Smitar's OS Series: OS 9: The Diabetic and the Halwai (Part 12-Pg 32) - Page 9

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

Smita, congratulations on the new thread!

Your smirky Arnav and cutely irate Khushi continue to captivate :)

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Aisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congratz on new thread

Awesome update

loved it

pls pm me when u update

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sincereme

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update. .

Poor khushi. . couldn't get her revenge.. 😉.. And Arnav's smirk is adding to her fury..

Loved the last scene.. Now that Arnav has her in his arms, he is not letting her go that easily. .

P.S. Thank you Rashmi for taking your time and posting these Awesome stories.. 🤗..

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arshi67

Smita, congratulations on the new thread!
Your smirky Arnav and cutely irate Khushi continue to captivate :)

Ruchii... That was one out of the world smoochie...😉 ☺️

* Thud *

😆

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sarozz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank u rashmi!! Wonderful hilarious update...so everyone in the Raizada family suspects hehe

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Arshi67

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rulama

Ruchii... That was one out of the world smoochie...😉 ☺️
* Thud *

😆

A thud factor is much deserved for all the drooling you've brought to us 🤗

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Snell

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Posted: 10 years ago

Yay two updates can't wait to see what happens next.

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Lily30

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loving the story 👏

What will Arnav do next 😳

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yoga123

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Posted: 10 years ago

The family are intending to get their children married ...khushi wants revenge for the pijja...awesome parts...thanks for the PM

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pree2605

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome update...

lol khushi...love dis arnav..

thnxx fr email

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