My Heart Will Go On~AK~Ended on Pg 127~ - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Khanna Mansion- Chicago

It is a beautiful morning in the Windy City. Being mid-October, we see colorful leaves on the grounds, and a breeze which is causing leaves to fly all over. The camera zooms up and we see a huge 3 story mansion. A sign reads "Welcome to Khanna Mansion." The mansion is huge, consisting of black fencing from the outside, and 20 huge rooms in the inside. There is expensive furniture, and French dcor. Pure white sofas are put up in a trendy way, and we can see that the house is decorated with the latest stuff. Then we are taken up a long spiral stairway and towards a hall with many rooms. The door of the first room is halfway open and we see it's a huge mess. There are football posters on one wall, and posters of girls with short clothes on the other wall. The walls are painted white and black in checkerboard style. There is a 32" plasma TV attached to the wall and a huge bed is next to the pile of clothing and apple computer. On the bed, lies a muscular guy with tattoos, whose face is hidden in the pillows. Suddenly, a cell phone starts ringing, and we hear a groan coming from the occupant of the bed. He picks it up without looking at the caller id.
"Hello?" he said
"Morning Bhai, or shall I say good afternoon?" said the person on the other line.
"Hey Aaliya what time is it?" asked the sleepyhead.
"It is 12 pm bhai and mom is really pissed!" Aaliya replied.
"Uh-oh, I better get up" he said
"Good Idea, c ya" said Aaliya as she put the phone down and chuckled.
Then we see the guy get up, we see his brown eyes, then brown hair and then we see his whole face, and he is, of course, ANGAD. His head was throbbing for he had come home drunk the night before. He quickly ran to the bathroom to take a shower.
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Meanwhile, we see a girl sitting in an airplane. She has straight brown hair, and is listening to her iPod and her face is covered with a book. An announcement comes on. "Ladies and gentlemen our flight has landed thank you for traveling with us, we hope to see u again." Then the girl sees people getting up so she puts her book down. We see her chocolate brown eyes and innocent face, the girl is none other than KRIPA! She picks ups her carry-on luggage and purse, and goes into the airport. After going through the formalities, she finally comes out and spots her sister, Ananya, who excitedly shouts her name and givers her a bear hug. "Aw di, I missed you so much!"
"Me too, Ananya, now lets get moving I am really hungry and tired."

to be continued...
please post comments! 😊 😛

Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz contuine soon it was very good I can't wait till Ak meet each other plz write soon and longer parts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg i love that song! please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow great part can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hehehe the first thing tht came in my mind seeing ur title was titaniccc and leo di caprioooo 😃 sounds cool love the character intros....angad n prithvi cuzinz hey.........wonder hw thts gunna work out....update soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it realy good! its the first part and i can already see how good of a writer u are. cont soon--cnt wait! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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just read it its awesome pls carron im dieing to read the next part 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part 👏 wow wat an intro of a-k.i loved it.cont soooooooooooon 😊 😊 😊 and atleast tell me wat idea u get from my comments plzzzzzzzzzz.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Simiran

plz contuine soon it was very good I can't wait till Ak meet each other plz write soon and longer parts.

thank you..i'll cont soon!😊

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