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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Paridi1234

heyyy plz update your story...and when would u...:-(



Please update sis
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Thank You... 😊
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Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Awesome work!! Thank You.... 😊😊😊

Please do continue soon! xx❤️ Yeahhh Sure... 😊😊😊 Soon... 😊 Thank You For Ur Beautiful Comment... 😊😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey sis, how you? 😊 Heyyy... 😊 I'm Good What About U... 😊

So sorry for the late reply Its Alright Sis And Sees I'm Too Replying Late... 😔


Aww, Samrat's love for Mannie is really cute Thank You...😊

Oh my hat, I actually believed that Samrat was playing Mannie because of the scene where he spoke to his parents but I'm glad that I'm wrong, thanks to the other scene... Yeahhh... Actually Samrat Loved Mannie How Much U Would Know Soon... 😊

Why are his parents keen on getting him married to Mannie, I have a feeling that it's business related but I also have a feeling that it has to do with revenge.. Business. Ummm I Don't Think So Becox Mannie's Father Is Very Poor Compared To Samrat's Father.. And About Revenge I Don't Think So... 😔

Looks like Alishba is falling for UV, which I don't think is good... Whyyy.. ??? And Right Now Alishba Isn't Falling...

Lol, love the brother and sister relationship and how Armaan threw the water on Alishba... Hahahaha Lolxxx... I Too Laughed...

Does Armaan like Jay? I hope she doesn't play the villain 😔 Both Armaan And Jay Love Each Other All Thanks To Technology Social Site...And Don't Worry Here Jay Is Not The Villain.. But Here Jay Is Cute Sister Which Helps Her Sister Mannie... 😊

I wished that UV would change after Armaan confronted him but looks like I'm wrong...he still so rude and discusting but I still feel sorry for him because I understand how he feels after finding out that his father isn't his father and that his mother had an affair as well as because of their family problems, Manyata died... Yeahhh.. But Is Of Few More Time...Don't Worry... 😊 And I Guess Next Update Would Give U A Shock Totally I Guess's.. 😃 😛

I really felt bad for Alishba when the teacher was being so rude...As for Kabir, I think that he will fall for Alishba Ummm I Don't Think... As Kabir Isn't Important Character Of The Story...😊

Lol, looks like Alishba started falling for UV... Not Right Now... 😊

I was terrified when I read that she saw Sania and group but was amazed to see the change in her after she remembered what her father told her. Yeahhh... And What Ever Our Parents Says Its All Important And Worth But We Children Don't Understand It When We Won't Be Around Troubles...And On That Day We Understand All Those Words Meanings Which Were Told By Our Parents...😊 And Same Thing Over Here I Showed That Parents R Always Right.. They Can Say All Beautiful Tips And Words For Making Our Future More Beautiful Then Our Presen . And Sometimes Flashbacks Helps Us To Be Strong As Alishba Did. . 😊 😃

Wonder how Armaan will react when he finds out that the UV's changing for the worst. Simple He Would Hit His Head. Lolxxx...😆 Sorry Can't Tell...

The scene between Unnati and Vassundra was touching and I really hope UV changes for the best, soon Yeah He Will Don't Worry. 😊

Sara is very cute and I feel bad for Kabir Ohhh OK...

Shoot! First I have to say that UV is disgusting and second I can see how he misses his Princess but was shocked to see that he left her to die Yeahhh.. 😔

Gosh, I hope Vassundra understands that everything happens with time and because of DESTINY because you won't get something if it wasn't in your destiny... True.

Overall...

Loved the update to the core Thank U Sooo Much. 😊 😃

Thanks for the pm 😊 U R Welcome Sis... 😊

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Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey sis, sorry for the late reply 😊 Its Alright Sis... 😊
Wow, amazing promo
Loved it to the core ❤️ Thank You...😊
Yay, I was right, Manyata is alive but I feel bad for her because the person she loved the most, her father, is no longer with her... Yeahhh Manyata Is Alive... 😊 R U Happy Now... 😊 And Yeah... Heyyy Where Manyata's Father Came... Sorry If I Remembered I Didn't Mentioned Manyata's Father.. And How Could U Say That He Is No Longer With Her.. ???
Gosh, who is Alishba talking about?
Does UV really have feelings for Alishba or is it a hoax? For Whom Alishba Is Talking And Why... And Does UV Really Feels For Her Or Esle Is U Have To Wait N See... 😊 😛


Woaw, why did Mannie try to commit suicide? I have a feeling Armaan saved her... I Don't Think Mannie Will Try To Suicide...And Does Armaan Saved Her Or Not ... Don't Know... And For Knowing It U Have To Wait... 😊 And I'm Sorry Sis Its Been More Than A 3 Months I Haven't Update It... 😔 So Plzzz Forgive Me... And I Will Try To Update It As Soon As Possible... 😊


I really hope UV doesn't use her like the way he does to the others because I can see the love Alishba has for him
She said that she loves him but he didn't... Don't Worry Here UV Doesn't Use Her... But He Don't Love Her... He Loves Only Manyata Which Shows Manyata Similarities In Alishba... That's Whyy Due To His Love Manyata He Isn't Playing With Alishba... But Who Says In Future What Alishba Maybe... 😔 Confused... Then Don't Be U Would Understand All Riddles As Story Proceeds And Proceeds...😊

Shoot, Alishba is pregnant, what are they going to do? And they are studying... True Alishba Is Pregnant .. And Still They R Students But Still She Would Give Life To Her Baby... 😊

Woaw, so they are going to have the child, UV is actually marrying Alishba...I'm happy for her but upset that he's not marrying Manyata but I guess it's best if he takes responsibility for his actions by marrying Alishba... True Alishba Is Mother Of UV's Child... And She Do Loves Him... But UV Don't... So How Could He Finish His Bachelor Thing For A Baby... UV Won't Be Marrying.. UV Isn't Groom For Alishba... And Don't Be Upset For Manyata As For Now Manyata Hates Him... Don't Want To See His Face..

Why did UV faint? Was it due to the shock when he saved that little boy or after seeing the boys mothers face? UV Wasn't Fainted As He Had Seen Familar Face...But It Was Due To Process When UV Saved The Boy And He Got Hurt On His Head And After Being Admitted To Hospital.. Dr Examines Him Then Dr Saw He Was Injured On His Head... Why does the doctor talk to UV about Manyata? What miracle? Incidently Dr Talk About Manyata... And Miracle That Being Badly Shooted She Was Saved... If Someone Was On Her Place So He Or She Could Have Been Died...
Is Alishba supposed to be Manyata? If not then how was Manyata close to him and he didn't know? Manyata Was So Close To Him But He Didn't Recognized Her... And Who Is Manyata Is A QUESTION MARK...???

Why does she hate him? Why did she hide her identity? As UV Was Womanizer Casanova.. She Didn't Cared... She Would Forgive Him That Just For Once UV Would Recognized Her... But What She Thought It Happened Totally Opposite...
Yuck, I seriously don't like UV because of his discussing acts...
He had many affairs when he thought that she was dead whereas she did not... UV Thought Of Manyata Being Dead... And She's Dead Just Becox Of Him.. So This Guilt...Anyways One Big Reason Of UV Being Like This Would Be Revealed In Next Chapter When Whole Shootout Act Would Be Revealed...
He's mehndi ceremony took place whereas she is only engaged...
I thought that he wouldn't do anything to her but I was wrong... What's Wrong And What Not... What U Assumed And What Not... Would Be Knowing Soon...😊
There's so many questions that I want answers to so please do update soon
Thanks for the link to the promo 😊 Yuppp... 😊 And Will Be Updating Next Part.. 😊 And U R Welcome... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey sis, I re-read the intro just as you requested 😉 Okayyyzzz... 😊

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Chapter 10 Part 1

In Islamabad,Pakistan
In Rathore's House
In Jay's Room
Jaynandini Rathore Or Jay In Dressed In Shalwar Kameez And Looking At Herself In Mirror ... And Then Remebers The Convo She Did With Her BoyFriend Armaan Raichand... And Was Smiling.. Then Suddenly She Became Sad..


Jay: When Time Will Come That I Would Meet U..




(As Jay Was Saying This In Her Mind Vijay Came To Her.. )




Vijay (With Smile): Heyy Jay Bhai What's Up.. And Why U Seem So Sad... Ahh Looks Like Taking Tension About The Board Examination...




(As Jay Hears It She Turned Around And While Giving Smirk)




Jay: Vijay Bhai U Know Jay Never Takes Tension And Too Of Exams.. Ahhh Never Ever...
Jay (Then Sadly): But I'm Sad Because...




(As Jay Was $aying This Vijay Came Near To Her And Continued On Her Behalf...)





Vijay: Tensed Sad About Manu...
Jay: Yes About Manu Too And My For My...
Vijay (Interrupting. And Standing Up): Now Don't Tell About That U R Missing Ur Social Site Lover Boy..





(As Jay Hears It She Passed Sad Look.. So Vijay Understand It And He Sat On Sofa Near Her.. And...)




Vijay: Jay My Sweet $ister U Know In Ur College How Many Of Ur Class-Fellows And Ur College Boys Had Send Proposal For U... And U Rejected Them Just Because U Had Found Some Guy From Social $ite And Claimed That U Love Him...U Know Jay Love And It That To With Social Site Some Random Unknown Guy.. U Had Never Saw Him And Claimed That U Love Him.. Jay What U Know About Him.. And U Do Really Thing That What Ever He Speaks Or Tells Each N Every Word Of His Talks R All Pure And R True... Never Lie... No Jay Its All Fake... What Is It That Some Bad Peoples Had Found A Business To Talk On Social Networking Site And Says They Love U Which Is All Fake..

Jay (With Smile): I Know Vijay Bhai... But Trust Me Armaan Isn't One Of Them.. Armaan Is Nicee Guy And Trully Loves Me... Bhai I Talked To Him And Can Say That Armaan Is A Right Guy My Prince Charming... And I Know This Too That U Loved Me A lot That's Why U R Worried About My Future That U Think Armaan Is One Of Them Who Chooses Girls To Use...
Vijay (Interrupting): Okayyy... But Tell Me That Since Armaan Proposed U He Never Dare To Call Me Nor Our Parents.. And Never Came To Pakistan To Ask For Ur Hand... Hmmm...

Jay: Bhai Because Armaan Told Me Once One Day About This.. And He Told That Once He Completed His Studies And Settled His Life Then He Would Ask My Hand..





(As Vijay Hears It He Again Stand Up And This Time Angerly And...)





Vijay: And I Don't Think That Time Would Come In Ur Life... He Would Use And Throw U Like A Trash And Will Say All Fault Is Of Urs.. That's What I Expect Him To Be... And Till When He Don't Ask Ur Hand U Won't Talk To Him Nor Chat... Say About This Clearly To Him That If He Wants To Be With U Talk To U So For That He Have To Ask Ur Hand Or Esle He Have To Forget U...And If I Sees U Talking To Him Without My Permission Against My Commitment Then Maybe I Would Be Bad With U Which I Don't Want... So Keep This In Ur Mind...



(Saying This Vijay Left Jay's Room And Left Jay In Cries...)





In Mumbai, India
In Singh's Mansion
As Vassundra And Sara Came To House They Saw Very Old Man Holding ''Tasbi'' And Seeing Whole House While Sitting So Vassundra Indicated Sara To Go To Her Room.. Then Indicating It Vassundra Came To Old Man And Ask For His Presence...

Vassundra: I'm Sorry Baba G But I Don't Know U...
Old Man: I Know Beti.. U Don't Know Me And I Too.. But I Could Say I'm Old Man ..




(As Old Man About To Say More That Harris Came To Them And Completed On His Behalf)




Harris: And Wondering For Place To Live..



(As Harris Says It Vassundra Show Her Angry Glare And With Her Eyes She Said To Behave.. Then To Old Man..)




Vassundra: I'm Sorry Baba G... This Is My Elder Son.. And I Apologize To U On His Behalf..




(As Vassundra Says It She Call Maid And To Her...)




Vassundra: Bring Some Breakfast For Him..

Maid: G Madam.





(After Saying It Maid Left The Place To Go To Kitchen.. Then Old Man To Vassundra...)




Old Man: Its Okay Beti.. And Thank You For Ur Welcoming But I...




(Saying This Old Man Stand Up And Went To House Wall And Sees Childhood Pictures Frame.. Then Old Man Touched The One Picture Frame.. And Spell Something.. And Vassundra And Harris Very Far Away From Old Man And Looking All This Were Confused... And About To Say Something But Were Interrupted As Old Man Says ..)





Old Man: Some Old Stories Were Left Incomplete But Now Time Had Came To Complete That Incomplete Story...
Vassundra (confusingly): I'm Sorry Baba G But I Didn't Understand...
Old Man: Beti Some Things U Won't Understand Until N Less They Came As Reality...
Harris: But...

Old Man (Interrupting): Beta Few Years Back A Lady Loved A Person Truely But Just Because Of Some Misunderstanding That Lady Had To Marry Some Other Person As That Person Was Chosen By Her Parents.. And On Wedding Day Lady Thought Her BoyFriend Who Thought Love Her But He Betrayed Her.. This What Lady Thought But Reality Was Different..




(As Old Man Says It He Turned Around To Vassundra And Harris And Continued..)





Old Man: Then After Few Years Of Marriage Lady Finds The Truth Of Her Boyfriend And In Last Became Pregnant To His Child.. And When She Was About To Tell The News To Him She Heard Attack On Her BoyFriend Mr. Mehra And Some Promises Were Made Then They Were Separated Again By Destiny..





(As Vassundra Hears Old Man She Was Totally Shock That How Could He Old Man Would Knew The Story Of Her Past Life... Then Old Man Seeing Vassundra's Shocked Face He Smiled Then He Came To Vassundra And Placed His Hand On Vassundra's Head.. And..)





Old Man: Beti Maybe I Came Here To Ur House To Tell Some Future Happenings And By Knowing That U Could Be Able To Smile And Happy Once Again...
Vassundra: I Believed Baba G... But I Can't Until My Son Uday Won't Be Back To Me..
Old Man: Beti He Would Come Back To U One Day.. Uday Is Ur Child Whose Father Is Not Griraj But From Aarish Mehra... Uday Is The Love Symbol For U And Aarish So How Would He Hate Love And Won't Fall...




(Harris Listening All This He Was Shocked That Uday Wasn't His Own Brother But He Was His Mother's Lover Boy Child.. And On Other side Vassundra In Tears...)





Vassundra: No Baba G...





(As Vassundra Want To Say More But Got Interrupted When Old Man Went Little Away And...)




Old Man: It Would Happen..






In London, UK
In Ruislip Shooting Area
In UV's Vanity Van
UV Was Having Pain In His Head As He Was Calling Yesterday's Act...That Just Becox Of Him Girl Commit Suicide That She Herself Shooted On That Spot Where UV's Childhood Friend Manyata Kumari Was Shooted By Griraj Goons.. And Remembered The Whole Accident...




FLASHBACK (BACK 6 YEARS)

In Manyata's House
On Dinning Table

ManVeer. Manyata's Dad And Uday's Aunt All Were On Dinning Table For Breakfast. Manyata's Father As Usual Was Eating A Toost Alongwith Tea. And Uday's Aunt Too But Was Having Omelet As She Believes Everyone Should Do Their Breakfast Heavy. And Manyata Was Eating Her Cereals Choco Balls And Uday Was Too Having Omelet... And Again Manyata Uday Chit Chat Was Started... And... Father: What U Too Were Doing Yesterday In The Middle Of Night... Rather To Sleep U Both Were Enjoying And Yeah Ur Boths Laughters. I Was Listening It All.

Manyata: Sorry Papa. Just Becox Of Me U Were Awake...
Father: Yuppp I Was Awake But U Know I Was Really Happy To Hear My Pariii Laughters...




($aying This Father To Daughter All Four Were Smiling. And Manyata Stood Up From The Seat And Back Hugged Her Father And Father With His Faced Kissed His Daughter's Forhead And)





Father: My Pariii. My Baby...





($aying This Again Father Kissed His Daughter's Forhead And Seeing This Uday Was Smiling A lot But It Was Of Short Lived... Then A Bell Ring. And Hearing The Bells Father.)





Father: Who It Could Be. Here In Morning. I Guess I Should Open The Door.




(After Saying This As He Stood Up And Was Going To Door To Open And To Check He Was Interrupted)




Manyata: Papaaa U Sit. And Give Me The Honours To Check.
Father: Okay Betaaa...





(After Listening This Manyata Broke The Hug And Stand Up And Walked Towards The Door And Without Asking Who Is It She Opens The Door And Saw Five-Men Standing And)





Manyata (To Five-Men): Yesss...





(Listening Manyata's Voice. One Of Them Didn't Reply Her..Infact One Of Them Pushed Manyata. And Seeing Manyata Pushed Uday And Manyata's Father And Uday's Aunt Stood Up From Their Chair Leaving Their Breakfast. And Manyata's Father Alongwith Uday Was Hell Angry At Certain Action. But Then Manyata's Father And Uday's Aunt Walked Towards The Five-Men And To Take Answers That Who Are They And How They Dare To Push Manyata. And On The Otherside Uday Was Looking At Five-Men Confusingly And)






Uday: Why Do I Feel I Know Them. Why Do I Feel And Hear Danger. And Who R They. Why I Feel That I Do Know Them And I Do See Them Somewhere. But Where... Uday.. THINK THINK THINK..






($aying This To Himself Uday Closed His Eyes And With All His Might He Tries To Remeber Them.. But Its All In The Vain. Meanwhile On Other Side Father Pointing His Index Finger To One Of Five-Men And..)





Father (With Anger): Who The Hell R U... And Why Did U Pushed My Daughter... Whats The Reason Of Urs Presence At My House..
Five-Men: Who R We.. U Very Well Knew About It Soon And Too Ours Presence At Ur House. And Pushing Ur Daughter Is That Its The Way We Treat Others...




(As Five-Men Said It Manyata's Father Was Hell Angry And He Was About To Call Cops That In A Second One Of Five-Men Took Out Revolver From His Pocket And Hit Manyata's Father Head.. And Seeing That ...)





Manyata (Shoutingly): Daddy...





(As Manyata Says It She Went To Her Daddy And Touching Her Daddy's Hand And...)





Manyata (In Tears): Daddy Plz Wake Up.. Plzzz Daddy...





(As Manyata Said It She Went On Crying... And Seeing Manyata Like This Uday's Aunt Came Runningly To Manyata And Was About To Hug Her That One Of The Five-Men Remembered Her And Then Suddenly He Pushed Uday's Aunt By His Foot... Then He In A Flash Shoot Uday's Aunt By Shooting 2 Bullets In Her Chest And Second Shoot Manyata's Dad By Shooting One Bullets And Too On His Head... Then All Five-Men Walk Towards Uday... And As They Were Walking However Manyata Got Couraged That She Wiped Her Tears And Came Infront Of Five-Men And..)





Manyata: I'm Sorry Uncles But I Can't Allow To Go Near To My Friend Uday..





(As Manyata Says It All Five-Men Laughs At Manyata's Statement Then...)





Five-Men: Really And Who Would Stop Us.. U..
Manyata (Angerly): Yes.. I Will Stop U...






(Saying This Manyata Was About To Do Something That One Of Five-Men Came Near To Manyata And Slighty Push Manyata And That Made Manyata Fall On Ground... So Again Five-Men Laughed On Her And Said..)





Five-Men (Now Angerly): The Person Who Can't Stop Herself From Falling Off And Says That She Would Stop Us.. How Ridiculous..




(After Saying This That Five-Men Put His Revolver On Front Of Manyata's Head... And...)





Five-Men (With Much Angerness): Stay Away From This Matter U Little Girl... And What Do U Think I Can't Harm U... But I Could Do It Dear I Would Shoot U And Would Be Happen Worst With U If U Won't Be Stay Away From This Matter.. And If U Do So I Shall Make A Promise That I Won't Harm U Unless I Did It With Ur Daddy.. And Choice Is Urs...





(As Manyata Listens It So For A While She Think Then Proudly..)





Manyata: Uncle My Father Said That Don't Ever Lay Down Infront Of Evilness And Don't Accept Defeat... So Uncle Whatever U Like U Do With Me.. But I Can't Stay Away And Uncle If U Left Me Alive So I Would Make That Happen That U All Rot In Jail...




(As Manyata Says Angerly.. Cause Five-Men To Laugh Largely... Then..)




Five-Men: Well I Must Say U R A Brave Child..
Manyata (Interrupting And Angerly): And U All Five Uncles R Very Bad And Very Very Evil...
Five-Men (Smilingly): True... And That Evilness Gives Us Power..
Manyata (Angerly): Taking Lives Of Peoples... And Separating Family Members From Each Gives U Power And Happiness But U Know What I Think... I Think U All R Mental Case.. And By Doing All This On The Day Of Jugdement U All Will Get Severe Punishment From Our God Who Have True Power..
Five-Men: Okay Dear We Would Get It And Would Love It... But Right Now U Will Enjoy Ur Punishment ..





(As Five-Men Said It To Manyata They Came Nearer And Nearer To Manyata And Was About To Shoot Manyata But Then Suddenly One Of Five Men Again Pushed Manyata Such That She Fall On Ground Very Badly... Then One Of Five-Men Targeted Uday And About To Press The Triger Button That Suddenly Manyata Hold Flower Vase And Hit That Man With Vase Shocking All Five-Men .. Then One Of Five Men Hold Manyata's Body And Then Got Signalled From The Head To Rape Her And Others Men Would Take Care Of Uday Not Wanting To See All This... So Two Of Five-Men Walked Towards Uday And After Taking Much Time To Remember Five-Men In A Flash Uday Opened His Eyes.. )




Uday: Nooo.. It Can't Be...






(And Was Hell Worried And Shocked To See Two Men Walking Towards Him. And One Of Five-Men Fainted Due To Got Hit By Flower Vase. And His Aunt And Manyata's Daddy Were Shooted And Were Lying On Floor Like Lifeless Body... And Left Of Two Of Five-Men Were Near To Manyata.. One Had Holded Manyata's Body And One Was Looking At Manyata Now With Lustful Eyes... Seeing The Scene Uday Was Confused Shocked And Worried That How In A Seconds It All Had Happened... Then He Saw Two Men Came To Him And He Thought For A Second Then Find Something ... Find Another Vase.. And In A Second He Saved Himself From Two Of Them... And On The Otherside Manyata Seeing Uday Like That She Was Happy But It Was Of Short-Lived As The One Of Five-Men Who Was Seeing Manyata And About To Rape Her Left Her And Went To Uday ... And One Of The Five-Men Who Had Holded Manyata Now Bind Her With Rope To Chair.. And Then After It He Put His Revolver In Air Then...





DISHKIYAOONNN ... DISHKIYAOOONNN...





Listening The Voice Of Shooting Uday Saw Himself As He Had An Idea Of Being Shooted ... So After Checking Himself He Was Happy That He Wasn't Shooted Then Suddenly He Heard Manyata's Voice Who Was Standing Left Of His Side...)




Manyata (In Pain): U...Ud...Udaa... Udaayyy...






(As Uday Heard Manyata's Painful Voice He Saw Manyata Who Had Taken Bullet To Save Him ... And Manyata Had Put Her Hand On Her Back Where She Was Shooted... Then She Removed Her Hand Pull Her Hand At Her Front And Saw That Her Hand Was Covered With Blood... And Was Walking Towards Uday With Pain And Uday Seeing All This He Was Shocked And Tears Starts Flowing Out From His Eyes... Then Again He Heard Gun Shot... But This Time One Of The Five Men Shoot Manyata On Her Chest From Back And Knees Causing Her To Fall On Ground... And Uday With His Wide Eyes And Tears Started Flowing Non-$top And Endlessly)





Uday (Crying): Nooo...




($aying This Uday Walked Towards The Manyata And Crying Alot Endlessly Continuously And Non-Stop And He Walked Towards Manyata Just To Be Hit And To Be UnConsicious. He Too Fall On The Ground But Still Was Consicious And Was Remebering All The Moments He Had Lived With The Manyata. And Seeing Manyata's Body Lying On The Floor And Tears Were Continuously Coming Out Of His Eyes. And Says With All The Pain




I LOVE YOU PRINCESS! I LOVE YOU PRINCESS.




Saying This He Too Closed His Eyes And Then All Things Went Black And Numb)


FLASHBACK ENDS





(As UV Remembered The Flashback Angerly He Threw All On The Items On Dressing Tables To Floor And That Causes Glasses Items To Broke... And In That Moment Incidently Manyata's Photo Frame's Glass Too Broke... And UV Saw It.. So He Bend His Knees And Sit On Floor... Took Manyata's Photo Frame In His Hand And Removed The Broken Pieces Of Glass From The Other End.. And ..)





UV (In Tears): Princess I Didn't Stop Ur Photo Frame Glass To Be Broken And Same Like That I Couldn't Be Able To Save U From The Goons... On That Day (Shootout) U Took Bullets And Misbehave With The Goons Only To Protect Me And Save Me When U Didn't Love Me... But I ... I.. I Love You I Should Save U And Protect U But I Didn't ...




(Then After Saying This UV Brought Manyata's Photo Frame Very Close To Heart .. And In Closed Eyes Cryingly... )






UV: Whyyy Didn't I Protect U... Whyyy I Came To Karachi... Whyy I Met U... Whyyy...





(After Saying This UV Goes On Crying Remembering His Childhood...)






In Islamabad, Pakistan
In Rathore's House
On Dinning Table
It Was Lunch Time.. And Briraj Rathore, Jaynandini Rathore, Komal Rathore, Mrinleni Devi Rathore And Vijayendar Rathore Was Sitting On Lunch Table And Was About To Start Lunch That...

Mrinleni Devi (To Briraj): Brij Where Is Mannie... Isn't She Doing Lunch With Us.. Briraj: I Don't Know Maa Sahib... Wait I Call Her..
Briraj (To Maid): Where Is Mannie.. I Guess She Might Be In Her Room So Go And Tell Her That Everyone Is Waiting For Her On Dinning Table..
Maid (With Head Down): G...





(As Maid Says It She Went To Mannie's Room But Didn't See Her.. So Maid Went To Dinning Table And Inform About It...)





Maid: Sir Sorry To Say I Didn't See Mannie Didi...
Mrinleni: Did U Checked Whole Room And Even Washroom.. Maid: G But I Didn't See Her... Mrinleni: Okayy Go And Do Ur Work..
Maid: G...




(Saying This Maid Left The Place To Continue Her Work.. And...)





Briraj (To Komal): Komal Did U See Mannie...
Komal: No In fact I Haven't Seen Her Since Morning...
Briraj: OK... But Where She Would Have Been Gone To...




(As Briraj Says It Vijayendar ..)




Vijayendar: Dad Don't Worry She Would Have Been In Room... Don't Worry I'll Go And Check Her... Briraj: Okayyy Beta...

(As Briraj Said It Vijay Stand Up From His Chair And Went To Mannie's Room...)






In Mannie's Room
As Vijay Stepped In Room So He...
Vijay: Mannie Bhai Where R U... Bhaiii...





(As Vijay Calls Mannie So He Didn't Receives Any Reply ... Then He Saw A Letter On Mannie's Dressing Table... And...)





Vijay: Letter...??? I Had To Check Whose Letter Is This And Why Is It On Mannie's Dressing Table...




(As Vijay Says It He Opened The Letter... And After Reading It He Was Shocked And Was AngryAfter Reading It.. Then Vijay Taking The Letter Went To Briraj..)







On Dinning Table
Vijay Angerly Comes From The Room And Gives Letter To Briraj Without Saying Any Word To Anyone...

Briraj: What's Is It..
Vijay (Angerly): Dad Plz Do Read It... A Letter From Mannie... Dad She Isn't Here... And Without Telling Us She Had Gone To Karachi...





(Listening This News EveryOne Stood Up From Their Chair And Briraj Shockingly..)





Briraj: Whattt...
Vijay: Yes Dad.. Plz Do Read It...




(As Vijay Says It He Handover The Letter To Briraj.. And Letter Says.)






LETTER

Dear Dad
Dad First Of All I Want To Say Sorry As U Would Be Finding Me As I'm Not Seen... And Will Be Worried For Me... As To Where I'm... And Where I'm Do I Take Care Of Myself Or Not... And U Always Says To Me Infact Scolds Me To Be Careful And Take Care Alot After That Incident... After That Incident U All Were There With Me When I Needed The Most My Family... And Through This Incident I Got To Know About U All.. That I'm Ur Lost Kidnapped Child...

And Dad That Incident Changed My Life Totally... Before I Like To Take Care Of Myself..But After That I Don't Paid Any Attention To My Health... When I'm ill I Don't Do Rest Neither I Could Take Care Of Myself... Its U Dad Maa Jay Vijay Bhai And Dadi Who Is Always With Me.. And Dad I Too Know This When I Got Single Scratched On My Body. Or I'm ill U R The One Who Take Care Of Me The Most.. And Loves Me The Most.. I Too Dad Love U All... But Still Dad I'm Afraid And Worried To Tell U That I'm Going To Karachi... Yess Dad Karachi... Sorry Dad Visiting To Karachi I Must Tell U.. But I Knew If I'm Going To Tell U So U Won't Be Allowing Me To Go... So I Decided Not To Tell U Other Than Writing A Letter...

And Dad I Can Assume After Reading My Letter At First U Would Be Happy That Since U Had Found Me I Never Shared My Feelings That What I Like And What I Dislike... Always I Say Yess To U As I Think U Had Full Right To Take Decision About Me.. And Talks To U All If Its Important Or Hmm About The Studies... I Never Talked To U Like Jay And Vijay Bhai Do... And After Finish Reading My Letter I'm Sure U Would Be Angry At Me... That Now Too I Haven't Discussed My Trip To Karachi... And U Would Be Thinking As I Have Given My All Rights As Father Wants From His Daughter So How Could I Not Tell U... But Dad U Know Na Its Tough Task For Me... So I Thought To Do It On My Own... And Dad Visiting Karachi Is Important.. As I Have To Take Someone's Decisions For Me... And Lastly Dad Plzzz Don't Be Worried As I Promise To Take Care Of Myself In Karachi.. And Plzz Forgive Me For Not Telling U...
Bye Dad...
Your Daughter Mannie






(As Briraj Read The Letter He Was Upset That How Much He Tried To Be Good Father For Mannie ... But He Didn't He Was Failed... Maybe Becox Of Silentness From Mannie... And After Reading The Letter...)





Briraj: Vijay Put This Letter On Mannie's Table... And Do Write At An End Of Letter That '' I HAD READ IT...''




(After Saying This Briraj Went To His Room Without Eating His Lunch Fully... Then Komal Followed Him As She Thinks What Mannie Must Have Written In Letter. And Where Is She.. And Whyyy Briraj Is Upset...)





In Briraj's Room
After Reading The Letter Briraj Came To His Room And Sat On His Bed With His Both Hands On His Head... And Komal Feeling She Followed Briraj And...

Komal: What Happened Briraj... Why U Seem So Upset To Me. And Where Is Mannie And What She Write In Letter That Makes U Upset And Vijay Angry...
Briraj: Komal Mannie Had Gone To Karachi... And Didn't Told Me As She Thinks I Might Be Angry And Won't Let Her To Go...





(As Briraj Says It Komal Placed Her Hand On Briraj's Shoulder Only To Be Removed By Briraj... And He Stood Up From Bed And Tears In His Eyes To Komal)





Briraj: Komal Am I Sounds Like Mad And Angry Father..




(As Briraj Says It Komal Too Stand Up.. And)




Komal: No Briraj... U R ...
Briraj (Interrupting): No Komal It Isn't True...If I'm Good Father Than Mannie Would Share Her Problems And Difficulties With Me... But No Never She Did It... And Take Any Time Or Thing Or Problem.. She Wants To Help Us But Don't Want To Help Herself... If She Got Injured. Or Something Is Bothering Her And Giving Pain She Never Tell Us... And See Now Samrat Wants To Marry Her Brought The Proposal... But She Just Said Yes Without Asking Me About Our Opinions And Related To His Life...
Komal: Brij Mannie Knows Him From When We Found Her ... Its Been Much Time So I Think Mannie Knows Him Alot And Thats Why She Didn't Tell Us... Questions Us...




(Walking Little Away From Komal)




Briraj: No Komal Its Not The Reason.. Mannie Was A Friend Of Samrat I Agree.. But Still She Always Maintained Silent Relation... Samrat Was Her Friend But She Didn't Talk To Him As Her Age Friends Do With Their Friends... Komal I Can Feel That Mannie Is Hiding Her True Feelings...




(Getting Close To Briraj)




Komal: And What R They...
Briraj: That Mannie Doesn't Want To Marry Him.. And Rest I Don't Know... But I Could Feel That Mannie Isn't Slightest Happy And Saying Yes Becox We Liked Him...





(As Komal Listens It She Placed Her Hand On Briraj's Shoulder ...And)






Komal: No Brij I Don't Think... I Know Mannie Always Maintained Silent And Far Relations With EveryOne Of Us... And If Her Heart Doesn't Happy For This New Relation... So Its Becox Mannie Never Give A Chance To Proof That How Much She Is Special For Us... Once She Got Married To Samrat Then She Would Realize That How Much Samrat Loves Her..
Briraj (Interrupting): I Know Komal... But I Have A Feeling That Mannie Won't Be Happy With Him... And When She Would Come From Karachi Then Again I Would Ask Her Opinion And Would Tell To Vijay And Samrat Family's...
Komal: Okay... And Briraj If Mannie Loves Someone Esle... And Afraid To Tell Us...
Briraj (Interrupting): Komal If U R Talking About That Childhood Boy So I Think After That Incident He Is Missing... And We Saw 2 Dead Bodies And 3 Unconsicious Males... And Still Mannie Is Disturbed After That Incident... And If Mannie Do Loves Someone Then Who He Might Be I Don't Care... If I Care Then That Is My Daughter Mannie's Happiness... With Whom She Is Happy I'm Happy... And If Mannie Isn't Happy And Feels Uncomfortable With Making New Relation With Samrat And How Much Samrat Loves Mannie My Daughter Still Won't Let Me To Marry My Daughter... Komal Mannie's Happiness Is Above From Alll...




(As Komals Listens Briraj Words For Mannie She Had Tears In Her Eyes By Seeing And Listening The Love Which Briraj Had For Mannie His Dearest Daughter...)




Komal: Don't Worry Briraj Everything Will Be Okayyy Soon... And What Decisions Might Mannie Takes Nothing Will Go Wrong With Her... As She Didn't Do Bad With Anyone... If She Does Then Its She Feels Others Pain And Helped Others To Take Out And To Remove Their Pains For Forever... Mannie Is A Pure Soul So Nothing Will Go Wrong...
Briraj: Yesss.. Komal (Questioningly: What Yess... If U Thinks The Same Then Stop Worrying.. And Stop Raising Ur Blood Pressure...
Briraj (Smilingly): Whattt..????
Komal: Yes Mr.What Now Take Care Of Urself.. And Save Ur Energy So That U Could Be Able To Take Care Of Us Especially Mannie... U Know Brij Sometimes I Feel Jealous With My Own Daughter Mannie Becox Since We Had Found Her Ur All Time Is For Mannie... And It Seems That U R A Mother For Mannie Who Thinks And Feels For Mannie That What Right Now She Might Be Thinking And Needing...
Briraj (Smilingly): Yess Komal... Its True... And Mannie Is My Life... My Sweet Innocent Bacha...And If Mannie Don't Like U Then I Would Marry To Someone Esle Whom Mannie Loves...
Komal (In Fake Anger): Whattt...????? Come I Show U ...





(After Saying This Komal Begin Running After Briraj... And Who Ever See Them Would Say That They Make A Lovely Couple... )






In London, UK
In Ruislip Shooting Area
In Uday's Vanity Van

Uday Was Remembering His Past Life Moments And Crying And Hugging Manyata's Photo Frame That Incidently He Saw Calendar Today's Date... And After Seeing It Suddenly He Wiped His Tears.. Stand Up... And Immediately Call Someone...

UV: Hiii Its UV Here Bella... I Want U To Buy Some Children's Gift.. Some Beautiful Flowers.. And A Big Chocolate Cake Written On It ''HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRINCESS'' ... And Do Decorate The ''EAST LONDON ORPHANAGE'' And With That Do Distribute Cakes Flowers And Gifts And 20 000 (Twenty Thousands Pound Cheque) To Each Orhpanages On My Behalf... And Do Buy As Much As Expensive Gifts As They R... And Don't Worry About The Money... How Much Money It Would Take Its Okay...But I Want The Bestest And Bestest For All... Is It Okay..
Bella (Smilingly): Yes Sir.. And Don't Worry I Would Do... And No One Could Get Idea Not The Media...No One Would Ever Get To Know About It That Who Did It... Sir It Was Is And Will Always Be A Secret... But Sir I Must Say That Lady Would Be Very Lucky As U Love Her Alots... Even She Isn't Alive But For Her Birthday U Never Missed A Chance For Making This Day A Very Special To All The Children Of London Orphanages...

UV (Smilingly): Thanks Bella... But I Do All This Becox I Love Making This Day Special... And Very Very Thank You For Helping Me Out Each Year For This Date...

Bella: Not At All Sir... Infact Sir I'm Lucky To See And To Arrange All This...
UV: Okayyy... And Bella Maybe I'll Be Late Tomorrow Reaching The ELO (East London Orphanage) So Do Take Care... Nothing Should Be Missed Out... Make It As Special And As Good U Can Do...

Bella: Don't Worry Sir I Will...




(Listening This UV Cut The Call... And Then Smilingly To Manyata's Photo Frame)




UV: Princess U R Not With Me..U Aren't Alive... But Birthday Day I Always Wanted To Make It Special Because On That Day My Love Was Born...




(Saying This UV Smiled And Kissed Manyata's Photo Frame)



CHAPTER ENDS

Edited by Twinkle_alisha - 7 years ago
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Hmmm...u knw wht appi i was waiting very eagrly whn would u post this chap.so finally u hv posted...n as always the chap is very interesting...nd feeling so good tht uday making special her loves bday...bt im very curious to knw wht will hpn with mannie in karachi.plzzz update as soon.as possible...
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awsome, it's a flashback chappy, i think.😊 uv's love 4 manyata is so much. will be waiting 2 know wht will happen 2 alishaba. thanks 4 continuing😃
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