| A Fight Against Injustice:An AR FF | Chapter #13 | 9/05/16 | - Page 18

Originally posted by: Mpakeez

Yaar Wid Ur Every Update Story Unfold Hone ke Bajaye Aur B Confused State Mai le ja rahi hai..

All D character Especially Ammy z So much conFusing & Complicated for Me..

Waese Update was Well Written..
Aaj First time Har Characrter ka kuch na kuch role tha..

So, Story for Now z dat Ridhima z Comming between d Armaan Maliks & His Mission.. Bechara Pura din soonch soonch ke pagal ho gaya How to stop her But aik B idea nahi aaya D Gr8 Armaan Malik ke Dimaag mai.. He can't Evn Hurt he.. But Y.. ? Bolo bolo Mr. Malik.. Chal kya raha hai..

Poor Ridhima Truck se lene kuch gayii thi milla Kuch aur .. Aur yai Hospital mai Aur kya kya Illigal Kaam Ho rahe ho..
& Dn Attack at Ridhima.. Kon Ho skta hai.. Not Ammy For sure.. Ab aur kon Hai Jo Ridhima Ka Raaz Jaanta hai.. Ammy's Boss?.. Waese lagta to nahii.. Dn dean & Head of Hospital..?
BichaarI Ridhima Bachcho Ko bachane K chakkar Mai Khud Ki Halat kharaab ho gayii..
But atlast Bachche Ab safe hai..
Aur Ridhima End mai Behosh Ho gayii.. Hope she Z Fine..


Now About Rahoool.. Mai Uski condition ko leke hasso ya Roowoo 🤣.. Inna Bada Officer se kya kaam karwa rahe hai.. Where d Hell he Got stuck.. Zaroor Is mai B D gr8 Malik Ka haath hogaa..


Ab Muski.. So usko ab wapass Ghar jaana hai.. But Jaese Ki V Knw Ammy Jaane Nahi dega.. Warna Saari Planning Pe Pani Firega.. Aur wo darr Kyu rahi hai...


Wat Z Ammy trying to do Yaar..
Ridhima z Trying to stop Illigal thing But Ammy Z Help dem.. & Z Trying to stop Ridhima & Rahool..
I knw Ammy Z wid Big Plan..
Ridhima & Rahool R trying to catch Fish Where as Ammy Z planning to catch D Whale..

Let c Kon Kisko Pakad tha hai..
'Catch Me If U Can'

& Haan Basket ball Scene Haayyeee.. Kitna cute thaa..


nice Update.. Well written & yeah sachchi mai update size mai bada tha as compared to previous updates..

& Now I hope Fir se waiting zone mai nahi rehna padhega For nxt update...
I am waiting for Nxt update & How u r Going to Unfold D Mystry..

Take care..
Stay Blessed..
Keep Smiling..
Bbye.. .

Originally posted by: shreya03

interesting update love riddhima interaction with kids & playing baseball & I think armaan is from dusman party & please jaldi se armaan ka real truth bhi batao & I like when Rahul trying to Tell riddhima about his training so funny & update soon :-)

Originally posted by: kajenlife

amazing part seya

hehe rahul character is really funny

AR played basket ball with the kids

wow riddhima saved the kids she is a brave girl

but what is armaan up to

is he belongs to smuggling gang

now riddhima is unconsious

aage kya hoga

continue soon

Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Interesting turn of events...lovely...do continue..

Originally posted by: gaurikajen

ok m getting confused with armn character y he wanna stop riddhima and who attacked riddhima

the ff is doing great

just try to give quick updates

loved d whole part

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hey,

Loved this part,

This story is getting more interesting,

The basketball scene was very nicely written

Riddhima has managed to save the kids

in the truck and on the other side,

Armaan got a phone call,

which has a high possibility of being linked to the event

and more shades of his character is being revealed,

and at the end, Riddhima fainted owing to the blow she received.

Eager to know what will happen next,

Update soon

Thanks for the PM

Take care😊