|| FLAMES - The Fire Within || - A TR SS * On Hold * - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Thank u so much everyone for your likes and comments. This is my First story on IF and the love showed to me is overwhelming. It means a lot guys.
Here u go with the update.
CHAPTER 2

Next day Taani and her team reached Goa. As soon as Taani stepped into the premises of indiafest, Rey felt ticklish, the feeling which he usually got around Taani. He felt confused about his feelings. But on the other hand, Taani and her friends were feeling exhilarated. They were going to dance publicly again after 4 long years. Taani was feeling simply wonderful and she having fun with all her best friends, keeping her thoughts about Rey aside for a while. However she did feel alone when all her friends were busy acting mushy -mushy with their partners.
( note :- guys here rohan -shanaya, karan -shilpa, shivam -kria, and mohit -sonal are couples. )
When everyone saw that Team FLAMES had come to Indiafest, the whole crowd went mad and started rushing towards the entrance so that they can get a glimpse of country 's most amazing dancing team. Team D3 also heard about their arrival but nobody except Swayam knew who Team Flames actually were. And he did not say a word because he was confused as what made them take the decision about coming back to limelight suddenly. He then remembered about Taani 's promise ( will be revealed later) and realized that it was already time and she had kept her promise perfectly well.
Team Flames went to the accommodation allotted to them. They freshened up and went to examine the location of the competition. They were just strolling around when Rohan and Karan noticed that Taani was lost somewhere.
Rohan : hey Karan, tujhe nahi lagta hum sab suddenly bohot old hogaye hai??
Karan : exactly ... main bhi kabka ye hi soch raha tha. Kyunki main kisi chiz ko kal se dhundh raha hu aur woh mujhe ab tak nahi mili hai.
Shilpa : aisa kya dhundh rahe ho tum Karan jo tumhe do din se nahi mil rahi hai.
( Mohit and Shivam understood what they were trying to do and so they also joined them.but Taani was still lost in her own world)
Mohit : arre Shilpa tum or aisa puch rahi ho... tumhe to ab tak pata chal jana chahiye tha.
Kria : tum log kya bol rahe ho clearly bolo. Hamari samaj me kuch nahi aa raha hai.
Shivam: offo Kri... hum to hamari bff Taani ko dhundh rahe hai.
Sonal : par wo to hamare samne hi hai.
Mohit : kaha hai wo... jara game bhi to dikhao jaaneman(wink).
( hearing this Sonal blushed and everybody else hit their forehead)
Rohan : arre Sonal ... yeh hamari Taani nahi ho sakti ... hamari Taani to hamesha bak bak karti rahti this.
Karan : woh to hamesha muskurati rahti thi aur aas pass khushiya baat ti rahti thi.
Shivam : wo kabhi chup nahi rahti thi aur hamesha energy se bhari hui rahti thi.
Mohit : aur jab baat dance ki aaye to hamesha ham sab se aage rahti thi.
( the girls realized what the boys were trying to do and so they also joined them.)
Sonal : exactly guys. aur to aur wo kabhi kisi ke liye apne aap ko chup nahi rakhti thi.
( Taani hears all this and realizes that she is ignoring her friends, her bff s for some people)
Taani : woh sorry guys mai just soch rahi thi ke mai gang ko kese face karungi.
Kria : Taani I know tum Rey se upset ho par jis Rey ko mai janti hu woh Rey kabhi apni marzi se tumhe jhooth nahi bolega. Aur isliye sab ke mana karne ke baad bhi unhone tumhe call karke sab sach bata diya.
Shanaya : sun liya Taani ... chal ab apna ye sad face chod de and hamari woh purani wali smiley - smiley Taani ban ja aur woh bhi fatafat.
Taani : tadaa ... and here is your Taani back guys... group hug everyone ...
( they all hug each other and move back to their rooms. )

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
res /unres
Still TaaRey not met each other :'(
Rey can feel TAANI ah that's love
TAANI gang awesome they r fun and loving also
What promise and y she made
Hmmm eagerly waiting for D3 and flames meeting
Of course ReYam reaction. And gang too
Lovely one
Thanks for pm
Update soon :)
Edited by Jasmine_ash - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
amazing chapter
i loved the flames conversation

i want to know the secret and

how rey will react when he comes to

know that taani knows to dance

tnks for the pm

update soon and

do pm me

love AngelMaria
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
wow awsm chapters
lovely concept
continue soon
very excited to read on
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
i loved your story
plz cont soon
loved it so much
plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Read it in one go

N it was awsme


Luved it

Update soon
Wtng


Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
dis is sumthng new... welcum to.india-forum. wow taani is too dncr... its really worth to read story forward... continuee soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Really cute story
Taani is irritated now
And she is here in Goa
I so miss our college wale Taarey
Taani ki bhi gang
And this past promise seems interesting
Please do update soon
And pm me

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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Amazing stry wanting
For team flames dance
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Great start!
Awesome!
Soon Rey and taani may meet...😃
Please update soon!
Please PM me..

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