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Posted: 18 years ago
omg!!! krish reminds me of that kid on kank too, Numera*


that was such a sad part.. angad is an idiot i mean fine he blamed krish, but for 5 yrs?!!

kripa did the rite thing.. maybestaying away for a while will make him change but when away dont bring anyone new..

continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMGGGGG how can angad be soooo mean, i mean like to his own child, who can do dat?????? Poor krissh i feel sooooooooooo sorry for him!!!! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg...awsum parts 👏 ...just caught up wid few last ones...angad was such a superman wen he saved kripa from shaam and dev...but now he has sort of become too protective of kripa...common angad darling...b gud to ur son
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Posted: 18 years ago

After kripa finished feeding krish she told krish to go up in his room. When krish left kripa washed the dishes and dried her hands then walked by the stairs to go to krish's room
A: kripa wait plez
K: im going to tell him right now….we will leave tonight
A: kripa you cant do that
K: so now ur telling me what I can do or what I cant….why don't u tell your self a little how to behave with ur kid (leaves from there)

Kripa inters into krish's room and sees krish watching his favorite show on the tv. She sits by him on his bed. After few mints later kripa slowly tried to tell him.
K: krish
Kr: looks at his mom) yes mom
K: I wanted to tell you something
Kr: did I do something wrong again
K: no no its not about you…of course not jaan….I know u will never do anything wrong….beta I wanted to tell you that….that me and ur dady are separating

Krish was shocked what he heard…he knew how much his dad loved his mom and all of sudden them separating….he couldn't even imaging that they would ever separate
Kr: what happen mommy?
K: takes deep breath then speaks) I think we where meant to be apart
Kr: no that not true…but daddy loves you a lot
K: smiles to him) I know jaan…but sometimes when love gets to much it causes problems and that's why I don't want that to happen so…so I want to stay away from your daddy a little while till everything is ok again.
Kr: is it about me mommy
K: shakes her head) no jaan…its not about you…
Kr: are you guys going to live together though
K: shakes her head)
Kr: when are we leaving
K: tonight
Kr: looks down sad and doesn't say anything else)
Kripa puts her arms around him and kisses his head.
K: im sorry jaan

Angad was in the living room with his hands on his face really sad will tears where rolling down his cheek. He heard the door open to krish's room. Quickly he looked up his eyes red. Kripa came out with logeg in her right hand and holding krish's hand. Both of them walk down and kripa tried hard not to look at angad becz she knew when she sees his face she will get hurt to see his tears. As kripa and krish reached down angad walked up to her quickly.
A: holds from her hand) kripa you cant do this…I wont let go leave me like this
K: im sorry angad but I cant change my dicessions
A: im sorry I will never be mean to him again…I will make a good father

K: angad I don't want to force you….becz I know you will try to but not from your heart…if once you understand how much he loves you….few mints ago he was backing you up when I told you that we are separating…he was taking your side saying that you are a good father to him…see how much he cares for you…but you might never understand that (pulls her hand away from his and leaves to the door. She stops by the door and looks back at her house her life and most of all her happiness all that she is giving up to make one new relationship between angad and her son…she knows that soon angad will relize how much he care for krish not only her)

Kripa and krish sat on the car will the driver started the car. Angad stood by kripa's window telling her not to leave but kripa looked away trying her best to ignores him. The driver drove away will angad stood there with tears in his eyes helplessly.

Kripa and krish stayed at hotel and kripa told the driver not to tell angad where they stayed. The driver agreed and left. The next day kripa left to find a house to rent. After two days later they found a small house with two bed room. Kripa and krish stood in front of the house looking at the house

K: well what do u think
Kr: I like it mom
K: do you really…im sorry jaan
Kr: its ok mommy…not everyone is rich…now I will be just like my friends…they live in like this house's to.
K: smiles to him and puts her hand on his shoulder) shall we go inside and see
Kr: nods and runs inside will kripa behind him. Krish reaches by the door first before kripa
K: cheater…
Kr: laughs and opens the door will both of them inters inside the house. Both of them stairs inside the house looking. The living room was big and by in the corner was fire place…everywhere was spider webs and dusty. The lady comes there
L: hi
Both krish and kripa jerks up becz when they looked inside the house they got scared specially when the lady came she looked like witch.
Kr: mommy I think it's a ghost
K: slowly to him) lets run
L: how do u like the house
K: its…its good
L: well im going to give u cheaper becz its kind of missed up old
K: thank you…we will fix it
L: well good luck
Kripa takes some money out of her purse and pays the lady for the house…the money was all her savings she did in passed 5 years and now she bought the house.
L: smiles to her and puts her hand in krish's cheek) so cute…have a nice day bye (leaves from there)
Kr: start scratching his face) ewwww
K: laughs) so we need to go buy some stuff first then come and clean the house
Kr: u got money left mommy
K: enough for us to fix the house then I will start a job
Kr: what will u work
K: I think in a restaurant
Kr: surprised) restaurant
K: have to jaan…I aint rich ur dad is….and I will not take a penny from ur dad anymore (smiles to him) ok lets go and buy some stuff for the house

Kripa and krish walked to the store…it was a little far and they had to walk becz they didn't have car yet and kripa wouldn't take anything from angad…she wants to work and make money for herself and her son. They reached to the store and got the cart will krish started to put something inside for the house. After and hour later they finished and payed to the cashier….both of them got the begs and walked back toward the house…the begs where little heavy for them and its was to many. Kripa called for a rickshaw and went home. They reached tot the house will krish took some begs to the house and came back to get more begs will kripa was paying the driver. They interred inside the house and started to clean.

Angad made the driver speak by telling him he will fire him if he doesn't tell him where he droped them…after the driver told him he left to fallow them where they lived. Now he was standing by the window of the small house watching kripa and krish cleaning the house. Kripa stood on the chair with broom in hand and broomed the corners of the room. Will she was cleaning she saw a big spider and screamed will she run to krish who was on other side of the room.
Kr: what happen mommy
K: scared) there is a big old spider there
Kr: laughs) mommy ur scared of the spider (laughs more)
K: ur acting so though like ur not
Kr: im not scared of spiders
K: yea right
Kr: really mom look (krish walks up where the spider fall down on the ground and grabs it in his hand showing kripa) look mommy
K: ewwwwwwwww…put it down…put it down ewww (scared)shoo
Kr: laughs and goes by the window then opens the window and throws out the spider)
K: ur just like ur dad…that's how he was when I saw spider in the closet…gosh I don't like u guys…bad boys
Kr: laughs then speaks) I wish I was like daddy
K: smiles big to him) of course you are jaan (gives him big hug will picking him up in her arms) ur my just like ur dad…do u know you two have so much similarities…every time when I see u I think im seeing ur daddy and when ur daddy laughs I think its u jaan laughing…(kisses his cheek) same smile
Kr: but he doesn't love me like I do to him
K: of course he does…u know he loves u more then me
Kr: no he doesn't
K: that's becz u don't really know….he loves u a lot jaan…its just that he cant really tell you how much…listen one day it will come that he will even risk his life to save u
Kr: I think he will save any other kids but not main
K: don't be silly….you will know ur self when the day comes…then look ur going to be with him all the time and even forget about me
Kr: puts his arms around her neck tight) I love u mommy…I will never forget u
K: smiles) I love u tooooooo…(both of them laughs) ok now back to work…we have lots of work left
Kr: nods)

Angad was watching them by the window and had a little tears in corner of his eyes but didn't even notice. Slowly he smiled and left.

At night both krish and kripa finished cleaning half of the room. Kripa laid small mattress that was in the house. It was small and only one could fit…she cleaned it and laid new sheets on top. The room didn't have lights yet and they light up candels. Kripa laid on the woden floor will krish was on the mattress
Kr: mommy sleep on this ur back will hurt later
K: no jaan it wont…I like it here
Kr: really
K: nods) yes (kripa starts telling krish stories for him to go to sleep. She was ok with the house and everything becz she was used to it specially on the ground the jail wasn't any different. As krish slowly went to sleep kripa blow the candle and laid back down looking out the window thinking about angad went she felt she saw a shadow moving. She quickly sat up and looked at krish who was a sleep. She pulled the sheets on top of him will she her self slowly moved toward the kitchen. There was a bat in the corner of the kitchen maybe from people who lived there before. She slowly grabbed the bat and ducked down will moving toward the window. She looked up who it is but there was no one. Kripa went out from back door holding the bat in her hand still. She slowly walked toward the front door when she saw someone shadow. As she rised the bat high she quickly moved in front of the person and hit down on the persons head.

Who did kripa hit…was it angad or was it a theft who might hurt them

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Posted: 18 years ago
that was awesome!! im happy angad's coming around!! the him hating his own son is really ridiculous of him to do!! continue soon hun!
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was soooooo amazing 👏 👏 👏 ...hope its angad...though i dont want to angad to get hurt awwwwwwww angad is just like his dad...like father like son
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome part! finaly u continued 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part... i hope angad realises his love for krissh!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww i thynk kripa shudnt have left him
bring them bak 2gather yaar soon
and wen r u posting another part ?????
just askin
i wish it was angad hu she hit
haha
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Posted: 18 years ago
thats so cute especially krish and kripa and i guess that was angad 😆

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