My Heart Will Go On~AK~Ended on Pg 127~ - Page 69

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwww a-k are cute! now whos this new villian guy pssh..cont soon. amazin part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeah i also think dat he's karan n may b coz of him she had left but hope u reveal d truth soon coz i think dat may b he'll create some problems for A-K
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesum part! luved it! hmmm...i think the guy's karan! so confusing madiha! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part well who says u cant make cute seens the scenes in this part are really cute and adoreable pls con soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
its not that guy who kissed her is it.. wa ts his name.. karan?? w/e.. he aint important..

i hope neha prevents karan from seperating ak..
what is the problem anywayz?...


continue sooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
i jus read the whole story!its amazing!isnt this villain Karan?i think it is him!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Excellent part... oooooo kool mystery, i wonder weats goin on, cont soon...

p.s: I hav to tell u i love ur ff... revolutions of my heart, it totally rocks!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
AMAZING nd CUTE prt!!!! 👏
i REALLY wanna know wht happened 5 yrs ago!!! 😛
i think the guy is Karan or sum1 from high school!!! 😉
ewww Kripa ur bf's 60 YRS OLD!!! 🤢 😆 that prt was funny!! 😆
why date a 60 yr old guy when u can date a REALLY HOT 20 sumthing old
guy!!! ANGAD!!!!! 😉
that was a REALLY gud prt, PLEASE continue soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Next half of part is coming up!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: goldi2

aww lol ok now what did i miss? lol im soo lost man lmao lol ok did i really miss sumthing or i just think i missed something. tell me ok cus im soo like not sure ok.
the thing i dont get is whats u with Kripa? i mean why did she leave? has this been metioned alreadyu lol cus if had then im HELL lost lol and need to go back and read! please let me know 😊 and o ya awseom part! im soo glad u continued like u said u would and what a great job u did too.


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luts of luv and sugar
Hina 😃

LOL ...u dint miss anything, its just me...am confusing u guys😉glad u liked it and no i havent reveald why kripa left....yettt😉

Originally posted by: mansi1219

hey.. just read it.. offcourse it was great.. do u need to go to a doctor? after every part u say u dont like it when they are all good..
neway back to the part.. i cant remember was kripa ever wit some guy? i saw a little hint.. but cant recall.. i really wanna kno the BIG secret.. awww the ice-cream part was good.. it was soo cute.. i thought he wud ask her if she was pregnant or something cuz she was kinda having cravings.. lol.. crzy me.. well cnat wait for u to continuea again.. thank god u didnt leave us hanging..
luv
mansi

thanxx...lol....hmm havent visited teh doctor in a while, its time i do😆....hmm....well there was a guy that she kissed....but iono....😉......glad u liked my attempts to make cute parts😆...lmao....i have weird cravings all the time, but dun worry am still a happy proud virgin😆....

Originally posted by: Mulle

awww theyre soooo cute 😳
very nice part 😉

glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: maham_93

Soo cute!!! Luved it! Plz continue soon 😊

glad u liked it😳

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

omg hw can she pas.......i really wanna kno why she left....somethingz bothering her....da AK part was soooo sweeeet!!! continue soooon plzzzzz 😃

lol...glad u liked it...yea she passsedd...iont wanna reveal the truth yet...😳

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... but i really wanna know wat is she hiding!!!!

tahnx....ull know soon😳

Originally posted by: bhumishah

gr8 part now i m kinda gettin the hint of wat prob happened
cont soon

yesssss someone is gettin git!!😆

thanx😳

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

i just dnt get it...wht is Kripa hiding 4om every1!!wish u'd reveal da secret soon!!luv ur work!!

thanxxxxx...itll be revealed sooon...patienceeee😉

Originally posted by: Chotii

OMG!!! wot an amazin part.. n part b4 woz nice 2!
but omg d end woz jus d best.. d ice-cream, n naughty angad 😆 awwwwwwwwwwwwww very hot!!
luvd d part!!
d reason 4 y kripa left seems reely creepy... scarin me now..
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

thanxx.....lol..... aww i dint mean to scare ya...but ure getting hte right idea....maybe😉

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Originally posted by: Andekhi

I really enjoy reading your ff's, and I really think you should be a writer b/c you are very creative w/ scenes (veryyy veryy creative) and write beautifully...

AK are so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! 👏 I really loved this part!! It was beautiful written and I thoroughly enjoyed the game... Besides, the icecream bit, and naughty Angad were surely interesting...

write the next part as soon as possible, eagerly waiting to read it.. 😃

thanx😳...hope u like the next part just as much

Originally posted by: popgirl

👏 👏 its gr8t continue soon plz!!

thanxx😳

Originally posted by: desi03kas

very cute!!! please continue soon 😊

thanx😳

Originally posted by: maurader4evr

jee continue soon.waiting 4 it very impatiently 😳

lol sowwie😳

thanxx😳

Originally posted by: Numera*

omg omg its that guy i forgot his name but from highschool who kissed kripa and kripa kissed him back thinking its angad but it wasnt and its played by ejaz i think and he was like the second hottest after angad lol u know who i mean!! omg soo cool! continue soon!

NICE GUESS!! yay...someone remembers my storyline😆...his name was karan😉

Originally posted by: mansi1219

ok... great part!! awesome!! waiting for the continuation.. um.. lets c... i hope u reveal this thing fast!!! aww.. i thought the scenes were very cute! ahh i dont like the guy who neha was talkin to.. i bet he was partly a reason for her to leave.. ughh gettin me mad already.. well.. hmm.. i m pretty much odne.. o love the way they woke the both of them up.. i wanna do that to some1... to scared to get yelled at after taht.. lol..

luv mansi 😛

thanx......lol...u noe i love to keep u in suspense😉...lol........same i ve beeen wanting to do it for awhile!!

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