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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing parts!! i love it!! continue soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg u have 2 continue 👏 i love ur ff 2 much 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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please contininue soon :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome promo plz cont soon. 👏
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awesome promo and part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome promo
ab yeh shiv kaun hai
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ab yeh shiv kahan se aaya 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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2 days passed but angad didn't see kripas face. She was in her room locked and didn't come out for passed 2 days. Angad was getting really annoyed and wanted to talk to her but couldn't didn't know how to after what he did. Angad left to meet josh and tried to talk to him about kripa.

J: shocked) what? Why did u do that are u gone crazy…oh my god how could u do that?
A: I don't know….I was just really mad at her
J: and just becz of ur ego u took away her best friend
A: I didn't want to but when the guy came to me and said he is looking for her I thought maybe he was realited to her or something
J: did u ask kripa about the guy before u did that
A: no
J: ur missed up dude ur really missed up….u know what…ur problem is ur ego…ur freaking ego that always makes u go and do something so stupid
A: stop it josh
J: no today u have to listen to me…u have to face the truth…just becz u don't have happiness in ur life u cant take others happiness away to
A: I didn't try to take others happiness
J: oh yea then what about the thing u did?
A: gets up to leave) im leaving
J: no u have to listen to me
A: I don't want to hear anything

J: u have to….the first time when I saw kripa I just couldn't believe that she was ur friend…I always saw her laugh and smile and dieing to do anything for her friend but u….u always try to take things away from ur friends u try to ruin them….today for the first time im a shamed that im ur friend
A: looks at him shocked and angry) what?
J: u heard me….when I saw kripa do u know how happy I was…I thought she brought happiness in ur life when I saw u always smiling to her….I felt that my friend is in love…but I didn't know u were so nice to her just becz of ur stupid ego….ur really missed up man…. (shakes his head and lives inside to his house. Angad stood in front of josh's house shocked and surprised at josh's words. He started to walk back toward his apartment still thinking about josh's words.
A: thinking to him self) I don't give a damn….why the hell does he thinks I could love someone or someone could make me happy in life….I will never be happy in my life….my life has always been ruin then why the hell would he think my life will get better now (gets angry and keeps on thinking)

Angad inters into the apartment and sits in the living room. He closes his eyes trying not to care for whatever happened. he open his eyes quickly when he hears kripas door to her room opens. Kripa was wearing blue jeans with black T-shirt. Her hair into pony caring a big beg in her back. Kripa looks at angad angry and ignores him. She leaves toward the door to outside then stops. Kripa takes out a key from her pocket and puts it on the small table next to the door and leaves from there without saying anything. Angad gets up quickly from his seat and walks toward the door and picks up the keys. It was the key for the apartment. He gets shocked when he thinks that kripa is leaving. He runs out of the apartment down the stairs. He reaches down when he stops realizing he was running after kripa

A: to him self) what am I doing….so what if she is leaving why would I care…(walks back up to the stirs in to his apartment. Angad sits on the couch in his living room) she will be back…she cant just leave…

Angad tries to calm himself and not try to think about kripa.

An hour later angad gets up from the couch and paces around the living room and his room really disturbed. He couldn't take it anymore….angad grabs his jacket and runs outside to look for kripa.

Angad searches everywhere like crazy but there was no sign of kripa. After looking around the city for 5 hours he sat down on the bench putting his hand on his face will a tear rolled down his cheek and he slowly whispered
A: whisper) kripa



New city

Kripa was walking looking for the address that was in her hand when a car came from behind her and was about to hit her. Someone grabbed from her whist and pulled her to the side walk which made kripa hit her body against his. Kripa looked up quickly at the person angry and pulled apart
K: whisper) stupid (starts to walk away)
The guy smiles at her and runs after her to catch up with her
G: excuse me hello miss
K: stops and turns around) what is it?
G: I just saved u…the car was about to hit u…
K: realizes he really did) oh…thank you (starts walking again)
G: runs after her again) hi im shiv
K: so
S: well this is how the story starts…the hero save the girl and both falls in love
K: not on this one….go away
S: hey C'mon…look I have everything….job, house, car, and im handsome to…
K: stops walking and faces him) what do u want
S: to love me back
K: rolls her eyes) are u crazy
S: about u
K: ufff……listen I don't even know u…
S: I know that's why its called love at first sight
K: please go away
S: are u single
K: ufff…….(sits in the bench and puts her hands on her face trying to calm down)
Shiv sits next to her and starts talking about him self well kripa covers her ears trying not to hear…after few mints kripa gets back up and runs from there quickly. After running for 5 mints she gets to a store and tries to take her breath….she buys a water and opens the top. Kripa starts to drink water when all of sudden shiv appears in front of her
S: Hiiiii
Kripa jerks up and spits all the water out on shivs face then starts to choke
K: starts to cough and shiv taps behind her)
S: u ok
K: ok I give up…what do u want
S: to be friends with u
K: u like making friends with strangers
S: no but when I saw u I had the feeling that we are not strangers
K: u need to go check with a doctor ur going nuts
S: I know ha…what can I do I just cant stop my self from loving u
K: ok…listen my head hurts I been traveling by foot for passed 6 hours …im really tired
S: come at my place…I have a big house…and I live alone…but don't worry u could trust me
Kripa remembers angad tell her the same thing
S: hello
K: comes back to reality) huh?
S: C'mon
K: no thank you….I have to go
S: were do u live
K: no were
S: than were are u going to stay
K: anywhere but not ur place
S: come to my place please
K: no
S: im not going to eat u
K: who knows u might (walks away
S: smiles and shouts behind her) when well I see u next
K: in hell
S: really ur going to visit me
K: shakes her head and leaves)


Kripa: 25 years old. Been in jail for 8 years. Has a best friend since childhood who is like a sister to her. After going to jail she didn't want to stay in contact with her parents becz she wanted her family to forget her to think that she is dead for them and they should never think about her again. and now she is looking for her trying to find her back.



Angad: 25 years old. Hates everything since his mom died and his dad went to jail. Really spoiled and always thinks he could never be happy in his life. Hates marrige or love becz he thinks no one in their life will ever be able to have good life and might turn out life his parents. Just realized he cared for someone for the fist time and it's the person who trusted him which he broke kripa.



Aliya: 25 yeas old kripas best friend. She fell ill when kripa killed someone and becz of that shocked she went crazy. When the man came and took her away after seeing kripa running behind the car she remembered her passed and got a shock witch she became back to normal.



Shiv: 25 years old…fun person always cheering…thinks he fall in love with kripa.




😃 😛 😉
Edited by Star* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79

amazing part
so the story is abt the 4 of them literally
kool
poor angad but it waz his fault stupid ego
hope he finds her soon thought
cont soon

nice intro

Edited by hot_girl_2525 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
great part please continue soon 😳

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