually.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it a lot
hope khushi again understand arnav this time also as always she does
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Posted: 10 years ago
Applaud you for writing such emotionally heavy and dark chapters for the current track.
However, I feel there is a breath of light streaking into the lives of these characters.

Anita - Go girl 👍🏼
Aman - Pay attention!!

Astha - I am appreciating her at the moment. She is with and for Arnav, but stays cordial to Manya and has a prayer for her sister who has been a part of her family.

Manya - Realizes her folly in visiting Khushi, however damage is done, is less hostile to Arnav, listens to what he has to say, further realization of her assumption re Khushi, is aware of La's inability to let go, has guilty feelings about not being there for her sister and the icing is when she gets a call from Khushi and her telling Arnav about her visit to Khushi and seeing Arnav's wrath. This should give her some inkling about Arnav's stand.

Arnav - The troubles still keep piling up for him and once again he feels letting down the people that matter to him. His thoughts to hold off from calling Khushi about La's action until later and then finding out that she already knows thanks to Manya has him torn further. His text to Khushi is a cry of his heart. 😭

Khushi - She knew that loving and being with Arnav was not going to be easy and was prepared for the rough ride, but what La has done is a big blow to her. Even though she doesn't hold herself responsible for La's act she is affected because it involves Arnav.

The worst part of this mess is that except of La everyone else will bear a responsibility to some degree.

Since "yesterday" cannot be changed I am hopeful that Arnav will take the steps with the notion of "no more secrets and lies" because La will not.

La may tell Khushi to leave Arnav to give her a chance, but she is forgetting that she can never "forcefully own what the other lacks".

Let's see what the next chapter brings.


Edited by mpat - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
m so much busy...that's why late comment sorry...
awesome part...
astha came to console arnav...
the truth out before her...
shattered and shocked...
anita and aman's relation progressing...
arnav went hospital...
manya the bitch now sorry...
its foul...
khushi still asked about lavanya's health ...
arnav now got the hint of kushi's humiliation...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mpat

Applaud you for writing such emotionally heavy and dark chapters for the current track.

However, I feel there is a breath of light streaking into the lives of these characters.

Anita - Go girl 👍🏼
Aman - Pay attention!!

Astha - I am appreciating her at the moment. She is with and for Arnav, but stays cordial to Manya and has a prayer for her sister who has been a part of her family.

Manya - Realizes her folly in visiting Khushi, however damage is done, is less hostile to Arnav, listens to what he has to say, further realization of her assumption re Khushi, is aware of La's inability to let go, has guilty feelings about not being there for her sister and the icing is when she gets a call from Khushi and her telling Arnav about her visit to Khushi and seeing Arnav's wrath. This should give her some inkling about Arnav's stand.

Arnav - The troubles still keep piling up for him and once again he feels letting down the people that matter to him. His thoughts to hold off from calling Khushi about La's action until later and then finding out that she already knows thanks to Manya has him torn further. His text to Khushi is a cry of his heart. 😭

Khushi - She knew that loving and being with Arnav was not going to be easy and was prepared for the rough ride, but what La has done is a big blow to her. Even though she doesn't hold herself responsible for La's act she is affected because it involves Arnav.

The worst part of this mess is that except of La everyone else will bear a responsibility to some degree.

Since "yesterday" cannot be changed I am hopeful that Arnav will take the steps with the notion of "no more secrets and lies" because La will not.

La may tell Khushi to leave Arnav to give her a chance, but she is forgetting that she can never "forcefully own what the other lacks".

Let's see what the next chapter brings.



Loved your comments a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome chap again I wanted it to never end but nice part of writing

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