My imperfect Wedding-A dark ss(Part 5 Updated)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone, I am back with another story ...
So for now,read its prologue & do give feedbacks ..

Prologue



Randhir entered in his room after filling pockets of his cousin sisters and other relatives .. His room was decorated for his and his wife sanyukta's first night together ..

He entered the room and closed it behind .. He saw his wife standing near window of his room dressed up just like a doll .. wearing red saree heavy jwellry and some amount of makeup which was shinning due to moonlight felling on her face ..

He went near her and turned her face towards him holding her shoulders .. and the nxt movement ..

SLAAPPP ...

The sound of slap was echoing in the silent room ..

It was sanyukta, which slapped randhir ...

"Don't you dare touch me mr. shekhawat ... ye jo shadi hum dono ki huyi hai na,its all because of your fault aur you vl have to face its concequences"- Sanyukta said angrily

"But sanyukta, we are husband and wife .. aur pure rasomon .. "- Randhir was cut of by sanyukta

"Yes,we are husband and wife, par sirf dunia k sahmne ... tumne mujhe jo is zabardasti ki shadi mein bandha hai na,uski punishment k liye ready ho jao,because i will make your life hell shekhawat"- Sanyukta said showing him her index finger.




Banner credits- Chandu


So guys,kaisa laga prologue ...
I know after dat slap,u were expexting k wo slap randhir ne sanyukta ko mara hai ..
but common yaar,sari stories me sanyukta becomes abla nari & randhir becomes villan ..
Even i have written this kind of story .. but then i though k kuch different try karna chahiye yaar ..
So this story vl b dark from sanyukta's side šŸ˜‰

So i hope you all liked it ..
If you find my idea different and intresting,toh don't feel shy .. bata do šŸ˜†
All typ of comments are welcomed
& Silent readers at least press like .. koi nhi stalk karne wala k tumne kaunse story par like press kia hai ..


For pms,buddy me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INDEX


Part - 1

Peep in to chapter 2

Part - 2

Part - 3

Part - 4

Part - 5
Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wat a scary prologue man...lady dabbang...
Woah! Excited to read it
Thanks for the pm
Pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prolongue
reverse revenge very diff concept
thanx for pm
continue soon :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg now this is really different
I really expected slap from rd

I luved it
This is going intrstng

Update soon
Wtng

Luv u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well it sounds interesting...
Sanyu gave a zor ka jhattka..
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue!!
sanyu slapped rd!!! omg
do continue
thnx for pm
i'l b w8ing!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is a bang on story!
Even I m tired to see sanyukta as abla nari in the dark ffs!!
Well this gonna be damn interesting!!
Looking forward to it!
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome yaar!
Trust me yeh pehli story hAi jisme Sanyu ne Rd ko SR ke time thapad mara and she said I WILL MAKE YOUR LIFE HELL!

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey.. awesome prologue...
Dark sanyu... m already loving this ff.
U r so talented dear ... I have read most of ur works and they are all amazing..

Update soon.. šŸ˜›

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