ArShi FF - K Tere Mere Beech Meh Kya Hai ? |Upd pg 23|

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Hey there everyone ! I m Samrajya laxmi wati and this is my first ff on ArShi . I hope you all like the idea and do comment back . Please read the story and do give back your valuable opinion . Criticism is welcomed.

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~Sam



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Teaser part one
"Oh ho ! Hayye nazar na lage kissi ka meri Khushi ko ! Kitni khoobsurat lag rahi hai ! "A girl complimented as she finished braiding the hair of a girl in bride's attire sitting in front of her .

["Oh Khushi is looking so beautiful ! "A girl complimented as she finished braiding the hair of a girl in bride's attire sitting in front of her . ]

"Sach Sani ! Kya meh sundar lag rahi hu ? "Asked Khushi curiously as her friend placed another hair clip in her beautifully braided hair.

["Really Sani ! Am I looking beautiful ? "Asked Khushi curiously as her friend placed another hair clip in her beautifully braided hair. ]

"Ab yeh bhi kohi puchne k Baat hai Kya ? Tum dulhaniya ho achi toh lag na hi hai ! Kyu hai na Sani ?"another girl replied as she sat with Khushi and Sani who had now finished braiding Khushi's hair nodded and joined them .

["Now is this a question to ask ? U r the bride , u ought to look beautiful what say Sani ?"another girl replied as she sat with Khushi and Sani who had now finished braiding Khushi's hair nodded and joined them . ]

"Tum dunno mujhe ullo bana rahi ho ! Jaise uss din banaya tha ! "Khushi said angrily keeping her arms near her chest and in a tone of like a stubborn child.

["U two are making me a fool like the other day ! "Khushi said angrily keeping her arms near her chest and in a tone of like a stubborn child. ]

"Nahi Khushi ! Hum sach Bol rahe hai ! Kher waise yeh ab hamara kyu bishwas karegi na ? Ab toh sirf kissi kissi ka hi bishwas karegi !"Sani said and all three laughed out .

["No Khushi we r speaking the truth ! Anyways why would u believe us ? Now u will only believe someone na!"Sani said and all three laughed out.]

"Waise aja raat Tujhe hamre jeeju bahut tang karenge ! Tu itni sundar jo lag rahi ho !"continued Sani and Khushi blushed red as she heard this .

["Tonight our bother in law is going to trouble u a lot ! U r looking so beautiful!" continued Sani and Khushi blushed red as she heard this . ]

All three sat there chatting and discussing about the wedding until they were to call to the mandap . After sometime Khushi 's childhood friend entered the room with a gloomy face .

"Tum itni pareshaan kyu lag rahi ho ? Aja Khushi chali jayegi issi liye Kya?"Sani asked the girl as she still stood near the door with a sad face .

["Hey why are u looking so worried ? Khushi will go today is that why?"Sani asked the girl as she still stood near the door with a sad face.]

"Aree Pritu ! Yeh Kya tu waha kyu hai idhar aa na !"Khushi said but the girl still stood there with a grave expression in her face .

["Hey Pritu ! What r u doing there ? Come here na"Khushi said but the girl still stood there with a grave expression in her face . ]

"Kya baharat ayi Kya ?"asked Sani .

["Has the baharat arrived ?"asked Sani . ]

"Nahi lekin woh dulha "said Pritu leaving the sentence unfinished as her face turned now expression less .

["No but then that groom .. "said Pritu leaving the sentence unfinished as her face turned now expression less . ]

"Dulha Kya Pritu ? Dulha Kya?"asked Khushi tensed as she saw her friend still with a grave face . She got worried and silently prayed
"Hey Shambhu kuch bura maat karnaa !"

[ "Groom ? Groom what ?"asked Khushi tensed as she saw her friend still with a grave face . She got worried and silently prayed
"Hey Shambhu do not spoil anything !"]


But little did she knew that her prayer had no use today . Silence grabbed the moment as finally collecting all her guts Pritu replied,

"Woh dulha ..."
[ " The groom ..."]


---TBC---

Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinion . Thank u for reading this one .

~Sam
Edited by Texie-Shady - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely teasers
Waiting to read more
Do pm me
Edited by sunirani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely teaser was left in a cliff hanger. Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting teaser
Loved to read more
Plz continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sound interesting
the concept is hooking
what happen to groom?
continue sooon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u 😳
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Originally posted by: sunirani

Lovely teasers
Waiting to read more
Do pm me

thank u so much 😳 and surely will pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sounds really interesting! If the groom isn't arnav it doesn't matter where he is 😆

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