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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: moonlight3094

awesome start.
continue soon


Thank u
vl update asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: -Tintin-

amazing yaar.. Conti soon..

Thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
is avatar me sirf randhir ko dekha tha...
sanyu ko aise dekhke excited ho gayi mai is ff ke liye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: anuja78

is avatar me sirf randhir ko dekha tha...
sanyu ko aise dekhke excited ho gayi mai is ff ke liye

Thank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Part - 1


Randhir stood still on his place,cursing himself for the day,he met her first and then she became like this,just because of him...

It was all his fault,he did wrong to her.. She wasn't ready for this marriage,but all because of him she got married and became like this


FLASHBACK


"Mom,i don't want to get married so soon"- Randhir said irritatingly

"Randhir,bacha at least meet that girl,i bet after meeting her,you would be the one who will say MAA,PLEASE JALDI KARWADO NA SHADI"- Renuka said teasing her son

"Mom please you know na, i am not intrested in this marriage stuff"- Randhir pleaded

"Randhir,get ready fast,we don't have much time"- Harsh ordered entering in room

"Ji papa,mein toh bas mom se puchne aya tha k t-shirt pehnu ya shirt"- Randhir crossed his fingers as he told a lie

"Go and get ready faster"- Harsh ordered

"Ab toh ready hona hi padega,chal beta randhir, ready hoja baki yes ya no toh mere hath mein hai"- Randhir smirked at his thought


*Aggarwal mansion*


"Anju, mehmano k liye chai toh lekar aao"- Kishore agarwal shouted as he made his guests sit in living room

"ye lijiye,sanyu ne khud apne hathon se banayi hai,bohat achi banati hai"- Anju said as a servant served them the tea

"Mujhe to sanyu usi din se pasand hai jis din maine use first day dekha tha,itne ache sanskar diye hai apne apni beti ko,hum toh bas jaldi se sanyukta ko apne ghar ki beti banana chahte hai,bas bache haan boldein"- Renuka said imagining sanyukta as her daughter-in-law

"Ji wo bas aati hi hogi,tayar hone gayi hai abhi"- Anju said

"Anju,tell her to come fast"- Kishore said

"Ji mein abhi bulati hoon use"- Anju said ,she was about to leave when renuka intrupted

"Kyun na Randhir use bulane chala jaye,isse dono bache aapas mein kuch baat bhi kar lenge"- Renuka said

"Agar apko koi problem na ho toh"- Harsh added

Randhir smirked thinking some thing

"Koi baat nahi,anju randhir ko le jao sanyu k pass"- Kishore said hesitatingly

"Ji...aao randhir beta"- Anju said

Anju took randhir to sanyukta's room

"Sanyu beta,tyar ho gayi kya??"- Anju asked knocking the door

"Ji maa,darwaza khula hai aa jao"- Sanyukta replied

"Beta tum baat karlo usse,mein thodi der mein aati hoon"- Anju excused herself and went to living area

Randhir opened the door,and closed at behind .. Sanyukta was standing in balcony thinking some thing

"Look,miss i don't want to get married"- Randhir said rudely

"What .. Yipee"- Sanyukta jumped in joy

"To matlab mujhe kuch bhi sochne ki zarurat nahi hai,jisse tum mujhe reject kardo"- Sanyukta asked happily

The movement randhir looked at her face, his heart skipped at beat .. he was mesmrised by her beauty.. He was amused by her actions

"What do you mean"- Randhir asked confusingly

"Matlab ki,aaj tak jitne bhi ladke mujhe dekhne aaye,unhein maine reject kardia kuch na kuch excuse bana kar,and i was thinking k tumhein toh reject kar nahi sakti mein,kuch aisa karun jisse tum mujhe reject kardo"- Sanyukta said making randhir giggle at her words

"Acha,kis type k excuses mujhe bhi batao"- Randhir asked

"Jaise, pehle wale k bare mein bola k he isn't mujhe educated,2nd wala over cofident,3rd one rude,4th wala over friendly,5th wala buisness man,6th wala more tall,7th wale ki hieght kam thi,8th wale ki nose badi thi,9th wala fat tha, aur now you are 10th,jis mein ye sab dis qualities nahi hai,i read alot about you and your modeling .. Par koi fault nahi mila"- Sanyukta completed counting on her fingers

Randhir laughed loudly

"Matlab tumne especially mere bare mein read kiya ,mujh mein koi fault nikalne k liye,oh god seriously tumne kaisi kaisi bachon wali chezein kari hai"- Randhir said laughing keeping his hand on his stomach

"Waise tum shadi kyun nahi karna chahti, i mean koi valid reason hoga"- Randhir asked seriously

"Achtually,i want to become a fashion photographer ,aur mere parents mujhe allow nahi kar rahe aur meri shadi karwana chahte hai"- Sanyukta said making a sad face

"Agar aise karogi toh pemission dedenge"- Randhir asked

"Arey,i have a plan,abhi behave normal,and we will show k we liked each other alot, phir 2-3 din baad shadi k liye mana kardena, i will show k i am a heart broken bechari, will do some melow drama aur mera mind divert karna k liye mere parents mujhe permission dedenge and mera mission complete,phir i will go to mumbai and fulfill my dream"- Sanyukta explained him whole plan

"Great planning miss. Aggarwal"- Randhir said clapping

"Thank you"- Sanyukta said raising her imaginary coller

"Acha toh mein mana kar donga,just take my number and give me yours,we can become friends,right??"- Randhir asked

"Yeah sure,we can be friends,aur waise bhi ho sakta hai k mumbai mein mujhe tumhari help ki zarurat pade, ya phir yahi par plan mein kuch changes karne pade"- Sanyukta said

they exchanged their numbers .. Sanyukta clicked his picture in her camera

"Picture kisliye click ki"- Randhir asked

"Wo kya hai na,when ever i meets some one really intresting, then apne camera mein capture kar leti hoon use"- Sanyukta siad

"Then show me your skills,tabhi bata payunga na k kitni progress karogi"- Randhir went near her

She was showing him his picture,just then Anju and Renuka entered and smiled at them

"Lets go beta,sab ke sath bethte hai"- Renuka said

"Yes mom,lets go"- Randhir went downstairs with his mother

"Beta kaisa laga randhir tumhein"- Anju asked sanyukta

"Acha hai maa,i know ap usi ko choose karoge mere liye jo best hoga"- Sanyukta said blushing fakely

"Mein bohat khush hoon tere liye beta,bohat acha hai randhir"- Anju said smilling

"Maa,aap chalo mein aati hoon"- Sanyukt said smilling

Her mother went outside .. Sanyukta texted randhir

'Abhi naa mat bolna,warna papa ko doubt ho jayega,just say k tumhein sochne k liye time chahiye thoda da'

'Okk'- Randhir replied

Sanyukta went downstairs,smilling at her luck that she met randhir

Downstairs,sanyukta took blessings from everyone,they talked for sometime and Randhir did as she told him to do.. After that shekhawats went to their home


*At night*

Phone convo-

R- Hello miss photographer

S- Hello mr. Model,all set to imply plan??

R- Itni excited ho rahi ho,rejection sunne k liye

S- Whatever,mein khush ho rahi hoon, apne dream k liye .. Waise tum kya reason doge mujhe reject karne k liye

R- Yahi k tum bohat clingy aur chipkoo ho

Sanyukta could hear randhir's.giggles

S- Excuse me mr. I am not clingy and chipkoo, tum aise kaise bol sakte ho mere bare mein

R- Arey,to aur kya tumhari tareef karke reject karun

S- Haan ye bhi hai,kuch bhi bol dena

Just then anju entered in sanyukta's room ..

"Randhir,i will call you later"- Sanyukta said disconnecting the call

"Arey beta call kyun disconnect kardi,mein toh bas milk dene ayi thi tujhe, disturb nhi karna chahti thi"- Anju said teasingly and went out


*After two days*


"Sanyu,beta mein bohat khush hoon, tu man gayi hamari baat"- Kishore said to sanyukta

"Papa,mujhe pata samajh agaya tha k apa jo bhi karoge mere liye,wo mere liye sahi hoga"- Sanyukta said doing some acting

"Mr. Shekhawat ki call hai"- Kishore said looking at phone

"I hope unka answer haan hi ho"- Sanyukta said showing a fake bright smile and went to her room

She was waiting for a news,which will be bad as per her family and good for her .. She was smilling, she was trying to control her smile thinking that after few minutes,she have to drama,for that she have to control her smile

After few minutes, anju and kishore entered

"Maa,papa haan bola hai na unhone"- Sanyukta asked smilling wanting to her a no

"Haan meri bachi,unhone haan bola hai"- Anju said and hugged her

Sanyukta felt as earth near her feet sliped .. She expected a no,but this yes is gonna change her whole life

"You have to pay for this mr. Shekhawat"- Sanyukta thought

She was trying hard to smile in front of her parents,but tears made their way through her eyes

"Kya huya sanyu beta,abhi toh tu itni khush thi,ab ro kyun rahi hai"- Anju asked worridely

"Sab kuch theek hai na beta"- Kishore asked

"Wo papa,apse door jana padega na,isliye rona agya"- Sanyukta said wipping her tears



"Beta randhir tujhe hamesha khush rakhega"- Anju said

After talking for sometime,anju and kishore went outside her room

Sanyukta dailed randhir's number ..

"Samjhte kya ho tum apne aap ko,tumne aj mere sath theek nahi kiya"- Sanyukta shouted over phone

"Sanyukta please clam down"- Randhir pleaded

"Tumne soch bhi kiase liye,k i will marry you, no ways,i won't marry you"- Sanyukta shouted

"Sanyukta please aisa kuch mat karna jisse hamare parents ki izzat aur khushian mitti mein mil jayein"- Randhir said and disconnected the call


Flash back ends



Randhir wipped his tears ,changed his clothes and looked at sleeping sanyukta

"I didn't mean to hurt you sanyukta"- Randhir said thinking that sanyukta is sleeping

"You already did randhir,now shut your mouth and don't disturb me,kamse kam shanti se sone do mujhe"- Sanyukta said covering her face with blanket

Randhir went near other side of bed and was about to lay there

"This isn't your bed,tumhara bed wo hai aaj se"- Sanyukta said signalling towards coutch

Randhir went towards the coutch and laid there

"Sanyukta,you were not like this,tum aise achi nahi lagti,tumhare face par sirf smile suit karti hai,hatered nahi"- Randhir thought and slept after sometime



So the first part ends her
I am so happy with the response on prologue itself
I hope you all liked first part too

Do press like & leave your reviews below 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Awesome post :) waiting for next part:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
It's really a healthy story.
For the next part Pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
aww poor randhir...
hope thr wil b sum reason cuz of whch randhir must hav got ready for marriage...
update soon waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Awsme update loved it

Sanyu was so lively n fun loving
Rd didn't want to marry
Bt sanyu ko dkhte hi clean bold ho gya
He's a model n sanyu wants to be a photographer


Keys solid plan bnaya tha
Sanyu was so hppy

Bt I wonder if rd was okay with the plan then why he said yes for marriage


Rd blaming himself for sanyu behaviour

Cnt wait for next
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Its so sad to see rd like this...
Still a mystery as to y he suddenly said yes...

Sum cute moments in fb...
I'm so loving it...
Thnx for pm...

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